Chaseme720 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:52am for Chapter 1

This story is awesome!

Silly_Billy posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:46am for Chapter 1

Well Done! A very interesting and humourous little tale that had me laughing out loud, well it was more like a few giggles really, but I digress.

speedy_86 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:35am for Chapter 1

The story is very enjoyable, thanks and it's good to hear from you again :)

murdock posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:29am for Chapter 1

this is great. more more more.

Phil Boswell posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:28am for Chapter 1

I like all of it except what you have the twins say about Ginny: in canon they regarded her as their apprentice and potential successor, and took care of her as big brothers should (face it, everybody failed her after the Chamber). I am sorry that you have fallen into this trap/trope but look forward to seeing where you take the story.

AlaskanKing posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:19am for Chapter 1

I love this story. I had tears in my eyes when Dobby dunked the twins. Definitely looking forward to reading more.

Shadowstar posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:19am for Chapter 1

The best Tri-Wizard Tournament story that I have ever read keep up the good work.

Robert Owen posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:03am for Chapter 1

Brilliant! I am definately looking forward to the actual tourney and the ball.

Robert

Pointer posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:02am for Chapter 1

"Harry felt his breath go again."

Since he must breathe, he'll adjust sooner or later.

Fun story. Which, frankly, is why I read fanfiction. Too much angst is depressing. I don't need to read fiction to get depressed.

Enjoy your work.

Eragon2099 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:57am for Chapter 1

i absolutely love this fic please continue it and i am eagerly anticipating the next chapter

katrina posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:48am for Chapter 1

This is great - I should be packing for my holiday (leave in 1hr 15mins) and haven't packed anything, cos I am laughing at your story. I knew it was a mistake to check my emails - but hat a mistake. Looking forward to reading more and finding out Ron's reaction. Loved the twins and Padfoot -oh bother loved it all.

Darkon posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:28am for Chapter 1

Read the explanation, can understand what you are saying but sad to see it. I like almost all your stories; I don't read Buffy or your other categories other than Naruto. I am an avid reader at ff net so I'm used to horrendously written fanfiction and I know that unless you are trying to be as bad as possible yours is still better then them. I live by the code "I write for me and post for you" so you know I don't blame you for not posting any new stories or updating any of the ones already up. I just want to say I wish you would continue and that I will be sad to see you stop. May you do as you wish.

JoFarries posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:28am for Chapter 1

Dear sweet merciful heaven.

What a fantastic first chapter! I absolutely loved this, every single letter, every single word, sentence, paragraph! Your canon characters are spot on, your original characters are magnificent. I particularly like how you pulled Crabbe and Goyle into this whole thing! Your story-line is believeable, and I love the way you've pulled Sirius into the whole thing!

I can't wait until the next chapter! I am SO looking forward to it! Write faster, please? :-D

Jo F.

DizzyG posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:21am for Chapter 1

Well, I don't think I've read any fic with this premise before. So far, so good.
Aw, who am I kidding? I'm checking my inbox on an hourly basis looking for an update.

James13 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:18am for Chapter 1

Arm bounty! Awesome!

hallow posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:15am for Chapter 1

I love your work, this one had me in fits of laughter the whole time, you have an excellent writing style, and are able to add personality quirks to the people you write about that make them seem so realistic and life like.
I hope in the future there may be many more stories like this.

Hallow

Charles Newton posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:15am for Chapter 1

And once again, The Great and All Wonderful God Author What Am Jeconais has Blessed His fans with His Magnificent Gift of Story.
Please may we have More?

Dragonmage182 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:15am for Chapter 1

Awesome so far. Any story that the twins play a part in kicking ass and taking names is good in my book. Also a new interesting way to go with the story. Not many people use the method of Harry hiring someone. As always you have yet to disappoint.

CaffeineAddict posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:11am for Chapter 1

I like this so far. It's irreverent, funny, and otherwise lighthearted. At the same time it flows well and it doesn't seem stilted. If this is "shitty" I wish a lot of fanfic authors had that level of skill. It may not be anything deep or moving but I like having a laugh every now and then. I'll comment on your explanation here as well if you don't mind and just say this: what better reason do you have to write this stuff than for personal enjoyment? If you didn't enjoy it then what would be the point?

Cheers,

CA

Kal posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:05am for Chapter 1

It has been far too long since I laughed so hard. THANK YOU!