DarkWingsDarkWords48 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 10:20am for Chapter 8

I'm really loving this story, and especially your takes on Romilda and Astoria (and Daphne). man, krum's father is hilarious :D

Just one continuity issue I thought I should point out, that I noticed this chapter. You have the line: " he could see an Asian couple that were clearly Cho’s parents, and an English-looking couple that he guessed where Cedric’s parents "

Harry doesn't know Cedric's mother, but he's already been introduced to Amos Diggory before your AU/divergence point begins - he meets Amos (with Cedric) when they meet up with Amos to take the portkey to the Quidditch World Cup, so he shouldn't need to guess for him ;).

Sanabalis posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 10:10am for Chapter 8

Excellent chapter!

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 7:22am for Chapter 8

If Harry does not end up with either Astoria or Romilda or both, then his head should be examined at Saint Mungo's for brain damage.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 7:16am for Chapter 8

LOVED IT!!!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:45am for Chapter 8

Fun chapter and what a diverse group has now formed because Harry got everyone together! It should be fun to read how the group progresses in time. I really liked Harry's comments to Mr. Greengrass about how he acted the stupid teen about girls. Smart boy that one! I've just reread Hogwarts' Dawn and either laughed or cried the entire way. Perhaps it was my allergy to the pines since I've got the windows open, lol. Thanks for sharing.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:44am for Chapter 8

Fun chapter and what a diverse group has now formed because Harry got everyone together! It should be fun to read how the group progresses in time. I really liked Harry's comments to Mr. Greengrass about how he acted the stupid teen about girls. Smart boy that one! Thanks for sharing.

Lisagrace posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 5:56am for Chapter 8

Great chapter. Love how the parents are making plans. Romi taking out Vernon, that was great.

Stormwatcher posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 5:54am for Chapter 8

The funniest line in the whole chapter--"Harry brungs it." Had me letting out a big laugh. The whole story is fantastic, but the new arrangement between the families should be very interesting. Greatly enjoying the story.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 5:54am for Chapter 8

I had thought that Harry's ID must had a compulsion charm on it

Silo posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 4:19am for Chapter 8

i like it so whats next and i hope harry ends up with both romilda and astora

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 3:53am for Chapter 8

Truly a fun chapter as the world begins to be reshaped and none, outside of those present, realize it. This was definitely a fun party and I look forward to seeing all the various fallouts from it as matters develop. Methinks that Dumbledore, Fudge, and Riddle are going to be the most disconcerted by the changes as plans, schemes, and machinations are rendered void without warning.

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 3:52am for Chapter 8

Another enjoyable chapter, and I can see why you mentioned having so much fun writing Viktor's father. His mother was a hoot as well. I'm intrigued by the little bit of insight into something in Derek's past, behind the ridiculously good looking facade.

Sorry to see that this story is winding down, because it's been a lot of fun and it seems like, from the conversation among the parents, that there could be a lot more story left to tell.

See you next week

Red

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 3:25am for Chapter 8

once again I thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put in to this story please continue to update as life allows

Brian64 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 2:37am for Chapter 8

Another great chapter. There are plenty of HP fanfics on the net that are full of action, but darn few writers bother to take the time to develop their characters. I enjoy the interactions between the 'b list' cast, and I don't mind reading scenes that occur between main plot advancement events.

Commando987 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 1:40am for Chapter 8

Not gonna lie I love your work but this chapter was... meh. I mean it didn't really move the plot along and it was basically a 15k party. I was really looking forward to Harry's test and possibly a Hermione love interest out of the blue. My favorite part about your work is that every chapter moves along the plot. I just left disappointed in this chapter which has never happened to me when reading your work.

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 1:23am for Chapter 8

Great chapter. Thanks for writing. W.