musketau posted a comment on Monday 29th September 2014 10:56am for Chapter 2

Here i am, desperately waiting for Hogwarts Dawn, and you do something like this! I don't know which one i want updated!!

A great chapter as always, with development in all sorts of unexpected directions (Hermione/Daphne?).

Your stories are full of powerful people doing what's right, i love reading you and robst when i want overwhelming power without arrogance or stupidity bursting out. You make them real people, and they grow as real people.

Dumbledore is improving, and is always fun to see what he'll do. I am surprised there has been no Draco or Weasleys yet, although it hasn't been long. I expect Ron to be a bit of a arse for a while yet, but i hope Ginny isn't going to be the clingy, potiony, Harry/Ginny is the only option we sometimes get. It can be fun in a crack fic, but is too boring otherwise, overused.

You didn't have them find millennia old books! Something different again, and the Emeralds were fake. These are little things, but show you think about theses things instead of just dragging out the old faithfuls. You find a different way to look, even in the same limits of the GOF. I liked Moody's reaction, the way his leg took the curse, and how he could so easily find the curse on the Goblet. These seem more like you'd expect him to react, especially when discovered so early (okay it's been months, but a lot earlier than canon).

You've done Harry taking the triwizard before, but this is so different there is no real comparison. They're both so good.

I'll flip a coin for which one i'd like updated next, but i'll keep the result to myself and just wait for the next part.

Nick5 posted a comment on Monday 29th September 2014 4:29am for Chapter 2

Nice imagery shown, though I didn't take Hermione for a Blues Brothers fan.

dennisud posted a comment on Monday 29th September 2014 1:08am for Chapter 2

What can I say A hoot so far! Wonder were Luna is as she's being bullied in this year as before.

Can she join the group of friends too?

dennisud

rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 8:05pm for Chapter 2

Once again I find that I am enjoying one of your stories. I have been reading ff for years and have never seen a story line like this. Well done even after all the years you have been writing you still come up something new. thank you .

mwinter posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 6:26pm for Chapter 2

Thank you for the update. Awaiting more.

Domnu posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 6:24pm for Chapter 2

Just wanted to say that I'm greatly enjoying the story, and all of the added elements. I like the play on the various types of magic mentioned all over.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 5:16pm for Chapter 2

Another enjoyable chapter, and I had to laugh at Hermione's Blues Brothers Riff.

Red

The Seeker posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 5:07pm for Chapter 2

Wherever you got the idea/inspiration for these characters, they all show your unique stamp. This story is so much fun, in an off-the-wall manner. Albus has literally gone from his Ivory Tower to the least accessible area in Hogwarts and along the way learned he isn't always his own best council. You have the much maligned Gypsies providing the most insights and creative solutions, plus your Romilda is already wonderfully defined but continually surprising. Finally your deconstruction of the Daphne, Ice Princess persona, has been a revelation, with nothing as the first level, then a severely lacking in confidence young witch, and in the end of this chapter, a witch with some amazing talents and insights. It will be interesting to see what other talents she has.

All this makes me very happy we have seven more chapters to enjoy. Thanks, as always, for all your hard work and the amazing characters you create.

The Seeker

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 4:44pm for Chapter 2

This was a great chapter. I am looking forward to when Harry actually casts those curse's at the Dursley's. Hope we get to see those in effect, should be a lot of fun. Thanks for posting.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 4:28pm for Chapter 2

I love the smell of character development in the morning!

TomBrid posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 2:57pm for Chapter 2

Totally love this story :)

goblin214 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 1:35pm for Chapter 2

Awesome I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

artaud91 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 1:28pm for Chapter 2

An absolute pleasure to read. A fresh take on a long running HP theme. I can't wait to see what happens next. Fresh characters and interesting OC's.

Chiyo posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 1:09pm for Chapter 2

About the time daphne had the drawing I started playing the skyrim ost while reading. This story is turning out really well as it's taking bits and pieces from some of your best works and merging them into one. Love it

dg Fry posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 12:49pm for Chapter 2

I've always like the style of the characters that you write, and this is going in an interesting direction. It's also nice to see characters other than the ususal ones intereacting with Harry.

Silo posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 12:26pm for Chapter 2

i really like this just wondering when hogwarts dawn is going to be updated and when perfict slytharens is going to be as well

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 10:34am for Chapter 2

Fantastically yummy chapter! Blacksmith!Harry is a great idea!

LuxEterna posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 9:44am for Chapter 2

i love it

please keep up the good work

ps do you need someone extra to go over it for some of the small mistakes that pop up like a missing 's' or the like

ttim101 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 9:41am for Chapter 2

I love it. Good job. I've read both chaps. Two times already! Great work like always.

josephus posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 9:33am for Chapter 2

'Daphne beamed, before she sighed. "I’m not even sure if I like boys," she whispered.'

Baby!queer Daphne is so adorable!

"What? When you were playing with dollies, gypsy girls were learning to fight with knives and daggers. It goes with the eyes and the dark hair, darlings."

!!! I love your Romilda so much. And her grandmother.

And everything that Astoria says.

'"As of about twenty seconds ago, yes," Dumbledore replied.'

And this.

But mostly, it's nice to see a Daphne with an interesting twist from the usual fanon!Daphne... So much more depth to her character, here...