red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:09am for Part 2

Thanks for the update, and a very enjoyable chapter. I'm going to have to re-read the story because I don't remember Lucius being sent to Azkaban, but that won't exactly be a hardship *GRIN* Now I'm off to read Hogwarts Dawn

red

mrrlyn posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:50am for Part 2

Yet another awesome chapter. How much begging would we have to do to get more!?!

madrymon posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:28am for Part 2

Thanks, I love this story line, I just wish it was done so I know what will eventually happen.

Frederick Herriot posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:27am for Part 2

It is good that Severus is being allowed to expand his horizons and break away from the overwhelming controls Albus forced on the man. It makes him more human in the end and will make him far more acceptable to the Addams dynasty that Harry and Wednesday are moving to create.

Interesting scene with Daphne as well; she's waking up to the new power in the world and wants a piece of it. Lucky thing Severus was there to warn her of the potential price she might pay if she challenges Wednesday.

And amazingly enough, Ron and Percy show small signs of developing brains.

john17 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:22am for Part 2

Its well written, but would be alot nicer if as Snape and Remus said, if Harry did something :S

Hope the next chapter is not as long a wait as this one was:S

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:00am for Part 2

Great chapter. I was pleased to find this in my inbox. I like Snape's observations and attitude, though I wouldn't mind a little peek at Albus pouting and jealous :)

Clell65619 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:59am for Part 2

- absolutely marvelous, as usual. You have produced the most believable 'Not an Ass' Severus Snape I've ever read.

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:58am for Part 2

A great chapter, keep it up.

David Najarian posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:34am for Part 2

Excellent chapter as always. Anxiously waiting for the next update. One note: I thought I caught a word that was misspelled, but spelled correctly so a spell check would not have tripped. On reading it a second time, I was unable to find it, but I do think its still there.

Addlcove posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:24am for Part 2

very much looking forward to the next update :)

Meg posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:21am for Part 2

Oh, yay, how I love this story!

I think you kept great pace on character development in this part, more through Sev's thoughts than through the "action" scenes. Those were a good read as well, but I never thought I'd get so much enjoyment from so much "tell".

Thank you so much, Tim! Off to read HD now. :)

Meg

Tenhawk posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:17am for Part 2

ok, now this was good. Don't get me wrong, I loved the other two posts today as well, but this one had more than just a string of compelling scenes... it had plot development, character development, and all kinds of goodies. Ironically, when I saw what new posts you'd made, this was the one I was least interested in and read last. Shows what I know. Fantastic work.

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 11:55pm for Part 2

A fine chapter. I bet Remus will learn from Harry how to teach the patronis charm, though he probably couldn't do a hundred or more in a day. Thank you so much for providing another sojurn in this wonderful story. W.

DrT posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 11:37pm for Part 2

An interesting chapter, lots of character development hidden away here. Certainly building excitment for the next installment

Chris1 posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 10:26pm for Part 2

Very, very nice :D Looking forward to seeing Daphne's reaction to the price :)

Davideg posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 9:56pm for Part 2

i love this story thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter please contine to update a.s.a.l.a.

nothorse posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 9:47pm for Part 2

Wow. Double Jeconais day. What a wonderful way to avoid going to bed.

Thanks.

Brandon West posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 8:29pm for Part 2

I'd almost given up hope seeing an update to this. But it was worth every minute of the wait.