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wuoreb posted a comment on Friday 22nd January 2010 1:16am for Part 2

Great second chapter. I'm excited to ready what comes next. I do like reading from Snape's perspective, very interesting.

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 22nd January 2010 1:04am for Part 2

WoW, another Marvelous chapter, even though you apparently didnt like it!?! Well for starters I believe I might have mention in the previous chapter that I at first didnt like this chapter either but it grew on me, and after this here chapter I would have to say I do like the way it all turned out, and I am definitely looking forward to Year 3 and on....and maybe just maybe a miracle will happen and you will post year three this year, hell maybe even before summer starts!!!! hell it might happen, it cant hurt especially with another MIRACLE that has happened and that was kinsfire has posted two chapters of his new story in the last two days even, MIRACLE I SAY!!!

dakinumas posted a comment on Friday 22nd January 2010 12:27am for Part 2

hmmm...Wednesday blamed Umbridge for her personal mistake? She was the one who supposed to know Harry.

amulder posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 11:55pm for Part 2

Who would Harry and Wednesday bow to? Each other!

This is one of the most interesting portrayals of Snape that I've read. Great job.

Harry refusing presents at Christmas is an interesting character trait. Wednesday allowing Umbridge to use the quill was puzzling and seemed wrong for how they've been portrayed.
Ginny is still a puzzle, and I'm looking forward to a bit more explanation there.
Ron is... a bit of a one-trick pony, and I hope he grows up. Percy certainly won't change much, will he?
Draco being emasculated is a bit extreme, but it was well done how he was basically absent from the entire chapter.... so much so that I was genuinely surprised when he showed up there at the end.

Albus being essentially sidelined is rather humourous and I look forward to seeing that play out.

Thanks for the work, Tim
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pfeil posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 11:48pm for Part 2

Who they'd bow to is what I was wondering too...

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 11:44pm for Part 2

For a chapter that you are unhappy about, I found it a most enjoyable read. Thank you.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 11:33pm for Part 2

- Ok, I absolutely love the idea that they can call Lurch from within Hogwarts. I don't recall that happening in the three previous chapters, but that was absolutely brilliant. "You Rang?"

- Your humanizing of Snape continues to go well.

- All in all a fantastic story.

Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 10:50pm for Part 2

There is a "your" that should be "yours" when Tom responds to Dracon in the Diary.

"Imperio," Riddle shouted, this time pointing at Pugsley.

"I am a zombie," Pugsley said, raising his hand and climbing off the cannon. "Must eat brains."


Absolutely BRILLIANT :D

Chris