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Rick D Gale posted a comment on Monday 4th February 2013 4:51pm for Part 2

Good to see you continue this story. It's extreamly interesting and different from about anything else that I've seen.

Not a lot to say about it - just a very good chapter. As far as Harry kissing Snape, I viewed it more as a 'welcome to the clan' type of rite than anything else. Kinda like what you'd expect the Godfather to do to a new member of the Mob. Ya know, Good fellas.

I look forward to your next chapter.

rdgale

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 4th February 2013 8:55am for Part 2

Outstanding chapter!!!! I was starting to worry you'd forgotten us oh master of the chapters!!!! Will we get to see the birthday and everything that happens in year 4??

starkid posted a comment on Monday 4th February 2013 4:12am for Part 2

Again, I am enthralled with this masterpiece you have created, and will continue reading it until the end.

LooneySlytherin posted a comment on Monday 4th February 2013 3:44am for Part 2

soooooo does this mean there is no tales of a fifth year I would love one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Luan Mao posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 10:20pm for Part 2

Anyone who was upset about that "potentially offensive" kiss needs to be kicked repeatedly in the crotch until the only thing to be done is to convert him to a her. Sheesh.

Jason9 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 8:51pm for Part 2

Another great story - thanks for updating so much in the past couple of days. This is another very entertaining story, and still very original. Keep up the great work!

delrusant posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 7:32pm for Part 2

great chapter with more insight into the workings and the behaviours of the different protagonist the way everything mesh on the psychological side reminds me of "Ender's game".

thanks for the hard work

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 6:47pm for Part 2

Very good chapter

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 6:26pm for Part 2

The kiss did seem a bit pontless. Really the european kiss on the cheeks would have worked better I think. The feeling was just off on it. Great chapter otherwise, nice to see things progress and I loved the ending.

Tenchifew posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 6:23pm for Part 2

Brilliant story, excellent chapter.

The Greece parts were very interesting, as was the characterization of Narcissa.

looking forward to the birthday party.

thank you for writing.

EricMyerson posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 5:59pm for Part 2

here are some of the grammatical and word issues I found (sorry I didn't point them out in the previous review):

“His son, soon be the that I always wanted.” Harry banished theed slowly. “Voldemort,” Severus said at and he knew that Narcissa was similar attire. and from a different price. and all that entrails.” “Does a one speak Greek?” They’re starting with tabular rosa , entered the room Harry had existed.

each line is a separate oops...

Nights Silhoutte posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 5:10pm for Part 2

A good chapter, keep it up.

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 4:48pm for Part 2

A very good chapter in places.

I did not like breakfast with the Weasley’s Harry and Wednesday now seem too nice I liked them when they were more standoffish and not eating the same food as others.

I did like the Horcrux hunt and what was said about being unoriginal. The spell Hermione used but Daphne had the most style.

A smart way to deal with the curse on the ring.

I liked the line “If you are truly powerful, you need not worry about losing your power, it’s only if your power is based on a fallacy.”

“Wednesday supposedly preferring blondes” was good too.

The conversation Narcissa had was most informative to the state of the magical world the art of conversation was a really nice detail to include.

A drunk vampire seems so funny to me.

A perfect Slytherin line “pragmatism and realism. True heroism was for Gryffindors, and was why they led the tally in receiving posthumous honours.”

The fate of Draco is a brilliant one but as you sat nature VS nurture it would be good to have an answer.

Talking to the dead is such a smart idea they would know so much and be so helpful and considering the number Riddle has killed many of the dead would want to help or get revenge.

A good point about riddles versus a yes or no.

I liked finding out how Harry was saved and how he became an Addams, the price the Potter’s paid was high but fair. I am pleased Harry is angry he has much to be angry about but with closure of some sort he can’t be manipulated by their memory as he often was in the books. I liked how selfish James was as that is understandable and honest. I hope there will be no forgiveness for Albus ever

I am surprised the Potter’s did not haunt Sirius for his last prank on them.

A thoughtful end to the chapter I liked what Gomez said.

The kiss was not my favourite part but it did serve a purpose and creates such a powerful and unique bond. Molly does need to be more open minded but I still don’t like her, but her daughter has great spirit.

Thanks for this chapter I look forward to the next.

arapto1984 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:36pm for Part 2

You have one Greek question mark followed by an English one and the capital E in the middle of the sentence really serves no purpose. Other than that your Greek is fine. Definately not an insult.

lancelw posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 2:42pm for Part 2

Nice. thank for the update. love this story. one of my fav of all time.

again. thank you.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 2:29pm for Part 2

Good to see another soul piece down. Fun to read about how each member helped in moving through the traps. Thanks for sharing!

EricMyerson posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 2:09pm for Part 2

The story was good as usual, but there were some spots where it looked as if whole words or parts of sentences were missing, and some incorrect words used. You need to have a word with your beta....

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 1:42pm for Part 2

An interesting and well written development of the various characters and their viewpoints.

Galen Salvatore posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 1:26pm for Part 2

As always, an excellent addition - even if I do feel sorry for James and Lily, now - and I look forward to the next. Thank you for your time and effort.

Amamama posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 12:34pm for Part 2

You made my Sunday, know that? To different fics updated, it's been a blessedly unproductive morning. And really, this is fun. I really like the explanations you weave in, why they all behave the way they do. Now, I love black pudding (and black pancakes - I do make crepes with blood, it's incredibly tasty), does that make me a relative of Marus? *grin*