Celexs posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 1:47am

I like the idea of them being tested by Pinhead, Evil Be Thou My God was an amazing story and if you are going to use that character I cant wait to see what you have planned next.

Cel

Darreal posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 1:23am

Enjoyable as always and looking forward to the next installment.

cah11 posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 12:29am

great update, this is most definatly an interesting story, glad to see that Harry and Wednesday are not completely the top of the food chain. Update soon!

mcgurrin posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 12:12am

I like it and hope you can keep your goal schedule. Especially with the cliff hanger

bkfriend posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 12:01am

I can only think of one thing to say... Well worth the wait! Thank you for sharing your works.

Wolf550e posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 8:59pm

"we ended up in Cairo, where we were arrested for being terrorists. Gomez defended us with a hangover, and before we knew it, we’d been deported to Africa" - your wording suggests you may be confused about the location of Cairo.

Celevon posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 8:50pm

Bravo! I really liked this chapter!

gadriam posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 8:06pm

Bravo! Bravo! Maestro!
Darker, yes, but with an impressive dramatic flair that honestly surprised me. The comedy is still there, just a bit more understated and more present in the dialog than in slapstick situations. I thoroughly enjoyed Wednesday's explanation of her appearance. If said without any inflection, it would be hilarious in a rather chilling way.
Take all the time you need. It is said that the finest fruits takes the longest time to ripen.

Thank you!

g

William Fowler posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 7:56pm

I've read 'Evil Be Thou My Good' and it scared the crap out of me, so yeah, I freaked when I realized who and what was going on. Still, I've enjoyed the wait for this chapter of the ongoing adventures of Wednesday and Harry, so thank you for the update.

I enjoyed the update, it sets up the third year quite nicely, and even sets up a pairing that I don't think I've ever seen before, in Severus/Narcissa, so I will look forward to that.

Have a great day, and thanks,
William

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 7:20pm

Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to see what happens since they took the potion!!!! Will we get to see what Harry and Wednesday see while under the potions effects???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 7:19pm

That was surreal. Of course, that's the point.

> "You’ve been appointed to defend that nasty Mr Jackson."
*amused grin* I don't know if you meant who I'm thinking, but that does make for a good one-liner.

Much darker than usual, but you warned us. Still, enjoyable read.

silenceberry posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 6:32pm

Yeah! A new chapter and like the other two it was great. I am happy to know that you have taken up the story again. I cannot wait for the second chapter. Love it!

The Seeker posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 6:28pm

Well, I've finally come out of the shadows in order to review this fabulous start to the kids' third year. You are absolutely on top of your game with this chapter. Your Snape is one I've not seen before, where you've retained the ascerbic wit but made him considerate, a good mate, and finally, a teacher. Harry and Wednesday, especially in her two iterations, remain incredible characters. The secondary players are well dilineated and come to life on the screen. The humor used was among the best you've ever done, and it's well integrated into the chapter. I don't know Pinhead at all, so I really can't comment on him, other than to say he's as scary as hell. Brilliant start to their third year.

Alex00 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 6:23pm

Great stuff

Davideg posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 5:51pm

thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter please update again a.s.a.l.a.

supergirl3684 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 5:43pm

Too great to see this up! Pinhead scared me! I kinda wished *I* had, had a calming potion! I thought this was brillaint. I liked how you had Wednesday showing emotions for Harry. The conversation about Harry was nicely done too. Harry's abilities are something I've wondered about and I know you've hinted towards that question in the other two as well. I can't wait for the next part!

Kaerion posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 5:21pm

This update was a very nice surprise, and I'll keep my fingers crossed, hoping that your planned schedule will work out. I'm honestly surprised at how accurately you managed to portray Pinhead, and how much you did him justice, considering how little screen-time he had, but that's just yet another example, in a long line of them, of how you've positively surprised me with the quality of your writing.

Other than that, you still have an excellent grasp of the characters, and your writing is still as enjoyable as it's always been. Thanks for sharing, and keep up the great work!

morriganscrow posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 5:07pm

Wow!

This seamless blending of several worlds is brilliant, and I love it.

Dustin Hoeppner posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 4:32pm

Very good keep on writing.

Snag posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 4:15pm

Dammit. Now I have the Hellraiser tune stuck in my head. Curse you!

I liked the 'normal Wednesday' notion that she'd act like a regular girl for Harry's birthday.