Genericrandom posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 11:35pm for Chapter 7

"Arguing with myself is always the best way forward." ~ This is an awesome line.

I like how you're blurring the line between 'jutsu' and 'whatever the hell Naruto does that isn't magic but probably should be'. Of course the usage of freaking life energy certainly does open up a few new and otherwise impossible avenues.

It's been too long since the scene would have happened, so I don't know that it didn't already, but it would have been nice to see someone make a comment that lead to Naruto wanting the gennin to pass or fail on their own merits. Again, that's assuming I just can't remember a a scene that did basically just that. If it did, then I just forgot, if it didn't it shows a distinct but slightly boring jump in Naurto's wisdom. He at least needed to argue with himself about it a bit more.

I liked the chapter though, and I really liked the continuing inclusion of Hanabi's, Kurenai's and Tsunade's growth and changes. It's important that the writer references back to and continues to show a major character's growth, but it's always awesome when a secondary/minor character's development gets rolled up into the natural flow of a story.

Looking forward to the next installment as always.

loiosh posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 11:00pm for Chapter 7

Awesome new chapter! Been wait for updates from you and I can say it was worth the wait!

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 10:50pm for Chapter 7

Fantastic chapter! Character development and explanations abound, which is perfect. Keep up the fantastic work, this is, and has been, one of my favorite Naruto stories just because on how your treating it.