By Jeconais
Reviews
Silo posted a comment on Wednesday 29th August 2007 8:14pm
i want a a scuwell to this staore
thebfsgf posted a comment on Wednesday 1st August 2007 11:30pm
OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was smiling throughout the whole thing, and I loved it completely and utterly! AH!
Rebecka M.
scribbler posted a comment on Wednesday 25th July 2007 11:32am
Excellent story with not nearly enough heat. You've done the set-up, but there comes a time when you've got to deliver and that time is now.
Please - post a continuance of this!
stuart posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 10:46pm
cute!! liked the intro and had to check the category again, thought you put under the wrong heading! even your drabbles and one shots put other stories to shame. any way just wanted to let you know i enjoyed the story and really look forward to next one. cheers
James Barber posted a comment on Sunday 15th July 2007 5:56pm
Oh wow that was something else!
lenny posted a comment on Wednesday 11th July 2007 9:33am
I LOVED IT .PLS SEND THE NEXT CHAP SOON .I CANT WAIT TO READ IT
Ezra'eil posted a comment on Tuesday 10th July 2007 4:52pm
Man a sequal would be awesome.
Lady_Hope posted a comment on Sunday 3rd June 2007 4:30pm
good. not my favorite but i can deal. i think i liked the part after mione comvinced harry more than the beginning.
mrrlyn posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 12:27am
With how you handled this story. I would really like to see your take on h/hr in a longer story/novel(like TMW and hope). I know you have said that other writers have done their take and are pretty good, but after reading your work... You just have a unique way of telling the story of harry and his life with whoever you pair him with.
I think that you would spin a story so different and unique from authors that it would be up there with the the greats of the h/hr ship. Shoot I never read a harry/pansy till I read white knight/grey queen. since then I have read all your stories. And of all the pairings I have read of your stories and loved them all. Now despite your furture scedual for fics. I would like to see your take on the Harry/Hermione ship.... well and Harry/Susan... but especially h/hr. I think you could also do a wicked h/multi... but that prob wopnt happen. This is just my 2 cents.... as for the story... it rocks... and helps me wait paitently for hope12 and HEA. btw...you are the author of the only hp/gd stories that i like.
Decumo9 posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 11:33am
good story, it was well written, not to mention hermione was amazing.
Farheen posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 7:20am
And oh yeah. could you please please add some more chapters to it. Like going on how their love evolve and they get on together. How he shows her his abilities and stuffs like that. Thanks in advance
Farheen posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 7:17am
It's really wonderful. You are my favourite author. Thanks for providing us with such wonderful stories.
Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 8:53pm
I think I reviewed this before, but am not really sure. I really like this story and would like to encourage you to add a few more chapters to it, or maybe delve more deeply into a Harry/Hermione story. It seems that no matter which pairing you write, you do it immense justice, and I for one would like to see that brillance focused on my favorite ship.
morriganscrow posted a comment on Thursday 19th April 2007 7:26pm
Lovely!
You caught the Trio perfectly.
Fabulous job.
Kotaro Inugami posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:37pm
This is by far the greatest fic I have ever read. Everything is has great detail, (although some subjects, like the computer description, is overdetailed) Still, I would give this a 99.5 out of 100. Please write more HarryXHermione
lelila posted a comment on Friday 22nd December 2006 1:53am
i've read this story about 3 or 4 times. it's one of my absolute fav romance stories, with just a hint of smuttiness, of harry and hermione. jk needs to read this story cause it perfectly explains all the reason why hermione and harry can work so well.
it's just absolute typical hermione with the research she does and all that. harry does indeed have this nobility about him that's ingrained in his character but he doesn't know about it. he's not perfect tho and still has insecurities, also his vulnerability still shines thru underneath. ron was handled perfectly. he's has his issues of insecurity and after a bit of a talking to from hermione, he's still harry's best friend.
i only wish this wasn't a one shot. i can only wish there was more to this story. if i begged, would u make more of this story?
Rijl Kent posted a comment on Saturday 16th December 2006 7:32pm
Shame on me for not reviewing before... this is like the third time I read this. I was just reading another story that's headed for H/Hr, and it made me want to come here to read again how it should be done... this is the hottest Hermione I've read. Okay, there's plenty of graphic smut out there, but you know they say the brain is the most important sex organ. The idea of Hermione's research (and later practical application) smokes. She convinced Harry and she convinced me. And this all in context of a very believable Hermione. The bits about her career goals with respect to Harry and to Ron are terrific; they encapsulate these characters so well.
I guess third times the charm. I really enjoy your fics. Thanks for sharing them and hosting so much other great work.
Peace-
rijl_kent@yahoo.com
GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Friday 13th October 2006 7:12am
'She was now the proud owner of a 300mhz Pentium 2 processor, with 64mb of ram, and a Riva TNT graphics card. It came with an eight speed CD-rom drive, a sound card, a 15" monitor, and a lightning fast 33.6k modem' -- interesting reminder of how much things change.
I like the start, how it builds on the expected Hermione/Ron ship to create a surprise, but that, of course, gets weakened considerably by listing this as a Harry/Hermione fic, and also a bit by the title (does Ron in canon or ficworld ever look at Hermione like a sister?)
First she's watching him walk up the platform and then following them to get a carriage -- what happened to the train ride?
'a relationship based on sniping' only by assuming that Ron and Hermione would never grow up; whatever the cause of the bickering (immaturity, uncertainty about the feelings of the other person), do you really think it would last forever?
So what's on p. 3732? :-)? Nice story.
darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 12th October 2006 7:01pm
No one got to hit Ron? *looks disappointed* Aww, I wanted someone to knock some sense into him. *looks irritated* He's a jealous git. Still, you handled it pretty well.
Loved the whole thing.
potterfrkintx posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 6:31pm