Daenerys posted a comment on Thursday 25th September 2014 6:40am for Chapter 4

As much as I don't like Sakura ... here in particular I think she actually had the right to complain (though not to the extent of punching).

Whether Anko and Kurenai knew that Naruto was really a boy or not, they were still effectively bringing a male into a public bath specifically for females. In fact, bringing him into the female changing rooms. They might have been aware, and approved, but the other woman could both have been unaware that a male was (illegally) entering the baths, especially if civillians also used them, and not have wanted a male there at all. One of them in fact, being Sakura, was very outspoken about not wanting him there.

dan26 posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2012 7:30pm for Chapter 4

to be honest I hope hanabi is part of the harem I don't base this on age but on how naruto treats her. My impression of hanabi is naturally shy around naruto despite being in a royal clan, not hair trigger shy like hinata usually is

dan26 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st November 2011 12:43am for Chapter 4

Why won't you do another harem story I mean I find this harem story to be good to read about. You got me curious about who's in the harem?

EDelta88 posted a comment on Monday 4th July 2011 6:43am for Chapter 4

So much lol...

james hung posted a comment on Tuesday 15th March 2011 10:20pm for Chapter 4

Was re-reading this while waiting for something new by you.

This bit caught my attention as normally I disagree with the last line. Well, at least with how I define young ^_^.

"Fortunately, Naruto took the honourable option. However, he was not happy last night. For good reason. No man desires waking up with a young girl in his bed."

dan26 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd January 2011 4:43am for Chapter 4

Swop," he said, offering him a scroll

Replace swop with swap it sounds better

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 14th January 2011 5:39pm for Chapter 4

The scene with Hanabi was both touching and cute. Excellent chapter.

LordSia posted a comment on Thursday 9th December 2010 5:46am for Chapter 4

NOoo...
Need more! Update!
Please?
Not a literary masterwork, the occasional spelling error pops up here and there, missing words, lacking detail (surroundings in particular), all the normal stuff that readers (read; I) nag at fanfic authors about.
Still, a great fic, easily coming up in the same class as "Make A Wish" and "Thousand Shinji" - if only you'd continue it...

johnsmith posted a comment on Tuesday 7th December 2010 3:04am for Chapter 4

i would greatly appreciate a new chapter, as its a rather interesting story :P

Ancalador posted a comment on Wednesday 1st December 2010 5:20am for Chapter 4

My current favorite of the stories on this site. Please continue it when you can.

Kortir posted a comment on Monday 29th November 2010 8:36am for Chapter 4

After my discovery that I didn't have Naruto-related alerts activated from your stories and rectifying that, I decided to spend my night reading the entire thing. Well worth it indeed! I was in tears laughing at some of the best parts- Gatou's death aftermath in particular, but a number of others and many of the Hanabi-glomp scenes. Will there be lemons coming up- whether it be here or in a separate posting? I'd love to see the Anko lemon in particular, but I tend towards the underused girls above all. Hanabi, Hana, Ayame, Tsunami, etc... rare to see many of them.
I love your particular take on the shadow clones as well. I know there's elements taken from other stories, but that doesn't stop it from having its own uniqueness and being all sorts of awesome in general. Looking forward to seeing what you'll come up with next! Thanks as always for the amazing story to read.

moon_pup posted a comment on Sunday 28th November 2010 6:43am for Chapter 4

Wow this is just great. I can not wait till you post more, I want to see what happenes in the exams

Seth Blade posted a comment on Sunday 21st November 2010 12:14pm for Chapter 4

I was holding my ribs, I laughed so much.

Anyway, keep it up and hope you update soon,
Seth Blade.

Cynrom posted a comment on Thursday 18th November 2010 1:31am for Chapter 4

I've got to say, this is one of the best stories I've read in a while. I only wish my own stories flowed as well.

Chris :)

delrusant posted a comment on Wednesday 17th November 2010 2:25am for Chapter 4

Great fun, pleasant use of the naruto sandbox in a dumb down and even more crazy version

DAMNED posted a comment on Wednesday 10th November 2010 6:02pm for Chapter 4

KEEP IT COMING PLZ VERY FUNNY

LKK posted a comment on Monday 8th November 2010 6:17am for Chapter 4

I love this, it's so fun! I absolutely adore how Naruto always comes to Hanabi's glare. The flow of the fic is really good and it seems like it's starting to get some plot too, *laughs.*

Thomas posted a comment on Saturday 6th November 2010 1:46pm for Chapter 4

The LOL is strong in this one. When you say ends at the Sound invasion, do you mean it ends at the beginning of the invasion or will the fic end after the invasion is done with a epilogue tacked on for good measure?

The other thing i'm wondering about is if Naruto will participate in the Chunin exames (for all i know you'll get the old man to promote him before the thing takes place) and if so which team he'll join so that he can do the exame.

Anthony Penny posted a comment on Saturday 23rd October 2010 10:48am for Chapter 4

I just stayed up till 5:00 a.m. reading this. Great work!!!

Katsuhito posted a comment on Monday 11th October 2010 9:30pm for Chapter 4

Nice! I'm actually kinda sad that you're going to end this at/after the invasion. Maybe a sequal? nudge nudge wink wink. I'd love to see the Akatsuki/Pein arc in this setting.

And there's so many little things I like about this story. First taking Naruto's lightning affinity and turning that into a neo-Raiden, and Haku into a Lin Kuei-type cyromancer had my inner MK geek cheering. Then the interactions between Naruto, Anko, and Kurenai kept me wondering what'll happen next. (Hmm.. would that make this a NAKship story?) Of course, the humor element is very enjoyable as well. I was at least chuckling 80% of the time I was reading. Chaos indeed. :)

All in all, this is definitely up to your normal standards imho. That "other" fanfic site you mentioned in the first a/n may be more successful in a volumetric way, but this one has all others beat when it comes to the quality of the authors. 8-D

Peace!