genkitty posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 3:52am for Chapter 4

YES YES YES!!! I adore this story and you've delivered yet another satisfying chapter. I love the interactions, especially with Michael and Gabby. Part of me hopes that this'll be yet another story where Harry and Gabby end up together in the very end, because you do the pairing so very well.

I'm looking forward to the next installment, even if I have to wait umpteen months for it!

Jonathan Neihengen posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 3:44am for Chapter 4

Another awesome chapter!!!! Great work and I can't wait till your next posting.

zoroz posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 3:43am for Chapter 4

sweet cheers for the update

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 3:37am for Chapter 4

Outstanding, thank you so much.

dave gerecke posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 3:29am for Chapter 4

Amazing story which I always look forward to reading more of.
Thank you so much for writing it.
dave

moontenshi posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 3:26am for Chapter 4

Absolutely loved it. You have such a way with words. I've followed your work for years and I hope that further down the road I'm still being astonished by your imagination. Keep up the great work.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:50am for Chapter 4

what a fantastic Christmas - made only more poignant by the scene imagined and described so vividly by Harry

thanks so much

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:33am for Chapter 4

Excellent update Tim, and I'm sure that Gabrielle is cursing the fact that she is only 8 years old! I laughed at Harry's response to being told she had him wrapped around her finger.

red

Dervish posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:29am for Chapter 4

words can not express exactly how moving this chapter was for me i will just say well done sir, well done

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:56am for Chapter 4

A good chapter, keep it up.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:47am for Chapter 4

- Yet another amazing tale... I really love this one.

xardoth posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:35am for Chapter 4

Hmm, for some reason - I thought this fic would be extended a bit further then it seems to be going at the moment. This last chapter seems to set the pace for a somewhat soonish ending. I didn't get that impression with the earlier chapters, but for some reason the pace in this one seems to be picking up for a finish. Not that it isn't well done, but I think I would have preferred a slower pace to the finish, as I like reading your work.

Anyway, looking forward to how you resolve the next few conflicts and the interesting scenes you come up with for the next chapters.

Frederick Herriot posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:58am for Chapter 4

Beautiful. This brought a tear into my eye. I hope this isn't the end of it.

DrT posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:36am for Chapter 4

Loved the scene with the elves, but wow! what an ending! Bravo!

Lokilos posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:22am for Chapter 4

Damn that was an incredible chapter! Especially the part about his family. Very powerful. The end with Dumbledore seemed a little rushed, but maybe it was because I didn't really see Dumbledore changing his stance on Harry beforehand. It just seemed so sudden. But maybe that was the point, this was his wake up call.
Great story, can't wait for the next part.

bannanacupcakes posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:05am for Chapter 4

please update soon :)

Sarah5 posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 11:55pm for Chapter 4

A very interesting update. It makes me wonder what is coming next.

loiosh posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 11:19pm for Chapter 4

Another amazing chapter down thanks for the update!

Genericrandom posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 11:04pm for Chapter 4

Dude! I was wandering around, looking for something to read, 'cause FFN was down and I hadn't hit this place in the bookmark rotation yet, but I got here and saw this and was like "Yay!" because your stories always contain huge amounts of pathos, awesome and win, with the occasional side of GAR. And this chapter delivered spectacularly, as expected.

Nothing major to say, I think I caught a typ--no, that was something else--. I really like watching Harry grow up inside such a short amount of time. It's kinda interesting and brings back the occasional memory from my own growing up.

I think that overall my favorite part of this story so far is the relationship between Harry and Gabby though. It honestly seems to be the most healthy relationship Harry has right now, and although it has the potential to have the biggest fallout, it's almost mind-rottingly cute and I just plain like to read about it and I make no bones about that fact. 's good stuff.

Looking forward to more next time.

Davideg posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 10:00pm for Chapter 4

once again another fantastic chapter thank you for sharing please contine to update a.s.a.l.a.