BAFan posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 2:44pm

Damn, I wish we could edit a review we've already posted because I knew I was forgetting something else!

I liked that you included Harry's pain during the initial penetration. That's not something I've ever read before in a fanfic, and it makes perfect sense to me. Especially since he is uncircumcised, I would imagine the glans is extra tender, never having been exposed to being rubbed against fabric from underwear or a towel - which I'd guess would provide at least a degree of desensitization? Not to mention exposure to air if the guy walks around the house naked at all.

~Debbie

BAFan posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 2:20pm

Forgot to say that you should read up on the hymen, because your description here doesn't seem accurate. It isn't a barrier in the sense that it completely covers the vaginal opening - at least, if it does the girl is in trouble because there's no way for menstrual blood to escape. Anyway, I realize this story was written many years ago, so maybe you now know better. My comment is mainly for those readers who may not be aware of that fact due to the common misconceptions that still persist even to this day.

~Debbie

BAFan posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 2:10pm

Wonderful! The first part was a blend of humor and disbelief - on my part - as to how Harry could possibly hide the effects of being Crucioed. Loved that he attacked Voldemort physically after Snake-Face tested his Crucio on Ginny! Although I mostly go for the slash, I have no objections to Harry having a relationship with Ginny - or Hermione, for that matter (because I think she and Ron just don't really make sense) - and you absolutely made I work for me.

Great writing!

~Debbie

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 28th May 2014 5:15pm

More soft-core than anything else, but it seems like Harry is happy.

Nytefyre posted a comment on Friday 18th January 2013 11:13pm

Nice story - the explicit part was fun, too... and I liked the two perspectives. Reading it straight through once for each POV might have been too much, though - interleaving the POVs might have been easier for the reader...

Thanks for posting.

JC70s posted a comment on Wednesday 9th November 2011 3:13am

I love this story. Thank you! It was funny while Harry messed up Voldemort and it was also tender when they were making love for the first time. Well done!

HellWolf666 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th December 2010 12:04am

please finish writing more on this one wat happens when they classes again

Abraxan posted a comment on Friday 9th July 2010 11:16pm

Sweet! Lovely job

Anraxan

Abraxan posted a comment on Friday 9th July 2010 7:28pm

That's the most fun I've had reading a "final battle"! And him naming her freckles is priceless!!

Abraxan

snapesworstnightmare posted a comment on Sunday 27th June 2010 9:28am

You're a guy. I can tell that much just by reading this. Your writing is good, but you've a little homework to do on female anatomy before you get a gold star. The hymen is closer to the netherlips than what you wrote in the story for Ginny. When reading this fic, that little fact confused me and made me question whether or not she really was a virgin or if she had broken her own hymen or if Harry was even her first. Other than that, good job, I was blushing the entire time.

juice14 posted a comment on Thursday 10th September 2009 8:41pm

I award thee the award for best love scene between Harry and Ginny! I really felt the emotions coupled with the intense eroticism between the 2 leads. I like how you made the act so much more than just sex. Each one giving up themselves to the other. To me these are the things that define the act of makin love between 2 souls. Fantastic work and I hope others will share my opinion. :)

cyantons posted a comment on Saturday 22nd August 2009 10:47am

Part of this chapter repeats itself over again. Just an FYI.

delrusant posted a comment on Friday 21st August 2009 6:43am

Great first time, it could be used to educate all the young male teenagers around of how not to rush things when they are on the verge of looosing their virginity.

delrusant posted a comment on Friday 21st August 2009 4:47am

I loved the Ginny punch that was so relieving the tension built up during the fight. Nice plan for a Flight of Death'S death

donroho89 posted a comment on Sunday 10th May 2009 11:55am

Ahhh... so you can write lemons. Write them very well even. Was wonderin' earlier about that in fact and this has cleared up a lot.

joy glennie posted a comment on Saturday 18th October 2008 1:57pm

Sensational story. This chapter took me three sitting....but was lovely to look forward to.

joy glennie posted a comment on Wednesday 15th October 2008 2:21pm

Great story. Just loved the first person style of writing. Very dramatic, but great humour also.

Marina4370 posted a comment on Thursday 18th September 2008 10:57pm

Wonderful! Simply a wonderful story. Thank you for writing and please, write more, think about a sequel of this story with the marriage of Harry and Ginny and a confrontation with Dumbledore. I love Harry angry with him and I share your point of view about a lot of mistakes Dumbledore made.

Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 8:40am

That was really great. Your descriptions and the way you put both perspectives was absolutely wonderful.. It would be great to know what happened for the rest of the time they wewre "locked away".

Another sequel would be good.
Also, to guage what the reactions to their little escapade would be from Ginny's family and the rest of the school.

Overall, your writting and imagination are great..

MoineRoseAliceGin posted a comment on Tuesday 1st April 2008 5:43pm

wow! that was so funny, i love it... i really like d his plan. very awesome indeed