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Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 4:57pm for Chapter 4

Ha! What is this, his second day awake, and he's already taken care of Fudge and Malfoy? Brilliant! Outstanding work as usual, thank you.

DrT posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 4:33pm for Chapter 4

BBQ Ferret? Blech. Not at brekkers Another nice, fast-moving chapter

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 4:18pm for Chapter 4

simply stunning - -every sentence perfectly crafted, mpossible to leave the screen til the end, and Malfoy, Fudge and Albus all out manoeuvered in the space of 1/2 an hour.
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thanks for a superb story

Memory King posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 4:01pm for Chapter 4

Still enjoying this as much as earlier, can't wait to read more!

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 3:42pm for Chapter 4

nice do uy think u acna update befor next thursday becosue i lvoe this storie sooooooooooooooooo much

amulder posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 3:14pm for Chapter 4

Well, I can say that I see John's fingers in this chapter. The legalese, the chaste nap, to name the two most prominent.

I'm kind of disappointed that Draco is so quickly gone. But your final comment about Castles... makes me realise I'm just going to have to be content with how things are unfolding.

I see almost what appears to be the foundation of a "Potter/Black/Weasley" worldwide conglomerate multinational.


best wishes,
...art

Orion posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 3:10pm for Chapter 4

Great Chapter.

UdderPD posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 3:04pm for Chapter 4

It must get booring but once again this is brilliant.

TTFN UdderPD

silentjackal posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 3:02pm for Chapter 4

keep it going!
Love how its gone so far

daewos posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 2:59pm for Chapter 4

Minerva is a potty-mouth! Shocking. Another great chapter and cannot wait for the next one.

Fernir posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 2:45pm for Chapter 4

Probably not healthy to sit and hit refersh ever five minutes... While I like the characters you have built up here, I do not get the feeling of conflict like I did in Hope - here it looks like all the characters have everything worked out for them already, and the only thing that needs doing is for them to tie up loose ends. Not quite sure what to think of that yet.

Still, solid writing, and pleasant to read. Keep at it Jeconais :-)

Killedbykarma posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 2:42pm for Chapter 4

You always come up with amazing ways to kill off/get rid of Draco.

redjacobson posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 2:20pm for Chapter 4

There were just too many things I loved in this chapter Tim!

The one that stands out was Minerva's "We're All Screwed!" It was so out of character that I had to laugh.

I also enjoyed Percy telling Fudge off; and Albus' decision to sit back and watch the fireworks.

Now I just wish I had a big fast-forward button so I could get the next chapter

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