solitare99 posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 11:42am

I can't believe I'm saying this, but I like your Naruto stories better than your Harry Potter stories. And I loved Hope and Happily Ever After.

bakapervert posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 10:15am

Good story. THe romance is good. And you write a great battle between two S-rank ninja. Though I think it's OOC for NAruto to destroy entire village or clan because some ninja in there threaten his precious person.

forrestgreen117 posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 9:29am

Awesome story. I'm not normally a fan of one-shots, but you did this one a lot of justice. Thank you for writing.

jayjons posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 6:54am

Awesome! Kick-ASS!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 5:59am

"...first female ninja with two entires..." -> entries

Fun story, it's great to see that you're still writing once in a while. Hope you're enjoying it.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

iamjmph01 posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 4:54am

so... wow thanks! Awesome Christmas gifts! I was very excited to find Legion and Dawn updated... and then this awesome story on top of it... really thank you very much, i started reading on this site because of This Means War and im pretty much still here because of you and Bobmin... thank your for continuing to give of your time so we can have awesome new stories to read(and reread multiple times) most of the new fanfic out now a days is crap so, i eagerly await your work

goddessa39 posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 4:52am

I am not a fan of Naruto/Hanabi. I like Hinata too much and read fics where she grows a backbone. However, seeing as you were the author and your stuff is awesome, and I am happily addicted to Konoha's Legion, well, even if I didn't want to I would read this.

I love it anyway!

CyberCrisis1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 4:44am

I just love what you done with this fanfic and hope to see more like it in the future.

Zaxxon posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 3:17am

Wow. That is a very good, believable Naruto+Hanabi fic. And a very good Naruto characterization as well.

Thank you for writing and sharing this with us.

Orion posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 3:03am

Great! Thanks for writing.

Sardor posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 10:25pm

Great fun to read story I found after I checked the Latest updates and found out I missed one, I will go back there momentarily to see if there is anything else I missed ;)

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 10:06pm

Great story. Thank you for posting!

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 9:57pm

The first time I've read this pairing, and it will be hard to find a better version. Well done.

Thank you & wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

Genericrandom posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 8:42pm

Everything I was hoping for when you mentioned you had something like this in the works.

I particularly liked your portrayal of Naruto, as I really think that's what Kishimoto's aiming for as Naruto grows up. He's still crazy, and a goof, but he's a grown up and matured goof. The rest I attribute to your portrayal of Hanabi, who also makes a lot of sense based on what we know of the Hyuuga.

Just good stuff, start to finish. I foresee rereading this many times in the future.

delrusant posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 7:49pm

Great one shot

Chris1 posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 7:04pm

Wooooo! Awesome! It's always good to see a Jeconais!character.