TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 9:12am for Chapter 2

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Encarnia22 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 9:00am for Chapter 2

A wonderful story so far. I love the new interaction that's opened up by including Romilda as a gypsy. I'll be very curious to see where you take this story. But I'm sure like all your other stories, I'll love reading every word of it.

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 8:46am for Chapter 2

MORE PLEASE!! :-D

No - SERIOUSLY; more ASAP please. I'm particularly interested in your take on Romilda. It's nice that someone can write her as something besides a obsessive little psycho with love potions.....

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 8:02am for Chapter 2

Another fine chapter. Thanks so much for writing and sharing. W.

Kacher posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 7:51am for Chapter 2

It is really refreshing story, more power to you.

May the muse be always with you.

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 7:46am for Chapter 2

Another brilliant chapter. Your OC is a very interesting character, that Nadya is a fun character. I wonder how the Slytherins will react to the replacement of Snape. I can't wait for Dobby to dump the smelly students in the Black Lake.

Zicou posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 7:40am for Chapter 2

Great chapter,

I think it's moving very fast, in 2 chapters, they have already "killed" LV.. even if he doesn't know it.

I can't wait too read what you thought for your next chapters :)

Continue,

Z.

vicare posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 7:25am for Chapter 2

You need a new spellchecker, so that Madame Umbridges first name is correct. It is Dolores not Delores.

immortal7 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 7:23am for Chapter 2

Nice. not much else to say but "Smoke me a kipper, luv, I’ll be back for breakfast." best quote in all of scifi

Addlcove posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 7:01am for Chapter 2

Awesome, simply awesome.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 6:34am for Chapter 2

Excellent chapter like always, and is good to see that those two girls won ´t be fighting for him until later when they won ´t make him unconfortable and doesn ´t interfiere with his preparation for the tournament. Please continue soon, I really curious to see how the first task turns out and with whom he goes to the Ball after.

ladysavay posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 6:19am for Chapter 2

This is just so much fun! The addtion of Daphne was wonderful. You have her being so unfiltered that it's very interesting now to see where she will take them. It's like a Luna without the nargle nonsense.

I hardly EVER find a likeable Albus that doesn't feel contrived, among fan fiction stories. The last one was in "The Real Us" by seel'vor. His canon persona shows him to be, at the very least, dangerously senile, if not activley evil, so, that I've come to like this Albus is a great leap for me and a great compliment to you. Thanks for writing this. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 6:05am for Chapter 2

Another great chapter... Can't wait for the next one!!!

diagonalpumpkin posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 6:02am for Chapter 2

Thank you for another excellent chapter. I love seeing the changes taking place in the characters, particularly Dumbledore. The expansion of the families of the new characters is great as well. I hope that we can see and learn more about them as the story goes on. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait until the next update.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 6:00am for Chapter 2

Good chapter and I really like your new character Nadya! I think she will add a great deal to the story. The blacksmithing is rather interesting as well and should as a lot of dimension to Harry, both in character and body, lol. Thanks for sharing.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 5:56am for Chapter 2

I like that Harry get more friends

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 5:40am for Chapter 2

I like the story, but Bumbles seems to have awakened too easily and too quickly--and, implies, that he was an delusional idiot rather than a dark lord as seen in the books. How can Harry NOT want to "make it" with Daphne or other age-appropriate girls? I may not desire to have sex with some attractive girl, but that doesn't mean that at least part of me wouldn't like to. His rejection seems too complete. When I was 14, I couldn't have "closed the door" so tightly.

lmill123 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 5:30am for Chapter 2

I love how this story is going and all the changes being made. It is nice seeing the changes in Dumbledore so that he is becoming a better person. It would be nice seeing Luna join Harry's group.soo. I guess we can expect something from Ron and Ginny soon. Love the house elves because false words won't work on them.

Kortir posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 5:23am for Chapter 2

This is such a fun story! One of my favorite things about your writing is the pacing. Like you said in the author notes, endless repetitive work really can take away from the story after a while. I feel like that's also just as important in regards to the overall story itself, where including too much detail about every last thing that happens tends to make it difficult to read. This is a lot of fun, I've always been intrigued by Astoria's character and her potential in particular, though seeing Romilda characterized as she is, is very enjoyable as well. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter for sure!

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 5:13am for Chapter 2

Wonderful.

One thing i feel that She-Who-Writes-Crappy-Epilogues missed completely is that Hogwarts is British. In the old British magical tales, the Smith does have a special position. While not quite a wizard, the Smith is still a powerful person and i really like that you're picking up hints of that. A few drops of Susan Cooper can only enhance things. There's also the great Norse anti-hero Völund, the biblical Tubal Cain and many others.

'Yes, i also caught the game references. Wouldn't it be fun if he would bowl the dragon over with a Fus Ro Dah? Well, the thought is amusing.

Speaking of amusing, that little quote chain had my wife come to check my health. I do have a slightly excessive laugh, but i rarely actually fall to the floor..=)

Thanks. In case i wasn't clear, i kinda like this story..

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