Pai posted a comment on Monday 24th December 2012 2:00am for Chapter 10

Great to see more of this. a well done naruto is so rare these days.

And Tsuande kissing Naruochan? epic

lydiakate98 posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2012 5:53am for Chapter 10

Awesome chapter. I love that Naruto is unpredictable and priginal and Sasuke is right tha he is driving everyone to be better. Also, thank you for giving Shikamaru that kick in the gut. He was following a plan (or so I've always assumed), but his decision to do that in front of International guests was terrible decision making in action. Looking like a lazy, misogynistic asshole does not get your hidden village contracts. Loved Sasuke and his growth and Sakura and her growth. Thank you for not going the basher route, ever. I am tired of it and know I can always go to your stories for respite.

T.Zukumori posted a comment on Wednesday 19th December 2012 5:26pm for Chapter 10

Awesome new installment. Great reading during the holiday madness. Thanks for updating!

Tenchifew posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 4:28pm for Chapter 10

Again, a great chapter.

Very interesting developments and fights.

Wish you the best in ordering your life.

Thank you very much for writing.

loiosh posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 2:08am for Chapter 10

Damn love the new chapter!! Cant wait to read the final two chapters! Merry Christmas and ty for the update!

arapto1984 posted a comment on Monday 17th December 2012 9:42pm for Chapter 10

Worth the wait. I guess the whole Kami thing was one of the last minute additions and that it will become an important plot point somehow. I eagerly await the next installment!

ficbob posted a comment on Monday 17th December 2012 2:24pm for Chapter 10

Awesome chapter

The addition of Kami I liked but then you upped with Lord Raiden and Mortal Combat . . . that is an impressive turn in the story.

I realize that you can not fit everything into each chapter but I have having trouble with the idea that there are only two more chapters; especially with the possibility of Mortal Combat.

As ever, thank you for your time and words and I am looking forward to more

Thanks

Davideg posted a comment on Monday 17th December 2012 4:23am for Chapter 10

I love this story thank you for sharing another fantastic chapte im a bit sad that ther are only two more chapters to go thou please keep up the fantastic writeing an update as life allows

csad posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 11:33pm for Chapter 10

Fun chapter. That bit with Shikamaru was probably my favorite here. *g* And Four doesn't run out of chakra anymore? Oy vey. That sounds ominous.

Funny (or annoying, depending on your view) typo though: calling Sandaime the fourth a few times. And "Naru Shikaku".

kozinc posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 10:30pm for Chapter 10

Nice chapter! I liked it.

ThunderGod posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 9:59pm for Chapter 10

This still rocks:}

darthme1011 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 8:52pm for Chapter 10

awesome chapter love it so well written

Zaiman posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 7:16pm for Chapter 10

Amazing story, I really enjoy reading it. Thanks!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 5:38pm for Chapter 10

"Have you gone and got divine support?" Neji demanded, his hands on his hips.

"No," Naruto said. "Not support, I swear."

*snicker*

I liked the way Asuma handled Shika. He needed that wake up call.

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 5:16pm for Chapter 10

Just wanted to let you know that I love this story so far and can see that you could take this to a whole other level. You could probably flesh this narutoverse out to well over 20 chapters. I like how you are just writing what you want and enjoying it. Can't wait to read the rest.

James

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 4:40pm for Chapter 10

A cracking good way to relax after the stress this time of year brings, thanks.

alec_potter posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 4:00pm for Chapter 10

Nice chapter, can't wait for the "invasion". The chapter felt as a peep in the behind the scenes activities, before the big event...atleast we got to see Naruto's fight with Tenten.

Update soon.

iamjmph01 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 1:51pm for Chapter 10

thanks for another amazing chapter... i will be sad to see this one end(kinda like most of your work) looking forward to more :)

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 9:03am for Chapter 10

You know, as entertaining and light romp-esque as this story may seem, there's a depth to both the plot and storytelling that I'm not entirely sure is intentional, or just a positive reflection of Kishimoto's occasionally shallow storyline.

Every time you post an update to this story, I grab some booze and reread every chapter from the beginning.

You have NO idea how drunk I am right now. :)

As always, thank you for the entertainment. A good story that provides hours of pleasure is a joy to behold.

Tomoru posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 8:29am for Chapter 10

Yay!! That was such an interesting concept and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Hope you update again soon!!!