By Jeconais
Reviews
Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Friday 27th August 2010 3:22am
Shakes head......now that's a birthday party! I suspect though that Pinhead will want them to win his challange; if only for the fact that they'd create more mayhem as the eventual heads of the Addams family. Many thanks for an intriguing chapter! :)
David Thacker posted a comment on Friday 27th August 2010 3:03am
This was a great chapter. I liked the stuff with Pinhead that was really great. I hope the new story I found that has Harry/Hermione/Wednesday together gets more to it.
jgkitarel posted a comment on Friday 27th August 2010 1:58am
Nice chapter, though it's nice to know that even Harry and Wednesday aren't immune to fear. Pinhead does leave an impression, and he manages to give me nightmares as an adult.
Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 27th August 2010 1:15am
Well written chapter
BrotherBludgeon posted a comment on Thursday 26th August 2010 10:45pm
Epic, truly. It feels like the only disappointment I'm likely to feel from this story is that it ends with fourth year, and that's not nearly far enough into puberty.
keichan2 posted a comment on Thursday 26th August 2010 6:44pm
Thanks for the new chapter!
You raised many questions, and while I know some won't be answered in the next part, I hope you will before you end this series!
I hope to read what happens to them soon!
Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 26th August 2010 6:10pm
Very nice. The concept of an amiable Snape is possibly the scariest thing here. Thanks for playing "Wake the Dead" with the Addams Family. W.
Chiyo posted a comment on Thursday 26th August 2010 1:53am
Just... amazing. Fantastic work and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Always look forward to more from this fantastic series. Pinhead was a nice surprise actually though I hope hes not too much of a recurring character.
Just the same them knocking out Voldemort to feed to him as a new plaything would make a great omake or one-shot. Oh the screams...
William Lack posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 10:49pm
Amazing, you are a talented story teller - you brought a tear to my eye as you described the meeting with Pinhead, the unspoken pain and suffering in the background was a little chilling... great story and I love the Severus view point. Can't wait for more
kb0 posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 10:04pm
Great! A new chapter in this series. :) A fun insight into the Adams family as a whole. You're right that telling the tale thru the eyes of Snape does have some limitations, but it's working for you so far. Not sure about Pinhead, I hope that you wanting to work that in doesn't destroy the story in some way, but you're the author so I'm sure you can find a way out of that. :) I look forward to the next update! Thanks for sharing.
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:56pm
Excellent work. Loved the scene with Pinhead, he's underused in fiction for good reason.
Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:25pm
A great story, cannot wait for the next instalment
Orion posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:03pm
Wow. You weren't kidding when you said this would be darker. But it's great! This is a great read and I look forward to seeing where it goes from here. Thanks for writing!
GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 11:36am
Wicked!
The party was great. Not only the way Wednesday acts for Harry but Pinhead showing up - scary yet fitting. :D The first part, the interaction between Severus and Molly ... DAMN that was unnatural. :D Freaked me out more then Pinhead. :))
joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 10:35am
Interesting.
Thanks for the update.
KirijamaScion posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 7:41am
Wow I'd almost forgotten this story. But yes yes more please!
Tlcatlady posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:31am
I like the newer, softer side of Severus.
Harry and Wednesday are the most intriguing characters. I'm so glad you updated this story because, even though it's been a while since I read the previous portion, it was simple to fall back into the story and characterizations you've created.
Great job! Now I can't wait to see what happens with that potion . . .TLC
Jonez227 posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:05am
hot damn i could kiss you. i have been waiting forever to read the next part and here it is. you were right. almost no comedy and darkish in nature. i do hope that that won't be the case for the entire year. thank you for updating though. this is one of the few stories i continuously watch for updates and they all drive me more insane than i really am. can't wait to read what happens with the potion.
Edward Becerra posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 3:41am
A wonderful chapter, and Captain Spencer's arrival took me completely by surprise. Should Harry and Wednesday live to be adults, the Wizarding world will forever regret crossing them.
As for that twit Riddle... I suspect that if he survives what Harry and Wednesday do to him - however unlikely such survival might be! - he'll have a date with Pinhead and the rest of the Cenobites.
After all, what better gift to give them than a fool who fancies himself a Dark Lord?
VERY enjoyable, if dark. Thank you for this chapter.
Sincerely,
Ed Becerra
Katsuhito posted a comment on Friday 27th August 2010 12:24pm