gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2016 4:51am for Broken

While I wouldn't mind being younger, I would hate to be a teen again. The author took two young people under stress and mixed in a measure of emotional distress and a dash of angst, and wrote a scene that any of us could recognize from our own teenage years. Now: what will he do with it?

Keats449 posted a comment on Wednesday 9th July 2014 12:48am for Broken

"You do," he replied. "But you know the non-broken me. You know the goof-ball, the joker. I am him. He is me. But now I am broken, and he is hiding."

I think the idea of Xander and Faith meeting up under these circumstances and trying to help each other is interesting, but there's some really silly/over-the-top/eye-roll inducing writing in this.

Chi Vayne posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2014 8:58pm for Broken

Nice start. Something that could have happened if Faith had be talked to when she was most vulnerable.

Fireshadow277 posted a comment on Monday 23rd June 2014 3:18pm for Broken

really cool

bonnie posted a comment on Monday 23rd June 2014 7:03am for Broken

Really liked how this is going. Liked your characterizations of Faith and Xander, not to mention I like reading a Xander centric story that doesn't turn him into an All powerful super soldier that can solve any problem at the drop of a hat. I like Faikt and think she was one of the most abused characters on Buffy. The took the easy way out to contrast the differences between her and Buffy by turning her "evil" instead of dealing with the realities of "friendly fire" deaths that I'm surprised didn't happen more often and was pure luck that it happened to Faith instead of Buffy. Looking forward to where you take this and what changes Faith not turning makes to the rest of season 3 canon.

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Monday 23rd June 2014 4:32am for Broken

Interesting start

Banner posted a comment on Monday 23rd June 2014 1:27am for Broken

That was *wrenching*. Just lovely. Thank you.

Michael10 posted a comment on Monday 23rd June 2014 12:52am for Broken

anothr awesome peek into BTVS.

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 22nd June 2014 11:05pm for Broken

Interesting start, and definately higher on the angst than I'm used to seeing from you. A minor observation, you've got this categorized under Harry Potter and not Buffy, so people looking for this later may have a hard time finding it.

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