94caddy posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:57am for Chapter 1

Hilarious story. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:56am for Chapter 1

Good show. I am always pleased to hear from you and you certainly don't disappoint with this offering. Thanks for writing. W.

Akraa posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:51am for Chapter 1

Absolutely hilarious. My only critiques fall into matters of technique, so I will leave them by the wayside. Nice work.

Zicou posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:50am for Chapter 1

wow another of your story that looks awesome!!!
Continuuuuuuuuuue,
Z.

Chris1 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:22am for Chapter 1

Awesomeawesomeawesome :D Thanks for sharing this!

Chris

shebvixen posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:17am for Chapter 1

Very Kick Ass! Great Job, very funny!

W Mayberry posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:07am for Chapter 1

LOL Great Start! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Hope the Muses allow you the chance Soon!

noylj posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:02am for Chapter 1

Very good. I like the few stories where Harry actually has a brain or is proactive or knows to get some help.
You write however you like and I will continue to enjoy. The only reasons to write fanfics are 1) for the fun of it or 2) to try to polish your writing style. The latter can be done with original fics and the joy of rejection letters.

PMON posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:01am for Chapter 1

This is amazing work, and deserves to be listed as one of your best story beginnings to date. While you seem to believe that your new work is worse, I am of the opinion that your writing talents merely lean towards humour and possibly parody. Even in some of your more serious fanfiction, there was a strong sense of irony at points. I don't doubt that you could indeed be a professional writer, assuming you stuck to your strengths. I hope you will write more of this soon, as it seems like it will be good fun.

Edward Becerra posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:01am for Chapter 1

Jesus Quack!

This is a MASTERPIECE!

It's hilarious, and its only lack is that it's not epic in length. I can only hope that you'll add to it now and agan whenever the muse strikes.

Sincerely,

Ed Becerra

lauren2 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:59am for Chapter 1

LOVE IT!!!

I never stopped laughing, can't wait for the next installment.

Lauren

lord_silver posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:49am for Chapter 1

Hey great star to a story!

It was excellent. Also I read your explanation & agree with everyone that
we are looking forward to whatever you produce, however you may produce it.

You still are the most talented author in fandom & even though you say that you have given up on being a professional writer I really think that you have what it takes.

Thanks for a great new story.

wuoreb posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:41am for Chapter 1

This is really fun. I love the idea of the twins fixing Harry's life. Can't wait to read more.

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:38am for Chapter 1

Amusing and fun so far. It will be interesting to see where this all goes...

Ian Major posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:30am for Chapter 1

Okay, I love it so far, (so what if there are cliches, it's FUN!)

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:24am for Chapter 1

Silly and typo-ridden, but oh what fun! Several LOL moments.


}} "This is a once in a life time opportunity," George said, losing the
}} game-show personality. "You’ve come to us at just the right time."

:)


}} "Every time you get Snape or Malfoy to that colour of red, you get a
}} twenty galleon bonus," Harry offered. "One hundred for every accidental
}} broken bone that happens to any of them."
:D


}} "Cold water is being bestest cure ever."

:P

Ash posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:23am for Chapter 1

Now this is how I wish Harry had acted in the books instead of being a pushover.

Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:21am for Chapter 1

I like it. I like it very much.

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:18am for Chapter 1

OK. Have to say this is wonderful. You've clearly taken Fred and George from Perfect Situations so there is only one answer to the pairings dilemma, namely Daphne Greengrass. Cannot wait to see that happen despite your protestations otherwise. Still looking forward to seeing Wednesday in her 3rd year (hint, hint). That being the case, we will overlook the typos for the moment....(as Forge and Gred would say, we are not worthy, at least not until Wednesday -- or Daphne -- makes her reappearance).

nothorse posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:15am for Chapter 1

Please continue having fun with this, it's cute, fun and very enjoyable.