K. posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:12pm for Chapter 1

LOVE IT!!! I want to read more of this, and soon!!! *grin*

wraithwolfe posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:10pm for Chapter 1

I like this alot. An interesting twist on how to handle the tri-wiz tournament. Look forward to reading the next chapter.

veela504 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:10pm for Chapter 1

Fan Freakingtastic! More, please. Definately more!!!!!!

Nic Clarke posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:00pm for Chapter 1

Brilliant! As other reviewers have already said, this story is better than 99% of HP fanfiction currently being written. Perfectionism is all well and good, but it can also be taken too far - your stories are well plotted, well written and to be honest there's not much else you can do to improve them. I'm looking forward to whatever comes next.

timt020 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:49pm for Chapter 1

This one could be very good, Please update soon.

Sonicdale posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:48pm for Chapter 1

You leave is with thar cliffie? Oh, good work, man. Good work.

Entilzah posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:46pm for Chapter 1

Love it! Unleashing the tornado that is the Weasley Twins and your usual spin on Harry. Great piece! If we get more of this than I am a happy man. If not... well, still happy man!

wolfey posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:43pm for Chapter 1

I love this story. I love about 90 percent of your stories lol. But this is a review for this story and a request. Can you plz update some of your buffy stories? Like the warrior and the with and wild horses?

paulaluv2001 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:42pm for Chapter 1

OMG This is so funny! Can't wait for more!

jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:41pm for Chapter 1

ROFL!!!!! what an absolute hoot...and I really enjoyed reading it!!! I read your explanation and I don't care one jot...If you want to write a rollicking good story that's a tad over the top and light on the "deep" stuff...go for it...it's a fun read!!!

Liz :))

Dicknorn posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:38pm for Chapter 1

This sounds like a very interesting and original twist to the tri-wizard tournament. I would quite enjoy reading a few more chapters to this story. I hope you do continue this one as it appears that the plot and time line would have some very funny Fred and George inspired madness.

rowin posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:37pm for Chapter 1

Great so far hope you continue this story and your naruto one.

Primy148 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:33pm for Chapter 1

Another great fc. I like the touch of Godfather.

Anand posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:25pm for Chapter 1

This was awesome! In your explanation, you beat yourself up a bit about quality and cliches, and obviously, you know yourself, but this story was just plain FUN! I do hope you enjoy writing it, because I love reading it.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:25pm for Chapter 1

This has got to be the most fun that Harry has ever had while remaining in the Tri-Wizard.

IT is inescapable that you, my dear Jeconais, are a true genius and will one day be greeted at the Pearly Gates by tears of joy by all your fans finally meeting you face to face.

thanks so much for yet another excellent story.

I particularly love the subcontractors

Phntm-Phnx posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:21pm for Chapter 1

this story kicks ass...it's completely over the top and so unlike JK's Harry Potter. please keep the chapters coming!!!!

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:19pm for Chapter 1

I'm kind of hoping there will be more of this, this is brilliant!

Tanaxanth posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:14pm for Chapter 1

I loved it! personally I'm just glad you are writing and sharing.
One possible Typo

Hermione looked up and smiled at him. "Go to bed, Harry. You look tired. You’re going to have to work hard over the next few months to survive."

"I’ve already taken some steps to help with that," he confessed.

"Good," Hermione agreed. "Now [u]shoot[/u], I want to finish this book before I go to bed."

"Night, Hermione."

"Night, Harry."

Harry walked up to his room, feeling even better. Not only did Fred and George believe in him, Hermione had proved to herself that he couldn’t have got in to the tournament on his own. And things were back to being fine between them!


Should that have been shoo?

Memory King posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:07pm for Chapter 1

This is over the top and doesn't pretend to be otherwise.

That's exactly why it's so awesome!

The timeline is a bit odd in places, but the general feeling of the story more than made up for it.

Looking forward to more!

sparrowphoenix posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:03pm for Chapter 1

I can't wait for more. This is absolutely wonderful and what I wished would have happened. Dump Ron by the wayside as he is and always will be such a jealous idiot.