joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 7:27am for Chapter 10

Nicely entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

Somehow Naruto's a Gary Stu, but without being annoying as a character.

Of course, Naruto's got no chance against Kishimoto's eyeballs of pwnage + the "I can resurrect every badass in the world and have them trounce you" technique, plus the redonkulous Juubi. But, I'm sure Naruto will make a beautiful corpse. ;-)

spurio23 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 6:52am for Chapter 10

Lovely and entertaining as always. Thanks for the update.

gara5289 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 5:18am for Chapter 10

Fantastic chapter! And my displeasure at the Kami scene evaporated at the gag you did with Jiraiya and Tsunade. The chapter was hilarious. I'm really glad you didn't give him the Rinnegan and I'm curious who Kami is betting against. Can't wait for the last 2 chapters.

Michael10 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 4:47am for Chapter 10

nicely done and the six path thing was a nice idea. keep up the good work. Hope to see Perfect Slytherins soon.

Darkcloud02 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 4:39am for Chapter 10

0-0 holy shite...this was an amazing fucking chapter...i was left gaping in excitment at the prospect of the next. This has done nothing but dazzle since it began, please, keep it up! ^_^

Josh1 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 4:13am for Chapter 10

Like? Hell, love it, love it, love it! It was well worth the wait! I cant tell you how happy I am that you are still writing. Christmas is shaping up to be thin this year so I'm treating this as one of my preasants. So on that note, thank you, and I hope you have a very happy holiday!

Kortir posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 2:51am for Chapter 10

You sure know how to tell a story and keep me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. Sure, there's a bit of polish needed that will come in time, but other than a token handful of grammatical errors there's not much to take away from my overall ability to just enjoy this story. I never cease to be amazed at the sideways thinking you yourself manage to do in order to characterize Naruto in this way. Sure, some of the ideas are fairly simple (if often deceptively simple to the point that most people would never think of it), but others just make me gape in wonder at how you came up with such a different way of handling a situation that I never thought about even changing before. Overall another enjoyable chapter, and I look forward to the next! Great to talk to you the other day as well, hope things only improve in your life from here.

Zaxxon posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 2:38am for Chapter 10

That's was a very good chapter, and I love the new clone technique that you came up with for Naruto. Looking forward to more chapters.

forrestgreen117 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 2:20am for Chapter 10

Wow. Just flipping wow. Impressive stuff, and I'm not just talking about the world building. I love the character development.

Robin42069 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 2:15am for Chapter 10

another great chapter i like this story its funny and enjoyable to read.its crack as hell but i've always had fun reading those kind of stories so i dont see a problem with that at all

Kail posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 2:03am for Chapter 10

You know, that make perfect sense, the bit with Shika and Asuma. Hesitate, hold back, and in a real battle (as the final tournament is supposed to be a simulated war) your opponent will kill you.

Eagerly awaiting the next part now; enjoy your holidays!

Orion posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 1:46am for Chapter 10

Great! This is still a lot of fun to read. I liked what you did with Shikimaru here, I'm not sure I've ever read a story where his lazyness was actually punished. Also you've done a great job of developing what exactly the shadow clones are and how they work.

Thank you for writing, and sharing your work with us.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 1:09am for Chapter 10

It's great to see another piece of this! :D

agnar posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 12:56am for Chapter 10

Wonderful to see a new chapter for this, and it's excellent as always! I agree completely about Shika, that always bugged me too that he earned a promotion for basically being forced to compete, doing just enough, then forfeiting his match.

Sure, Shika had great intelligence, tactics, strategy. But he in no way showed he was physically or emotionally ready to be a Chunin. Nice solution to that!

preier posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 12:28am for Chapter 10

good chapter, very happy to see this story progress.

i was in fear of some shark jumping when kami and raiden made their cameo but avoiding the doujutsu-candy distribution alleviated my concerns

importants steps in the relationships, as well as naruto adopting an older body. fast progression. too fast?

thank you for sharing your tales

Cale posted a comment on Saturday 15th December 2012 11:58pm for Chapter 10

Brilliant chapter. Just one thing. The plural of ninja, or nin as you used, is ninja and nin. To be more acurate; Japanese doesn't have a plural in its grammar. One shinobi, ten shinobi, five kunai, nine hundred seventeen kunoichi...