tangentsferret posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 1:44pm for Chapter 3

This is highly enjoyable. As always, I am delighted to see you posting. Thanks!

Pointless Side Note #1: Pretty sure it's "Ting, tang, walla-walla bing-bang", but also pretty sure it really doesn't matter. Maybe Naruto did it wrong on purpose so it would be even more Irritating! Yeah, that's it!

Pointless Side Note #2: I totally blame Viridian for the fact that I now read Naruto fanfic. If _Nightmares of Future Past_ updated more often, I wouldn't have gotten desperate enough to read _Team 8_, and I certainly would never have spent all that time trolling through the Narutopedia for background so I could understand what was going on. Yup, all Viridian's fault. I haven't told my kid I now savvy Naruto-verse yet. I'm kind of saving up for someday when I need Cool Mom Cred REEEEEEAAAALLLY hardcore.

lol101 posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 9:11am for Chapter 3

Ta mate... Even though you've repeatedly stated that your quality of work has diminshed and that you're more commited to writing for fun, you somehow come up with a killer of a chpater or one-shot that simply blows away the competition....

Beautiful chapter : )

OnegaiSilver posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 8:40am for Chapter 3

You know why I like this, even though it plays hard and fast with canon? Because its fun and unpretensious and knows it. Keep up the great work Jeconais!!

Jewelle posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 7:33am for Chapter 3

Augh! a cliffhanger...! Hope you'll update soon. I'm really enjoying this story.

Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 4:25am for Chapter 3

Fun! I like the way that the madness just keeps multiplying. Keep it up!

CyberCrisis1 posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 1:13am for Chapter 3

Well I must say that this is a great chapter and I can not wait to see the next chapter. Though this does seem to have biggest lead in to the next chapter that I have seen in this series yet.

rockcock posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 1:01am for Chapter 3

I like your stories very much but the one thing that disappoints me is that updates on them are slow.

Yeah, I know you've said that you're writing fanfiction stories for your own entertainment now and I respect that but I can't help but be a little sad about it.

All I can say is that I hope that this kind of entertainment becomes more and more fancy-able (i don't know if that is even a word!!! ) to you so that we can see more of your work.

I also believe you should try writing a book of your own see how that goes you can definitely enrapture the ones reading your stories so why not try something different and see how it goes.

Anyway big fan of your stories (even if I haven't left any reviews for most of them....yeah well what can I say I'm lazy ) hope you keep those updates coming.

NuitTombee posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 11:07pm for Chapter 3

It's a great Naruto fanfic, especially since you mostly focus on HP stories. I've like almost all of your other stories and I figured, what the hell, this would be a good read too. It is and I hope to read more later.

Alex00 posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 9:17pm for Chapter 3

great stuff so far

selonianth posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 7:31pm for Chapter 3

Very nice.

Hyuuga Council:HAHAHAHAHA
Naruto:Lolno
Hyuuga Council:*dies*

Daenin posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 7:19pm for Chapter 3

Fascinating, wonderful, thank you! Wonderful chapter!

Korisovra posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 7:06pm for Chapter 3

You suck! Please tell me the next update is going to come faster. Excellent story as almost always.

ralob posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 5:47pm for Chapter 3

Awesome update. I love this story. And yes, pirate hats are the last step towards greatness.

joeBob posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 5:46pm for Chapter 3

Mini cliffie, eh?

Fine, entertaining chapter, thanks.

Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 4:38pm for Chapter 3

Coming up next, the Hyuuga Massacre. Just because they didn't touch Hanabi doesn't mean they're going to live. It just means he'll be quicker and less painful about it.

carlinonthebrain posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 2:45pm for Chapter 3

I like it. This is a direction I have rarely seen in Naruto fanfiction, which in and of itself is laudable. A lot of the tropes start to get annoying after you read the fourth or fifth version of them. Also, the characters aren't really all that unrealistic, especially the way you redid the ages of the kids. Anyway, Naruto is notable for having generally unrealistic characters anyway, if anything framing the kids as teenagers explains a lot more of the general randomness of Konoha then as 11-12 year olds.

I'm excited to find out what Naruto will do next even if you don't necessarily have a framework, plot or pacing in mind. I'm enjoying this, so keep up the good work.

Tamojin posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 2:14pm for Chapter 3

You know a story is awesome when you're begging for it not to end the closer you get to the final words. Just one little nitpick for you

"Naruto isn’t right, we all know this, but his wrongness is just exhilarating. He doesn’t accept obstacles; he sets his eyes on a target and goes for it, and just because the root he takes is as straight as a corkscrew, doesn’t make it any less effective."

You use "root" here and I think you meant "route"

Can't wait to see the can Naruto opens on the Hyuuga elders. As always, awesome stuff!

bajab posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 1:43pm for Chapter 3

Always seem to short, but only because of the great quality.

Darkon posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 12:58pm for Chapter 3

Again can't wait for the next installment. Really can't wait for the righteous butt whipping the Hyuga elders are in for hehheh truly the violence shall be epic. As always you continue to impress me.

Neil Glover posted a comment on Tuesday 31st August 2010 12:57pm for Chapter 3

Great chapter, i hope that you will update soon as the cliffhanger is going to keep me on the edge of my seat.