ichaos posted a comment on Saturday 15th July 2017 5:21pm for The Unforgiving Minute

Neville is da man

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 4:16am for The Unforgiving Minute

Daphne is scary smart. All the chapters so far were so enjoyable to read.

cello posted a comment on Sunday 19th September 2010 1:52pm for The Unforgiving Minute

What a wonderful moment for Neville. That particular Kipling always gets to me. Good stuff.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 27th November 2009 5:06pm for The Unforgiving Minute

Very good chapter.

gunny

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Monday 23rd March 2009 11:25pm for The Unforgiving Minute

Masterful use of Kipling's If, I must say. and I hope that Snape does those two potions. For the Longbottoms' sakes.

Andrius posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2008 5:01pm for The Unforgiving Minute

Nice!
Just a little bit that looked weird to me, Neville didn't really go and greet Harry... I mean, at least shake his hand if anything?

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 28th May 2007 10:16pm for The Unforgiving Minute

Very good.

gunny

Little Flower Princess posted a comment on Thursday 24th May 2007 7:50pm for The Unforgiving Minute

Did Snape cure Nev's parents?

That'd be soooo cool if he did!

hayeth posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 12:14am for The Unforgiving Minute

this chapter was a bit confusing with the scene changes. I had a hard time focusing when Neville went from being with snape, to harry, to snape again and had to reread them to realize what was going on. still liking the story though

C. Harris posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 7:09pm for The Unforgiving Minute

I continue to be amazed by your sheer brillance. That last line was powerful.

Amamama posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 12:22am for The Unforgiving Minute

Wee-heee! I got to reading out of order, so I'd missed this - it's wonderful. Like the rest has been this far, I know I keep repeating myself, but it is such fun to read something that the authors obvioulsy had a lot of fun writing.

How great for Neville to be the one to imprison Snape. Poetic justice.

Cheers!

UdderPD posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2007 11:42pm for The Unforgiving Minute

Once again brilliant

MagyarEagle posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2007 6:24pm for The Unforgiving Minute

I loved the ending quote and your description of Nevilles emotions. You managed to capture him perfectly.

Meg posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2007 4:53pm for The Unforgiving Minute

This, along with the other Neville Vignette, are probably my second favorite of the whole lot. What absolutely makes it, for me, is the quote at the end. Without the quote it's still good, but the quote really drives home the "evolution" of Neville. I just love it!

Thanks,

Meg