Jarrod posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:27am for Chapter 1

Wow, this is the sort of silly oddness that we expect from you Jeconais. Keep it up. I really like how the twins just decided to spin this around and run with an opportunity.

migele posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:20am for Chapter 1

Rofl.

I love it. This one is very amusing. I wonder how the next one will be.

A bit fast on the pacing though.

Neil Glover posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:18am for Chapter 1

Another brilliant start to a story, I hope that you will continue this.

amysds posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:17am for Chapter 1

I'm so excited to see a new story! I love all your writing and love the over the top stuff you do. Super Harry etc. Also love it when you pair Harry with a different character like Gabrielle. I haven't actually read this chapter yet (sorry) because I wanted to wait for another chapter so I don't go crazy with anticipation! I like the author to get ahead of me a bit... Anyhoo theres so many ways to improve the fourth and fifth books- hated six and seven. I've always loved Sirius acting like a real Dad or laughing it up over Harry's antics with the ladies. Ok now I'm rambling and will try to end it but not go back to the top and read yet....who am I kidding?! I'll totally read tonight and now this review is worthless - sorry!

Longreach posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:11am for Chapter 1

Oh god this was so good it HURT (I fell out of my seat laughing at one point and damn near broke my wrist).

Please oh please for the love of goats MORE!

PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:08am for Chapter 1

That was by far one of the most enjoyable reads I've had in quite a while!!!! I LOVE the 5,000 Galleon bounty on Death Eater arms! That is by far the most original way to deal with Death Eaters that I have ever read. I greatly look forward to see the next installment!!!

PA

Waywren Truesong posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:56pm for Chapter 1

*spends a while laughing hysterically*

This was just the thing to reduce finals stress. Loving it!

Garnok posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:55pm for Chapter 1

MORE! This was getting good just as you ended it. Some of the talking back and forth was a little confusing. It jumped characters without revealing who was speaking. Other than that it is a great start.

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:54pm for Chapter 1

A great story, keep it up.

DrT posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:33pm for Chapter 1

Very fun story. Great use of Padfoot, and of course of the two boys from Luton! I have some idea about what you've written about writing. I know I am still 'epic-ed' out myself. Still, some ideas still beg to be written. . . .

Tira Misu posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:32pm for Chapter 1

I think I love this more than I've ever loved anything you've written before. And I REALLY love your other fics. But this? This totally owns me.

mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:29pm for Chapter 1

Um how is this worse? And Um... do you plan more for this story or is it just as is? cause really I could do more with these kind of stories with the laughter and all. By the way great chapter.

Vincent posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:26pm for Chapter 1

*Blinks several times in a row*....Harry asking the Twins for help?
Is he insane or something. (then again it Is Hogwarts, a place where insanity is the norm)

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:26pm for Chapter 1

A fantastic story so far very clever and funny. Its great that Harry is learning all he needs and learning about woman and a girlfriend is a must. The twins were really something the way they dealt with Sirius was a joy to read "bad padfoot" The bodyguards and dark mark arms was an interesting idea. I can't wait for the next chapter this one ended well.

Bill Hagridsson posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:25pm for Chapter 1

Fun stuff! I don't think I've ever seen this take on the Tournament. As for deep & meaningful? Meh...who needs that? I like where this one is heading and look forward to more of it.

Panaka posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:23pm for Chapter 1

Genius, pure Genius!

miahtech posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:23pm for Chapter 1

I love it, and look forward to more.

Dakaath@TTH posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:21pm for Chapter 1

I like it.

Its funny to see the Twins as the genius business men they are, orchastrating everything with a showman's touch. I espeically like the bodyguards, Crusher and Smasher easily beat all those stories out there where Harry hires ex-hit wizards.

you take a cliche like bounties on death eaters and you give it a new and creative edge, Sirius using his money to prove his innocence.

Everything about this story so far has been amausing and I can't wait to see where it goes.

vheritas posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:19pm for Chapter 1

I absolutely adore this story!
Smasher, Crusher et al sound like the beginnings of the Seven Biker Dwarves from Hell, Fred and George are a hoot, Sirius is wonderful (as is the book drooling Hermione), the payment/incentive scheme is brilliant, and I am seriously hanging out for updates.

booster-t posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:19pm for Chapter 1

This is FANTASTIC! It's so wacko that it works ... I can see George and Fred doing just that ... not sure about Crabbe and Goyle ... looking forward to the eruptions of the two Mt. Weasleys