By Jeconais
Reviews
Hannah posted a comment on Monday 10th October 2005 9:33am
This is really good. I can't wait for the "one-shots" on WKGQ. Hurry!
Zaxxon posted a comment on Saturday 8th October 2005 5:55pm
Very, very nice...
A great story.
Aimee Breuker posted a comment on Friday 7th October 2005 11:56am
Very good story...I loved it.
Greg posted a comment on Friday 7th October 2005 9:46am
Wow...that was awesome. Please make more like this: I love your oneshots.
lori posted a comment on Wednesday 5th October 2005 8:18am
Outstanding -- how you can take a background character and make her real amazes me.
thank you!
Lori
Brad posted a comment on Wednesday 5th October 2005 6:19am
Very enjoyable story. It just seems to me that your work is getting more and more polished; it was 'Alone' where I first started thinking there'd been a quantum jump, and I think Perfect Situations proves the point.
A whole different scenario here ... Harry deserted by his friends, Dumbledore returning from the dead (!) and being manipulative to the extreme, etcetera. I think the chasing-girl!Harry was a few miles out of canon character, but so probably is duplicitous!Dumbledore as well, and who cares, that's what Fan Fiction is for! In your other stories you've had Harry start off introverted and then change over time; it was a surprise to see him start off that way in this tale.
Did you end up reading HBP anyway? You seem to have a lot of its plot summarised here ... or did you get a summary from some one/site again?
(You didn't miss much, if the latter :-( )
"Ms-barely-an-A-Cup". Heh. Since HBP I've cooled a lot towards Ginny, and this story didn't help me any. But we weren't supposed to like her in this one, were we? Luckily your drabble for her came along today and redeemed her a lot in my eyes.
You've got me wondering about how you had Hermione "staring at the picture" in an "anything but platonic" fashion. Hmmm. You're really leaning towards harems these days!?
It's been great fun watching your drabbles flow on from this piece. As always, thanks heaps for your efforts in keeping us all amused!
roastpuff posted a comment on Tuesday 4th October 2005 5:20pm
Bloody brilliant, though the portrayal of Hr and DD being that way was rather difficult to believe. But then... it's Dumbledore, ey?
Tom A. posted a comment on Monday 3rd October 2005 7:29am
I like this. That was great. Thanks for writing it. Quite the twist at the end, even though you forshadowed it early. ("Forshadowing - your clue to good literature" - Bloom County)
Thank you.
Any chance for a sequel? I'd love to know what happens to the rest of the crowd. Dumbledore arrested for the unforgivable; the scandal of what he did. Snape the target of any death eaters still alive. Pansy and Draco trying to hunt Daphne down.... lots of possibilities.
Anyway, thanks again. I'm enjoying all your stories. (haven't gotten to the Harry/Ginny ones yet - don't care for that shipping.)
Tom A.
martin posted a comment on Sunday 2nd October 2005 11:12pm
Oh Jeconais, you never cease to amaze. The writing was fluid and graceful, and it captures an essence to Daphne that works brilliantly. It also explains why Daphne isn't very vocal in the books. I thought that this was one of the best stories I've ever red.
BTW: I can't wait to read more of "Alone".
Stephanie posted a comment on Sunday 2nd October 2005 10:40am
I absolutly love this story, i hope you writ more chapters to it!!!!
ridmania posted a comment on Sunday 2nd October 2005 2:10am
awesome i loved it man you just keep getting better and better!!! so many6 different stories!!! please update TMW soon
Rick posted a comment on Saturday 1st October 2005 6:47pm
Great story-I can almost see Dumbles doing this in cannon
Fate posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 2:07pm
This was just brilliant!
Absolutely wonderfully done!!!
Jim posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 2:00pm
'Rumours of my death were greatly exaggerated.’
Uh! I can’t remember why that quote is so famous, it going to annoy me now ….
Excellent story, nice touch at the end with the snake skin…
Sydney posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 12:53pm
Wow, that was so amazing... You are a very brilliant person.
bigdawg1040 posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 7:49am
awesome story....really engaging....i really hope you make another H/Daphne story....or H/ Slytherin female story........
Martin posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 1:08am
That was just evil. I love that. Just the right amount of humor, suspense, drama, and sexual situations to make the perfect story. I love your style, Jeconais.
hyper_swain posted a comment on Thursday 29th September 2005 10:50pm
excellent, are you going to continue or is this just a one shot?
sadfru posted a comment on Thursday 29th September 2005 9:36pm
Holy moly I love it, although I think I'd like to see Harry more human in a fic...Matter of fact I have a challenge for you.
I challenge you to have an Evil harry, it can be where he just turns his back on the people, it can be him being affected by dark magics or demonic possesion, pretty much anything...this includes having dumbledore and the like being the actual ggod guys but you can have them screwing up the situation badly but they have to be good
Even if you don't
You keep writing and I'll keep reading
PS Ever thought of a Dungeon Keeper (PC game) crossover???
Renzo7 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th October 2005 9:15pm