Konoha's Legion
Chapter 8
By Jeconais
Reviews
ctattrie posted a comment on Tuesday 4th October 2011 6:22am for Chapter 8
I Quite like what you have done with Sakura and Sasuke's characters. Thank you for taking the time to share this story with me. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Hope that 'living' is going well for you - as chaotic as it might be. =P
Jasruv Lundux posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2011 4:31pm for Chapter 8
Like the story very much!
Noticed this
"They’re trying, but he keeps killing them with bursts of Chakra. They’re getting to small to do anything [u]useless[/u], so are just dispersing. I need to work out a way of stopping them from dividing in the future."
I think you meant to put useful rather than useless.
dexterz posted a comment on Saturday 17th September 2011 9:14am for Chapter 8
entertaining story. waiting anxiously for the next installment
wolfey posted a comment on Friday 2nd September 2011 7:12pm for Chapter 8
ok I love this and am eagerly waiting for an update
wolfey posted a comment on Friday 2nd September 2011 7:03pm for Chapter 8
Ok I love this and hope to see an update soon
ketchamkl posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 7:13pm for Chapter 8
Love the story cant wait for the next chapter.
MrPowell posted a comment on Friday 5th August 2011 3:14pm for Chapter 8
So Naruto's through to the finals, but with that cursed seal he's pretty much screwed... Very interesting story. Can't wait to see where you take it next.
xardoth posted a comment on Monday 1st August 2011 6:42am for Chapter 8
Ah... figures this new chapter has an awesome cliffhanger. So, anyway, I've really liked the direction that awesome-Naruto is going in... except maybe how 'alive' you're making the clones. Well. On second thought, I like that alot too. Keep it up~
Rexnos posted a comment on Sunday 24th July 2011 11:43am for Chapter 8
I'm impressed. This entire story up until now has had Naruto utterly crushing any and all opposition before him. I'm impressed and glad you didn't have him do the same to Orochimaru. While I love your writing when it's centered on an overpowered bad ass character, I'm interested in how you'll deal with truly powerful enemies. I think I'm more interested in how this story turns out than Hogwart's Dawn now.
Also, I love the clones. I don't honestly care about all the mumbo jumbo behind how they're made and why they aren't chakra and what not. I'm impressed by how you manage to give them (mainly four really) a personality even though they're only supposed to be Naruto. It's the first time I've seen clones that aren't truly Naruto in all the Naruto fan fiction I've read. Cool stuff, very interesting.
Anyway, I'm having a lot of fun with this now. I hope you keep updating quick like, but I know writing can be a pain. Here's to hoping your struck by intense inspiration.
Later,
Rex
keichan2 posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2011 7:31pm for Chapter 8
A most excellent chapter, once again!
I always have a fun time reading this story (or re-reading)
I hope to read more soon!
magiccat posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2011 10:00am for Chapter 8
I loved t1his chapter! So many interesting things going on and the dialogue was great!
magiccat posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2011 10:00am for Chapter 8
I loved t1his chapter! So many interesting things going on and the dialogue was great
spurio23 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th July 2011 7:50am for Chapter 8
That's a terrible place to stop ! *sob* Great update. I like the changes to Sakura and Four is a great mind bender. It's cute all the other clones are crushing on her.
joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 20th July 2011 12:57am for Chapter 8
Entertaining. Thanks for the update.
loiosh posted a comment on Tuesday 19th July 2011 12:26am for Chapter 8
Great new chapter! Cant wait for more of this definitely my favorite humor Naruto story!
iTz_RAVEN posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2011 8:26pm for Chapter 8
What an interesting fic. Hope you update soon.
Jetflash posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2011 6:20pm for Chapter 8
Only problem I see is that Akado Yoroi; and, though not mentioned, his team-mate, Tsurugi, with the extenda-arms; shouldn't be in the tournament at all, since they were Kabuto's team-mates. With Kabuto dead, shouldn't they have been disqualified before the first exam even started?
Otherwise, awesome job, can't wait to see more.
Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2011 7:09am for Chapter 8
Nice action in this chapter!
I'm literally boucing in my seat when I see an update, thanks for the hard work!
HopelessDreamer posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2011 5:14am for Chapter 8
Just chiming in to say thanks for another chapter so soon! It's a very fun story. =)
Lopendria posted a comment on Monday 31st October 2011 1:10am for Chapter 8