gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2016 6:54pm for Clearing up loose ends

More teenage stuff, but in a good way. Characters are well-written, well-developed and consistent; while close enough to canon, they have evolved into something both different and believable. Good story!

Snag posted a comment on Friday 26th September 2014 9:39am for Clearing up loose ends

Haven't seen you visit Buffy-land in quite some time. Nicely done. Bonus points for using the Diamondbacks for the baseball team. I'm an Arizona native, and it's quite nice to see the home team get a little fiction love.

keichan2 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th July 2014 3:21pm for Clearing up loose ends

"how many nice guys do you know that are a success in politics?" You know what? THIS is the proof that he is evil!

Note: I like your Harmony, too ;-)

Thanks for the new chapter!

I hope to read more soon!

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Tuesday 8th July 2014 2:35pm for Clearing up loose ends

Much more grown-up than I remember being at that aage. A great read, thanks.

Michael Foerster posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 1:13pm for Clearing up loose ends

Your Harmony (and how she came to be) is great and full of realism. Giles bantering with Xander and Faith gives their relationship (Pseudo Parent / elder Children) a depth, that I miss in most other BtVS fan works. Thanks for sharing.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 12:56pm for Clearing up loose ends

I like this Harmony.

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 8:11am for Clearing up loose ends

Lovely, hilarious and surprisingly poignant in places.

I'm now firmly told about Harmony. I just can't help liking her in this edition.

Just by growing up a bit, the Pair moves like giants through their contemporaries. As they are not adults, but not childish either, they achieve a middle ground that's surprisingly elevated. It's obvious now when i see it written but I've never thought of it before.

The big plan is clever, funny, well thought out and completely late-season Xander. Corny, but effective.

Fertilizer explosives are extremely common. I mixed my first batch when i was about 11, I think. Good for moving rocks out of the way for me, obliterating cement trucks for Mythbusters and I assume it'd do a good job on a Mayor as well.

I'm staying tuned. I just have to wait until I'm in front of a proper screen before i read your works, and phones don't count, no matter how smart they are.

Thanks.

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bastiaan posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 7:22am for Clearing up loose ends

i love this story. i actually keep rereadeing the chapters. it's fun and for me it aint getting boring to reread it.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 4:06am for Clearing up loose ends

That was a fun chapter and quite enjoyable as some folks come to realize their mistakes but are unable to correct them. It should be most interesting to see how this "prank" goes down and I do wonder about the improvised explosives and where they'll be placed. The final chapter promises to be an equally fun read.

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 1:59am for Clearing up loose ends

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Luan Mao posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 1:35am for Clearing up loose ends

Carnsarndablangit, I coulda sworn the trojan horse was in the Iliad - the horse was used in taking Ilium, so of course it would be in that book. But according to Wikipedia it was the Odyssey. Dangit, it's not good when the fact-checker gets his facts wrong.

As for posting schedules and sport schedules, if it doesn't already have the feature, you should enhance your site software to allow for scheduled releases. This would let you set a story to publish Saturday evening even though you'd be glued to the TV, beer in one hand and giant "We're Number One" foam finger in the other, or whatever Brit pro sports fanatics do to demonstrate their fanaticism.

Michael10 posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 1:10am for Clearing up loose ends

keep up the good work

Chiyo posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 12:23am for Clearing up loose ends

Somehow I expected a bigger blowup from the former friends but I guess an immediate Buffy punch then blocked by Faith would cool the rest off. That combined with Willow being only at "season 3" level means short of a full moon no one could take on Faith and live physically and you've shown repeatedly that verbal sparring is not the scoobies strong suit.

Loved the chapter and really looking forward to the conclusion. You write Harmony particularly well - shes likable. Much like Faith I'm not sure why I like her since I remember many Harmony's from high school but I like her just the same.

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 12:02am for Clearing up loose ends

I'm still surprised how much I'm liking Harmony in this story, and I really hope she survives graduation. Gotta love Faith's attitude about things, informing Xander they are getting to second base was a hoot!

red

erbkaiser posted a comment on Saturday 5th July 2014 11:12pm for Clearing up loose ends

I like pretty much everything about this chapter.

The blessed water pistols idea is pure genius. If the canon Scoobies had only had a brain....