Alone
Part 2
By Jeconais
Reviews
Manatheron posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 2:12pm for Part 2
AWWWWWWW....
Excellent! Is there going to be another chapter? or is this it?
Knight_Hax0r posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 1:05pm for Part 2
Oooh, another incredible story from you Jeconais. You always produce Superb literature, and this is just another example! I particularlly enjoyed Harry's thrashing of the Aurors!
Thiago posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 1:03pm for Part 2
WoW!!! Tim, It's truly excellent, This is your Stile!!! (sorry if my english, is not far so good, but understand me I'm from spain and it's not my mother language, and not spanish also, Ok stop talking about me!!)
Hey !! I really enjoy all night long, now with alone, I really want to read the third part, and with kokopelli, he's awaesome too!!!
I really want to read all your unfinished stories, Hope TMW and all, be good and continue writing like that, you make me feel like if I'm inside of the sory this is my firs review in all th websit so hope to enjoy it.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 9:17am for Part 2
Some interesting twists there that I didn't expect - mark of a good author that. It'll be interesting to see how this relationship develops and how well Sammy reacts to it. Yet another story for me to follow carefully.
nonjon posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 7:32am for Part 2
You know, it's kind of weird, but from you, learning this entire auror exercise and such was an elaborate poorly designed plan by Ginny to try and get Harry is a little disappointing. Were this story from any other author I would be applauding their creativity at an interesting twist and clever ruse. But for some reason, it feels like this is the sort of plan/twist you've done before, though I'm not sure I can identify which story or stories (or even if it was Ginny). Maybe it's the whole Padma/Gabrielle thing where they try to come up with a way to impress Harry and he always seems even more impressive than their plans.
Not really sure to be honest.
But you should take it as a compliment that I hold everything I read from you to a higher standard. Were this anyone else, it would be a really good story. But from you, and the consistency and quality I've come to expect from your writing, I find this story seems just kind of average. Not bad in the slightest, but not very remarkable.
And as always, average from you is still about the best stuff out there.
Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to your and Kokopelli's follow-up.
Jack B Nimble posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 7:13am for Part 2
I think my thesaurus is broken. I need another word for "wow," but that seems to be about the only thing I can come up with. This story could have been very different. As much as I liked Sammy in the first part, I really thought it was more of an aside.
This is very different from most of your stories, but a great addition to the library. The action and humor we expect were there, the banter was especially good (loved when Ron comments on Sammy's perception), but the scenes with Sammy put a real twist, and a very good one, on the whole story.
Best image: Ginny being chased away by Sammy's fireballs!
What's missing... More Shack interaction -- great development there. Also wanted to see Tonk's reaction after the exercise.
Sonicdale posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:47am for Part 2
Nice.
Love the part with Sammy.
The competition was great too.
So, if Harry marries Ginny, um, does that make him win? Or does she capture his flag?
:)
Good work.
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:27am for Part 2
First off, the training exercise was brilliant, quit enjoyable to read. Next, the way that Ginny handled everything was quite brilliant, if over the top, but sometimes the simplest answers are the ones that elude us the most. A very well written story, if only JKR developed Ginny so well... Thank you.
Stone Cold posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:21am for Part 2
Not bad at all. I would have preferred more Hope, but not a bad fic.
At least your Ginny is more fleshed out than JK's Ginny Sue.
Antosha posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:17am for Part 2
Wonderful!
I loved the training exercises--and it was perfectly IC that Ginny had set the whole thing up.
And of course, the conversation with Sammie was a lovely payoff.
I look forward to the collaboration!
Louis IX posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:15am for Part 2
I like it a lot, again.
Crys posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:12am for Part 2
Very nice fight scenes.
Kinda roundabout way for her to get to talk with him. It's made to work, I suppose, just feels a little weird.
"Are you trying to spread your legs for a one night stand with me?" Harry asked. "A lot of trouble to go through for that."
"No," Ginny said, feeling herself blush. "Not the one-night part."
Very direct of him, but it does get the point across. She didn't deny the rest of his question and flatly admitted what she DOES want with him. Rather straightforward of them. Refreshing to see an adult Harry and adult Ginny.
I like Sammy. She even had a good argument for WHY he should wait.
parakletos posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 5:33am for Part 2
A thought it was a bit subdued, but that may be down to current circumstances. Interesting that everyone you would expect was included in Harry's inner cicle except for Ginny. No wonder the poor girl felt moved to desperate methods.
darktail posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 5:22am for Part 2
Can't wait for the next update, really! I fell in love with your story! Keep up the good work, bye!
m4rk6 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 4:25am for Part 2
Cute fic. Grown up Harry kicks ass!! Will you write a prequel for this? Harry vs Voldymoldy?
Looks like Ginny has some growing up to do.If Harry isn't even mildly attracted to Ginny, hope he doesn't string her along. I mean... pretty enough, definitely good in a fight, and she didn’t bore him ... that's how he chooses a mate? Where's the sparks, the oomph, the bang, fireworks and all that crap! He should definitely hold out for better.
Mir posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 4:15am for Part 2
This was very good, but the ending ruined it a big. I didn't enjoy that you ended it with Sammy and Harry because it's a bit...i don't know...it's not a very happy scene, and i love happy scene endings. I also feel uncomfortable with Sammy and the fact the loves him. I didn't like that Ginny was being sort of stupid and i didn't like how Harry didn't really feel anything for her. I guess it was too realistic or something...
I would have liked more fluff in it, I guess.
Jamie46 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 4:07am for Part 2
Awwww :) Poor Sammy; she was trying so hard to stop what she could tell was coming. ;) Cute, in a sneaky little girl kind of way. ;) lol. I have to give you props for how Ginny "engineered" the whole contest. A manipulation, yes, which was a bad idea on her part (or at least, not a smart idea), but from the last chapter where she was such a stuck-up little twit, I was wondering how on earth you were gonna make this a Harry/Ginny story (as it obviously would be, since it was in that subcategory). :) So yeah for throwing me for a loop. ;) hehehe (Not that that's particularly hard to do, but you still managed to blindside me. ;) Good job.) That was quite the cute little read. I'm really looking forward to the last installment. O:-)
UdderPD posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 3:10am for Part 2
Excellent, as allways.
TTFN UdderPD
Lincoln posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 2:04am for Part 2
Pretty good.. I didn't even see Ginny's master plan coming! but does Harry still give all the auror's a bollicking? Nice hints of fluff through it too!
kittykatluver posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 3:23pm for Part 2