asvaldson posted a comment on Tuesday 24th February 2015 10:06am for Chapter 10

I love this story, it's a shame that you never posted the two more chapters you spoke about at the end of this one.

KaijuVsBijuu posted a comment on Tuesday 20th January 2015 12:28pm for Chapter 10

nice, never in my life have i read a perfectly good story written and told by an aurther, that cause me to read the same story twice in one day. nice job and keep up the good work.

sekmarc posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2014 3:04am for Chapter 10

So I've read this story for what I think may be the fourth time, maybe fifth, and I'm still hoping to see the promised last two chapters. I love this story and will probably continue to read it, even unfinished, for a long time to come. Thanks for sharing! Happy Writing!

asvaldson posted a comment on Thursday 4th December 2014 9:21pm for Chapter 10

O my god this story is awesome. I've only recently started reading the naruto Fandom but I've been a long time fan of your works. It's a huge shame is been two years since an update

solitare99 posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 9:22pm for Chapter 10

I love this story, but there were some real problems in this chapter. I don't know how Lee usually acts towards women, but in Tenten's case, Lee is actually right to protect her. He is a melee specialist while she is a ranged weapon specialist. It's his job to keep the enemy from getting close to her. That's what melee members of a team are supposed to do: keep the squishier team members out of melee range.

Second is Four's reaction to Gaara's issues. Gaara cannot sleep at all or Shukaku will take over and go on a rampage. That alone is enough for insanity, but he is shown to have Shukaku talking to him quite a bit. He has a crazy, bloodthirsty demon whispering and screaming in his head all day. Plus, the person he cared for most in the world tried to kill him and said that he always hated Gaara and Gaara's mother hated Gaara too. Naruto never had to deal with any of these things.

I can understand that Four is just angry and not acting rationally because Naruto is hurt and was attacked by Baki who is Gaara's sensei, or maybe she just doesn't know how bad Gaara had and still has it. The thing I don't get is how Gai actually agreed with Four's reasoning. If Lee went all out, he could easily kill someone (including Tenten). A spar is a spar because you can't go all out for fear of seriously hurting or killing someone. Plus, Four is a clone, and regardless of her newfound durability she would get dispelled pretty fast by Lee going all out. Tsunade's super strength technique doesn't include the durability that Lee got out of his physical super strength. Naruto is out of commission and cannot recreate her, so that would be a waste.

Kail990 posted a comment on Saturday 18th October 2014 8:05pm for Chapter 10

I hope to see an update for this story, its awesome

JokersLastLaugh posted a comment on Monday 13th October 2014 2:48am for Chapter 10

This was a really good story and I really really liked it. This is what it mean to be a ninja. No honour or fighting fair and all that shit. If I had been a Naruto ninja I would have fought as dirty and unfairly and cheated as much as I could.

I hope ope this is updated soon because I would love for more.

randumbdave posted a comment on Thursday 9th October 2014 9:45am for Chapter 10

OH MY KAMI, we need more of this. This is just a ridiculous hotbed for awesome jutsu ideas. Reminds me of that Sakura-centric story, 'Time Braid'. Sakura, Naruto, Sasuke, and Hinata were all caught in a Chuunin Exam day scenario, but they were all separate most of the time, but occasionally they would share a repeat with one of the others. Naruto eventually made his real transformation into a big monster (i.e. Kyuubi, dragon, Godzilla, etc.) transformation. Sakura basically mastered her elements and healing techniques to the point that she could use Naruto's transformation jutsu to create a real clone. Like a real living body, so she basically couldn't be killed unless you found all her bodies. Anywho, I'd love to see some more o' dis. ;-)

tcl7189 posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2014 11:17pm for Chapter 10

Great ride so far... Loving it!!

Lady FoxFire posted a comment on Wednesday 28th May 2014 2:27am for Chapter 10

Please update this fic. I love it and want to read more

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2014 8:10pm for Chapter 10

Just rereading it. Great story.

xavierp posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 12:45am for Chapter 10

I was really really enjoying that and now it's stuck on chapter 10. Please either finish it or at least give us an outline. I like how you brought Sasuke round fairly quickly, it's a conversation that Kakashi should have had in canon.

red jacobson posted a comment on Tuesday 20th May 2014 3:04pm for Chapter 10

very enjoyable story Jeconias, but is there any more in the pipeline?

red

heavyneos posted a comment on Friday 14th March 2014 4:18pm for Chapter 10

brilliant i hope you keep gonig

Alucard1126 posted a comment on Thursday 13th March 2014 12:18am for Chapter 10

Just kind of wondering if we'd have an update for Konoha's legion or if it's just sort of done. I greatly enjoy your stories, and completely understand your reasoning for cutting back. I was just curious.

Thanks,

KennyZ93

LadyNyshah28 posted a comment on Wednesday 11th December 2013 11:01pm for Chapter 10

Awesomeness!!!

David Thacker posted a comment on Sunday 24th November 2013 10:56am for Chapter 10

So there will only be 12 chapter to this story? Hope that they are just has great has the rest of it.

GlennCLP posted a comment on Sunday 10th November 2013 1:19am for Chapter 10

Truly love this story, as much as I do all of your stories.This is maybe the ninth or tenth time I've read it and it's truly incredible everytime. The only thing I can point out is some spelling and grammar mistakes that anyone can live with and the way you write the hand-signs, you go "Dragon, Dragon" the Naruto series uses hand-signs as fast as possible, flowing from one to the other with no default hand-sign, so writing "Dragon, Dragon" is just one extended Dragon and the other is totally null and void. But this is spectacular. :)

Darkcloud02 posted a comment on Sunday 27th October 2013 2:20am for Chapter 10

o.o holy hell, :) what a chapter, its been several months an this chapter still leaves me gaping when i reread it. Looking forwards to the future chapters when they arrive.

namnnumbr posted a comment on Tuesday 15th October 2013 12:09am for Chapter 10

Love this fic. Eagerly awaiting updates. Thank you for putting the time in to build this wonderfully entertaining story!