JAGfan posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 11:41am

Me too! It's rare when I laugh so much reading a fanfic.:-)

And it's really a pity it's abandoned. :-( Is there perhaps a way we can persuade you to finish it? ;-)

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 11:40am

That said, i loved it!
hence the peevedness...

jaques posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 11:39am

i agree with your reason. it's not the usual harry potter fic that you would write. it's just so smooth with no conflict. harry and melissa seems o be so perfect. but nonetheless it really is a great read. you are only the author that would write stories with abandoned under the title and people would read it. hope to read more of your stories soon. take care.

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 11:38am

arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOO NOT ENOUGH CLOSURE!
i am very peeved....

Rufus posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 11:24am

"Chata wnow kong bantha poodoo."

ROTFL

Excellent really... I laugh so much I'm crying...

Panaka posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 11:24am

ROFL

CaptainG posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 11:13am

It's good work, and I enjoyed it, but i wasn't altogether too fond of the perspective. Maybe it would have been improbved through beta etc, but there were a few moments of inconsistency in the narration.

The thing that really gets me is that you keep me waiting for all the other stories that are 'Finished and Ready to Post' as according to your post in April. Im gagging for something to read here - post a few of them up please :)

Jon posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 10:11am

yay First!
Great, though its a pity its abandoned..