dianaanne posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:51pm for Chapter 1

You've done it again, Tim! (I'm one of Michelle's friends and am so glad she introduced me to your writing. Can't wait to see the results of Sirius' meeting with Dumbledore.)

Anne

cherrypit8 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:44pm for Chapter 1

This is great! I'm glad to see another story from you. No worries about the light or non beta'ing...your writing is entertainment at its best. Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Happy writing!

laochodia posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:43pm for Chapter 1

Please please write more of this....I love the way you are writing the twins, and the entire concept is wholeheartedly amusing.

Grace Cole posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:35pm for Chapter 1

This is hilarious!!!! I am so glad that you are writing this. I can't wait for the next chapter.

athenewolfe posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:29pm for Chapter 1

I LOVED THIS

Sashi posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:27pm for Chapter 1

Let's see: Funny? Check. Interesting take on a Harry standard plot? Check. Over the top and yet reasonable characterizations? Check. Smoothest editing job ever? Ok, there you've got me. Still, given the first three, you think we care about the fourth?

Look, I write and edit for a friggin' living. Would I want to do it as my hobby? HELL no, that's why there's cupcakes in the oven, three kinds of filling in the fridge and five new cookbooks on the way from Amazon. Do what you love for the love of it, and please keep sharing it with the rest of us!

aemilyl24 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:41pm for Chapter 1

Awesome chapter! I love this premise. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Keep up the great work!

ThunderGod posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:32pm for Chapter 1

really enjoyed this story, had a laugh and can't wait for more..I read your stories because they are funny, and entertaining..You are a great writer

Timbo

Knolli posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:16pm for Chapter 1

I LOVE it! Please More!

LifeScientist posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:34pm for Chapter 1

Brilliant! This is hysterical and up to your normal high standards with respect to plotting and flow. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of this and thank you for an awesome read.
Matt

djo posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:24pm for Chapter 1

You just confirmed why I regard you as (at least) one of the best fan fic authors in the HP world! I really loved this - it's so over the top that it's probable again!

Flamefoxrose posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:12pm for Chapter 1

Thank you for this great story. I really like Fred and George explain and helping Harry. And showing Harry for are his real friends are. I eagerly await the next chapter.

David Drum posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:11pm for Chapter 1

Hot Damn! That is one hell of a story!

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:05pm for Chapter 1

I LOVE IT! and I can't wait for the next chapter!

I only have one comment to make - and I may be mistaken. I always thought the dark mark was on the Left arm (refering to the line: Karkaroff was lodging elsewhere, as really didn’t want anyone collecting the bounty on his right arm).

But really - who cares! It's your story and you can put the dark mark where ever you want!

Thank you for all your great stories and for hosting this site.

I look forward to your next chapter.

rdgale

Ali posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:02pm for Chapter 1

It is a bit rougher than some of your prior works, but still enjoyable. I stand by what I said in response to your explanation - don't sell yourself short. You're not a crap writer.

This was a fun romp, and I'm interested in seeing what else you've got planned. It reminds me a lot, stylistically, of This Means War, which was also a story of yours I had a blast reading. I hope you keep it up, and you have fun writing this.

Kat Traxx posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:32pm for Chapter 1

Positively brilliant! I've never actually seen this approach taken before and not only was it extremely well written, but I was very sad to see only one chapter so far. Thanks for making me smile and laugh!

John Wilburn posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:27pm for Chapter 1

Tim,
Though the years I have enjoyed your writing very much. This new work is off to a good start, and I look forward to more.
Thank you very much,
John

Wookie13 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:18pm for Chapter 1

Nicely done! I look forward to the coming chapters! I believe this is the first story of this kind that I've read and while I don't usually post comments this is a great beginning. I love your other work as well. Hope and TMW are 2 of my favorites.

jenks posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:13pm for Chapter 1

Oh man this one is a winner!Love what you've got so far.Hope to see more soon.

rkwahl83 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:12pm for Chapter 1

I like this twist on Tri-Wiz. I hope to see more of this story.