Amamama posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:56am for Chapter 1

Man, this is fun. *grin* Really. I love your well written over-the-top stories. Sure it might get darker and won't be as fun all times, but you do it with panache. I go to St.Margarets when I want deep stories with several layers hidden within wonderful romance. And I go to your stories when I'm in the mood for fun, simple stories that are totally delicious, with a great grasp of the English language. The way you have F&G take charge of Harry here, is quite simply a lot of fun. I look forward to seeing what those two will come up with next. Thanks for sharing, it's very much appreciated. Cheers!

sidiousclone posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:53am for Chapter 1

damn talk about a cliffy why why why no stopping at the good parts lol more more

Gaelyn posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:23am for Chapter 1

This is AWESOME! More please!

alaine1910 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:17am for Chapter 1

Great start, still laughing at bits, looking for the next chapter.

noahshonor posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:07am for Chapter 1

Damn! I'm just sayin'.

BioHazard82 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:59am for Chapter 1

Very good start to your story. Can't wait to read more in the future.

loatroll posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:48am for Chapter 1

By the way, something I forgot, I think it's great that Harry doesn't find "tru-love" in this story, that if anything should be cliche by now, what are the odds of people finding "tru-love" every time? Especially with a named character.

loatroll posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:36am for Chapter 1

Very interesting! I like that you're giving the twins a big role in this.
I generally like everything about this story, the bodyguard idea is genious :D And the death-eater arm reward is also genious.

I actually had an thought a few days ago on the twins, what if they had a bigger role in the HP-books? It could make the series a lot more fun to read, not to mention less filled with angst/drama :-P

Some might complain about cliches and stuff but not me, cliches are cliches because they work well, and just because something is cliche or slightly cliche doesn't mean you shouldn't use it and twist it to your own purposes.

I love the ending by the way :D Something that the canon Harry really could have needed.

So in general: Great work! And thanks for the excellent read so far, and I'm really looking forward to more!

InuukaHanroa posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:23am for Chapter 1

good work keep it up

Magi398 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:18am for Chapter 1

Just pure win so far. If this is how you feel you are going to write from here on out more power to you.

stealacandy posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:02am for Chapter 1

1. Harry's wand is 11 inches, not 12.

2. Souldn't the bodyguards call Hermione Ma'am, or perhps Miss, rather than lady?

3. At this time Sirius is not living at his childhood home at #12 Grimauld Place, but is eiter somewhere abroad, on the move back to Britain aving heard abput Harry's entranc into the Tournament, or already is a cav near Hogsmead.

helsmaid posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:52am for Chapter 1

I LOVE IT!!!!! please keep writting

Mihir posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:39am for Chapter 1

smasher, crusher, masher and thrasher .... say that out loud 50 times as fast as you can!!!

Brilliant chapter mate! keep 'em coming!

BBHarry posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:16am for Chapter 1

Like it ? No, love it !! Wonderful story !!! Carry on :)

Hemotem posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:14am for Chapter 1

OMFG!! This has to be the greatest idea I have read in a long time I look forward to seeing more of this in the future.



Hemotem

drewz05 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:59am for Chapter 1

Looks very promising, can't wait to see what direction this story goes.

Kaze Dono posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:48am for Chapter 1

Pure...awesome......
I couldn't stop smiling ^__^

Tiberianfest posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:32am for Chapter 1

Pls write more is is so good and funny one of the funneist fanfic i have read in quite awhile.

honeymufins posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:27am for Chapter 1

I love it.
I think the light, breezy, gloss-over-the-plot-holes style is very charming. I have recently found my taste for 'Harry-wins, or Harry-gets-revenge, or Harry-gets-to-be-happy-and-funny stories (or what ever these type of stories happen to be called these days).
I look forward to reading Harry's continuing adventures with the Weasley Twins and the fabbo bodyguards, plus the bounty on Dark Marks is wonderful!

cah11 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:53am for Chapter 1

definately an interesting plot story, don't think i have ever run into anything even remotely like this before, great chapter, update soon.
cah11