dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:56pm for Part 1

Excellent work. Loved the scene with Pinhead, he's underused in fiction for good reason.

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:25pm for Part 1

A great story, cannot wait for the next instalment

Orion posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:03pm for Part 1

Wow. You weren't kidding when you said this would be darker. But it's great! This is a great read and I look forward to seeing where it goes from here. Thanks for writing!

GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 11:36am for Part 1

Wicked!
The party was great. Not only the way Wednesday acts for Harry but Pinhead showing up - scary yet fitting. :D The first part, the interaction between Severus and Molly ... DAMN that was unnatural. :D Freaked me out more then Pinhead. :))

joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 10:35am for Part 1

Interesting.
Thanks for the update.

KirijamaScion posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 7:41am for Part 1

Wow I'd almost forgotten this story. But yes yes more please!

Tlcatlady posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:31am for Part 1

I like the newer, softer side of Severus.

Harry and Wednesday are the most intriguing characters. I'm so glad you updated this story because, even though it's been a while since I read the previous portion, it was simple to fall back into the story and characterizations you've created.

Great job! Now I can't wait to see what happens with that potion . . .TLC

Jonez227 posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 5:05am for Part 1

hot damn i could kiss you. i have been waiting forever to read the next part and here it is. you were right. almost no comedy and darkish in nature. i do hope that that won't be the case for the entire year. thank you for updating though. this is one of the few stories i continuously watch for updates and they all drive me more insane than i really am. can't wait to read what happens with the potion.

Edward Becerra posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 3:41am for Part 1

A wonderful chapter, and Captain Spencer's arrival took me completely by surprise. Should Harry and Wednesday live to be adults, the Wizarding world will forever regret crossing them.

As for that twit Riddle... I suspect that if he survives what Harry and Wednesday do to him - however unlikely such survival might be! - he'll have a date with Pinhead and the rest of the Cenobites.

After all, what better gift to give them than a fool who fancies himself a Dark Lord?

VERY enjoyable, if dark. Thank you for this chapter.

Sincerely,

Ed Becerra

Celexs posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 1:47am for Part 1

I like the idea of them being tested by Pinhead, Evil Be Thou My God was an amazing story and if you are going to use that character I cant wait to see what you have planned next.

Cel

Darreal posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 1:23am for Part 1

Enjoyable as always and looking forward to the next installment.

cah11 posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 12:29am for Part 1

great update, this is most definatly an interesting story, glad to see that Harry and Wednesday are not completely the top of the food chain. Update soon!

mcgurrin posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 12:12am for Part 1

I like it and hope you can keep your goal schedule. Especially with the cliff hanger

bkfriend posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 12:01am for Part 1

I can only think of one thing to say... Well worth the wait! Thank you for sharing your works.

Wolf550e posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 8:59pm for Part 1

"we ended up in Cairo, where we were arrested for being terrorists. Gomez defended us with a hangover, and before we knew it, we’d been deported to Africa" - your wording suggests you may be confused about the location of Cairo.

Celevon posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 8:50pm for Part 1

Bravo! I really liked this chapter!

gadriam posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 8:06pm for Part 1

Bravo! Bravo! Maestro!
Darker, yes, but with an impressive dramatic flair that honestly surprised me. The comedy is still there, just a bit more understated and more present in the dialog than in slapstick situations. I thoroughly enjoyed Wednesday's explanation of her appearance. If said without any inflection, it would be hilarious in a rather chilling way.
Take all the time you need. It is said that the finest fruits takes the longest time to ripen.

Thank you!

g

William Fowler posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 7:56pm for Part 1

I've read 'Evil Be Thou My Good' and it scared the crap out of me, so yeah, I freaked when I realized who and what was going on. Still, I've enjoyed the wait for this chapter of the ongoing adventures of Wednesday and Harry, so thank you for the update.

I enjoyed the update, it sets up the third year quite nicely, and even sets up a pairing that I don't think I've ever seen before, in Severus/Narcissa, so I will look forward to that.

Have a great day, and thanks,
William

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 7:20pm for Part 1

Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to see what happens since they took the potion!!!! Will we get to see what Harry and Wednesday see while under the potions effects???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 7:19pm for Part 1

That was surreal. Of course, that's the point.

> "You’ve been appointed to defend that nasty Mr Jackson."
*amused grin* I don't know if you meant who I'm thinking, but that does make for a good one-liner.

Much darker than usual, but you warned us. Still, enjoyable read.