Konoha's Legion
Chapter 4
By Jeconais
Reviews
Tammin posted a comment on Monday 4th October 2010 1:35am for Chapter 4
I also truly love this story. Ero-sennin was probably sent for to check on the Naruto's Seal and for a new Hyuga bloodline protection Seal. I would like to see what Naruto make from the Rasengan or the Needle Guardian.
PJ posted a comment on Sunday 3rd October 2010 3:50am for Chapter 4
If Naruto teaches Haku the sexy form, and it is possible for someone in it to get pregnant... Haku could have Sasuke's child.
Andrius posted a comment on Sunday 26th September 2010 2:20am for Chapter 4
Hehe, this looks like a fun story so far. Looks like Naruto has a crazy thing going there with all the clones. He'll be able to monitor whole Konoha like that.
potterfrkintx posted a comment on Sunday 26th September 2010 12:23am for Chapter 4
HECK YEAH!! Totally awesome! I apologize for not having reviewed before, but I wanted to the the 4 chapters you do have posted read before I did! I love it! While I'm a guy, I admit that I'm somewhat biased in regards to female/female/male action in the fact that I love it to death, but I didn't find the fact that Sasuke and Haku were together, knowing that they're both male, disturbing. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to future installments!
See you in the funny papers!
brlarson posted a comment on Saturday 25th September 2010 8:21am for Chapter 4
fun as always. hope you keep up the good work.
Michael10 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th September 2010 6:31pm for Chapter 4
Again you are the best. ignore those who say otherwise. I speak for myself and my girlfriend when I say we alway read what you write when we get the notice. Heck, sometimes we read it at the same time (wink, wink)
Anyways, again great job and keep up the awesome work.
Mike
ficbob posted a comment on Monday 13th September 2010 12:15pm for Chapter 4
Bloody awesome.
Thanks and I am looking forward to more soon.
dennisud posted a comment on Monday 13th September 2010 3:16am for Chapter 4
Other than downgrading Hinata which I don't agree with this sure is a very entertaining story! Please continue and lets see how this Naruto handles the upcoming conflicts and their players!
dennisud
dennisud posted a comment on Monday 13th September 2010 3:15am for Chapter 4
Other than downgrading Hinata which i don't agree with this sure is a very entertaining story! Please continue and lets see how this Naruto handles the upcoming conflicts and their players!
dennisud
Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Sunday 12th September 2010 2:57pm for Chapter 4
And we've got another quality addition to one of the more enjoyable Naruto fanfics I've read in a while. In a way, I think that you had Naruto let Kakashi off easy once he found out just where Hanabi got her ideas for repaying a favor from, but considering that after he was done, the Hokage stepped in, I'll allow it as a properly measured response. Thanks for continuing to put out a quality product, and I'll be looking forward to the next installment.
Nementh
hordac85 posted a comment on Sunday 12th September 2010 11:47am for Chapter 4
Excellent. Keep it up!
kyuubilordofthe9 posted a comment on Sunday 12th September 2010 7:58am for Chapter 4
Epic. Laughed more than I have in months.
blackmage18 posted a comment on Saturday 11th September 2010 5:31pm for Chapter 4
After getting over the fact that everyone is completely OOC (for the most part, seeing as we don't really know anything about Anko) I retract my former review. I quite like this story. It's funny, entertaining, and I can tell you're just writing to have fun.
Keep it up.
theM posted a comment on Saturday 11th September 2010 10:23am for Chapter 4
It occurs to me that Naruto - without meaning to - just used the Shadow Clone technique, infamous for transferring memories from the clones to the original, to get intimately acquainted with the bodies of Anko and Kurenai both... And his own. Henging into clothes, indeed :) I wonder if he'll figure that out before those clones dispel.
marcelhm posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 7:48am for Chapter 4
somebody is having way too much fun using fatalities in naruto verse :P
now about your first remark in the author notes, AGREED, though I do say that quite often :).
the Hanabi Naruto parts where especially adorable. the part in the spa especially disturbing ;).
till next time
zoroz posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 4:07am for Chapter 4
awesome chapter, too bad there's no chapter update email alert like fanfiction.net as i would have known that u updated this awesome fic with 2 chapters :P
goddessa39 posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 12:36am for Chapter 4
hi again. I love Naru/Hina so plz let her be with him! Go Naruko Go! (also, I'm looking for a NaruHina timetravel w/ AnkKur in it. I don't know where it went.)
Your only part in the fic that bothers me is that every time u mention Gato, it comes out "Gat."
How r u gonna introduce Naruro into the Chunnin Exams since he is not in a team: teamless or early promotion?
How dis the Hokage get swindled and why is Naruro building a complex- is he plannin his clones to live there?
I hope there is more Sensai!Naruto pieces, and maybe an side piece of what soke passing girls thought when hearing Naruko in the baths.
Too bad there is not a 4-person squad for the KCorps+Hanabi. Also, I votw for more chibi!Naru around or maybe chibi!NarutoNaruko!twins?
michirusan posted a comment on Thursday 9th September 2010 9:53pm for Chapter 4
"No scars, no moustache, nothing bad, just a good looking man."
He DOES have a scar, the one that vertially bisects his sharingan eye.
switchhammerhit posted a comment on Thursday 9th September 2010 3:01am for Chapter 4
Hello Jeconais,
I was pleased to see a new update so soon, which is great. Thanks.
I loved the part with Hanabi using her "Glare No Jutsu", that was great.
Bar scene was assume.
I would hope that Naruto would still choose Hinata but alas it is your story.
Bath house was very entertaning. Split a gut there.
Thanks for sharing Tim,
switchhammerhit.
Netta posted a comment on Monday 4th October 2010 5:34am for Chapter 4