Perfect Slytherins - Tales From The Third Year
Part 3
By Jeconais
Reviews
rolalinii posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 3:26pm for Part 3
another great addition to an already great story, i can't wait for the next portion.
OdinMage posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 3:25pm for Part 3
I love you! More updates so close to the last ones, of 3 of my favourite stories/series of.... EVER. I hope you keep writing and updating this fast!
Slytherin66 posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 2:08pm for Part 3
Amazing chapter with lots of action and great twists and lines.
I like Kingsley good line "I swear that I need to install some brooms by the gate so I don’t have to run. I’m positive that the distance is getting longer."
Marcus had such nice things to say about Minerva given how she acts she could do with a man to help her relax a bit given how she commanded him and ran after him it looks like Marcus will get to test his assumption on Minerva’s prowess.
Well said by Daphne to Albus and one of the great mysteries has been solved lemon drops are nasty I hope Harry gets to kill Albus it would be for the greater good, poison, shock or heart attack would do.
A great battle/massacre at the Ministry it’s always good to see the Death Eaters loose and die and Marcus did get a snack for all his hard work. Hermione will make a good addition to the clan and being part of such a powerful family will allow her to achieve her potential.
A big surprise about Sirius but I am glad he is free and enjoying life.
I hope Molly causes trouble for Albus with Mr. Weasley nearly being killed and would have been if not for the Addams clan.
Pugsley summed up the prophecy perfectly "That’s it"
Thanks for giving Snape a punch I thought it was for his part in the Dark Lord knowing some of the prophecy but to get closer to Narcissa is good too.
A fantastic way to deal with Fudge and the Dementor, Albus knocked out twice was a bonus. Wednesday unleashed was good and a nice twist from the usual where Harry has to destroy the Dementors or do all the killing and it does make Wednesday happy which is always good.
"Patronus cannon balls," a clever idea Sirius will be sad he missed all the fun and Dementor’s destruction. "Expecto Illumini!" was good too.
Amelia is full of surprises but as someone who was considered formidable by Tom Riddle she had to be more than a good Auror.
Molly was a surprise but saving her husband would make her more grateful, open minded and less loyal to Albus.
Harry a powerful or a great leader a good and fun question/argument.
A nice human moment from Pugsley needing a cry and a potion to deal with all that has happened. A good insight into the group structure and the place people hold.
A very good line to end the chapter, thanks for this one I look forward to the next.
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 1:55pm for Part 3
Another excellent chapter. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Albus has always talked about death being just the next great adventure... I wonder if he would seek out Pinhead once he learns what he really is.
bonnie posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 1:48pm for Part 3
great update. Love this story.
DrT posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 12:32pm for Part 3
A very powerful chapter, no doubt about that! Good use of Pinhead and showing the future clan leader in action. Dumbledore was quite useless; good job! I wonder, since Harry has declared hom irrelevent, if Dumbledore will keep blundering on, or try and fail to redeem himself
Tumshie posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 12:17pm for Part 3
Wonderful, and a very nice ending for Fudge.
dezzal posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 11:52am for Part 3
awesome chapter,i look forward to fourth year with the TwT. im guessing that harry will have to compete and that mabye we might see what he can do.
forrestgreen117 posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 11:09am for Part 3
One of the things I like best about this is that it is told from Severus' point of view. Harry and Wednesday are obviously the protagonists, and they are utterly beyond understanding and reason. So it makes total sense to have someone else relate the story as best they can.
Zamia posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 10:58am for Part 3
Excellent. Harry showing his soft side for Sev. Who would have thought that. Loved Marcus & Minerva. Good pair. Nice to see Daphne added to the clan. 2 best points - Albus being told to think of retirement and Molly actually acknowledging change. Bloody good read. Cheers.
Z
Sardor posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 9:36am for Part 3
Nice new chapter! Would you consider linking the different years together so one could go from year one to the current latest without going to the main fiction page?
Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 9:35am for Part 3
Wonderful. The dance of dementor death was great. Thanks for writing. W.
Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 9:29am for Part 3
i love this story thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue a.s.a.l.a.
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 9:04am for Part 3
Damn that's good. Wow. I'll digest it for a while and get back to you. Just...wow.
Andrew2 posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 8:42am for Part 3
Ridiculously superlative.
Thank you for writing and for continuing to write.
Your efforts are incredibly appreciated.
Priyansh posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 7:48am for Part 3
At last, 3rd year came... :D :D Would really like t0 see Harry going all out once and show why he's d clan-leader! :D :D
Waiting for next update!
Zicou posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 7:42am for Part 3
Lol totally crazy :D
Continuuuuuuuuuuuuuue,
Z.
btwood posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 7:40am for Part 3
Boom. Three years down. I love a good extermination to end my night!
potterfrkintx posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 7:24am for Part 3
Hell yeah! I Love the black pope!
00_Knight posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2011 4:13pm for Part 3