TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 4:52am for Chapter 3

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

michaelsuave posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 4:51am for Chapter 3

Ha! And there is the look "blue steel" I mentioned. Next you know harry will be donating to start "the harry potter class for kids who can't smith good and want to do other things good." Made me smile to read this chapter.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 3:19am for Chapter 3

Funny chapter, I like that Dobby told Harry to kick butt

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 2:33am for Chapter 3

I'm impressed, very impressed. Really am enjoying this story (and author notes) very much.

Thanks for writing.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 2:19am for Chapter 3

The First task was awesome as written and most enjoyable. The look at the Greengrass family's homelife was quite pleasant and it's good to see a sound wizarding family. The crusade for Sirius should have interesting consequences and I find this Amelia Bones quite plausible, no nonsense but not without self-interesting; she's going to be either a major antagonist and a major ally. I do love the way this story is evolving and look forward to more.

Frederick Herriot posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 1:25am for Chapter 3

The idea of Lucius singing Que Sera, Sera doesn't do my stomach wonders . . .!

Still, it was funny.

LongLivedOne posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 1:02am for Chapter 3

Dammit!!! I was reading Derek's lines in Zoolander's voice!! Outstandingly hilarious!! And a Bones that is not so 'nice and light and all things good'... can I have some more, please, sir?

Jason Karr posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 12:46am for Chapter 3

nice chapter looking forward to the next chapter

karlii posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 12:10am for Chapter 3

Ahaha!! Love it!!

I particularly found myself enjoying a Fudge that wasn't plain stupid and anti-Harry.

Lucius singing was hilarious! Looking forward to the next part!

Zaion posted a comment on Saturday 4th October 2014 11:43pm for Chapter 3

You meant impetus in the opening authors note, didn't you?

Yeah, I think you did.

I'm gonna read the rest of the chapter now, kay? Kay.

-ZI