sunrisesunset posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 7:48am

I think I like this story more, already, than HEA. It just exudes this sweet sense of impending doom. Very intriguing, and certainly entertaining.

At some point, I expect Draco or somebody else insinuate that the Addams family is descended from some kind of dark creatures. Wednesday, of course, would straighten them right out: everybody knows that it's the other way around. ^^

maddogxxiii posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 7:44am

3 easy words.... I LOVE IT... can't wait till the next chapter.

Maxence posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 7:35am

Oh what a wonderful fairy tayle :)
Thanks i really like it :)

Bob Joyce posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 7:26am

LOL tough to continue though.

JaneJack posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 6:54am

It's really good ! I like it better than Happily Ever After. I like cold powerfull alouf Harry ^^
Will it always be Severus' point of vue ?
JJ

Ps: Sorry, english is not my native language.

FireFairy posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 6:53am

Please I hope this isn't a one-shot! I love this! Please update this again soon! Thanks so much!

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 6:44am

Wow....

Okay, that was a VERY dark Harry and Wednesday - but then again it fit very well! I rather enjoyed their treatment of both Malfoy AND Weasley. Muahahahahahahahahaha.

I wonder if darling Bumbledore realizes what he got himself into?

JP posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 6:44am

Oh good god that was funny. I aprticularly like your "blank" Harry who scares the crap out of Hats. Many thanks, jp

Steven cornwall posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 6:34am

Making Draco or the other seem incompetent is the sign of a bad fic because as cannon shows that draco knows some occlumency by sixth year, thats supposed to take alot of mental disiplin.
If there is no possiblity of failure sucuess is meaningless.

LDA posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 6:32am

that was brilliant! I was Rollin while reading it I can't wait to see the next chapter..

Davideg posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 6:27am

wow this is great i beg you please update a.s.a.l.a.

jay21317 posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 6:00am

hmm im curious on what the hell they said when they was speaking nother language

Malimber ConDoin posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 5:59am

The tremors generated by this fandom are off the scale and I give you 100% for excellence; your characterization of the Addams and HP OC is absolutely brilliant and a breath of needed fresh air. Some words to describe this chapter would be warped, disturbing, ingenious, awesome, psychotic, and uproarious.

I know that it may be a while before this happens but I am anxious to read about Sirius and Remus and their take on this Harry and his adopted family. (lol, lol) I wonder about the Addams reaction and interaction with Remus will be like.

Question Crookshanks in cannon happened in third year, have you changed that? (By the way I am quite fine with you tossing cannon through the window). Are you planning to deal with Harry’s childhood with the Addams, that has to be a whole fic by it self? (lol, lol) What is Gomez going to do to the Grey Lady, and why does he need the energy of a platoon of marines on shore leave?

I’m pleased as punch that Harry does not come into the wizarding world a beaten, partially broken, easily manipulated boy. That rant Gomez made about pushing boundaries and redefining possibilities is definitely the environment that the child of prophesy needs. I am dieing to know what Harry is doing to protect his mind. I am interesting in knowing more about Hermione’s interaction with Harry and company; how is her bossy nature coping with them?

I am happily thinking about what Lurch is doing to the Jehovah's Witnesses; many times I wish that I had dungeons for those that annoy me.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 5:55am

- Delightful. I never thought anyone would top Ishtar's Family Values, but this...

- Thank you.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 5:44am

Extremely cool, dark and vicious - I love having Harry as a loving minder to 'control' the darker tendencies of Wednesday - How long did it take them to develop the telepathic bond that makes their 'good-cop, bad-cop' routine so polished?

Too bad your Bumblebore is incapable of distinguishing nuances in conversation - no threat was made..

thanks so much for sharing - this is a riveting tale.

Jack B Nimble posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 5:43am

Wow! Big Wow!

Hermione is a nice echo of It's wife (I cannot think of her name).

The three of them are great fun, particularly their interaction with each other. And with the rest of the family. And with Draco. I did expect more to come from their interaction with Dumbledore, but the conversation in the last scene seems to indicate a great deal took place off screen, as it were.

Snape's conversation with Daphne added some great flavor, and said a lot in a few lines, particularly about him.

Looking forward to next week.

Lighhtwhispers posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 5:24am

This is awesome. Hee hee hee

Entilzah posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 5:12am

If this is the results of not being able to read the original version on FFA for a long time as it was revised, then I say it is a price well paid! Simply marvelous.

As always in a Jeconais fic, there are tons of questions to be answered so far. But that seems to be the point, of course. It has always been difficult to review the first chapters of your fics since they often just set the table for what it coming next.

But in this one, I must commend you on your characterizations. They seem to be even better than your norm. Harry is interesting, not necessarily completely different than some of the better written Dark Harry fics out there, but richer. Pugsley seems wonderfully manic and enthusiastic. Even Snape seems a well written spy - a silent and highly intelligent observer in it for himself - yet being drawn into their world.

But Wednesday.

Ah, Wednesday.

The highlight of your best works have always been the lead female characters, all of them unique in their own way. Pansy, Dawn, Ginny, Daphne, Gabby, Gabrielle... You obviously put a lot of thought into them and enjoy watching them grow over the chapters.

Wednesday is already such a layered character in your first chapter that I cannot possibly imagine how she will develop. But I certainly am going to enjoy the ride.

Your pacing in this piece is also excellent. WK,GQ and Hope were moderate speed pieces, most everything devloping at a decent pace. TMW and HEA were madcap races which almost seemed over too fast. PS demands to be read slowly and savored. I found myself reading passages over again just to make sure I got all the nuances.

OK.. this review is getting as long as the chapter. Suffice it to say that this was a wonderful chapter, and to say that I am eagerly awaiting the next installment would be an obvious understatement!

DarkSyaoran posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 5:12am

If you are going for humor, you have done well. Isn't the funniest thing around, but it gave me a few laughs.

Neribus posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 5:04am

This story is awesomeness. Please sir, can I have some more?