White Knight, Grey Queen
4 - Promises
i have read this story multiple times and never get tired of it my one question is what is the message they left on the painting?
that was so great--i may have to read some more before i call verizon or do real work ;)
Pansy and Daphne really played Draco well. I love it!
I absolutely *love* Daphne's comment (about herself) after she noticed Harry's Reaction to the Girlfriend Test. "Professional inserter of foot into mouth" indeed. Since I read (and reviewed) the original WKGQ, I sense that someone's done some editing. Mister B, would that B U?
I don't know if someone already asked that or even if you answer that in some list or group, but what Pansy wrote on Mrs.Black's canvas? I read and re-read this story and I always try to imagine what it could be. But you probably have a much better comeback than I ever could think of.
I have read this fic close to a dozen times, and this chapter never fails to leave me weeping.
It might be the website mucking stuff up, but Sirius's will seems slightly over paragraphed, if it could be. Also, I don't think you need to put speech marks in every paragraph, just once (or twice, I suppose) for the whole speech. I love this story :)
at first when i started to read this i was very sceptical , but i have really enjoyed reading this so far ...well done
The saints and sinners line was especially good. I almost felt sorry for Snape having to crawl through to the Chamber but the idea made me laugh too hard. I love the way Pansy kissed Harry AND Remus. They can’t seriously think they’ll break Harry and Pansy up, at least not when they seem them together. Happy death day song was evil but so funny as were the extensive Monty Python jokes. The use of turpentine was genius. Daphne made me laugh. “Wave a revolution in front of a Slytherin and the first thing they do is ask to sign up” made me laugh harder. That last scene was so sweet too.
Tim, this is about the 4th time I've read this chapter, and I still sob at the end.
Looking forward to more of "Hope" as I re-read WKGQ. It's the awesomeness. :D
Ginny's epiphany was particularly well done!
Ch.4 - - This was great with Remus coming to Harry's side, and McGonagall doing what Harry would want even though she isn't doing it for that reason.
I loved McG's determination that her potions students would do better than Snape's.
Harry did a great job of winning over Daphne. Well written
God, how I laughed at the will-reading! I just love Life of Brian!!! Especially the end song.
If Sirius was going to go Python-esque during his will, he should have told Harry to watch out for blancmanges (In the science fiction sketch, which came out eleven years before Harry was born, a man named Harold Potter was the first person to be turned into a Scotsman by man-eating blancmanges from Andromeda as the first step of their plan to win Wimbledon. Seeing as Harry is the son of a prankster, you have to wonder if the name similarity is intentional.)
Each chapter gets better and better. You tell a mean story. I love the tenderness and love, the friends being true friends. This is so much more fun to read than most of the doom and gloom stories. I am hooked, you write and I'm gladly read.
Oooh, I loved that. They're so cute together. I can't wait to read on. I'm so happy for them, it's so adorable. I loved it!!!
Chapter 4 and I'm a blubbering wreck again!
I love how you are able to blend the serious, the sad, happy sad & hilarious so it reads so well!!!
wo tim i love it this is a fantastic chapter i cant wait for more. i am also waiting for the last chapter to tmw but due to rl i can understand the wait and hope that it eventualy gives you some slack! may the farce be with you!
Good chapter. Keep up the good work with this story and I hope that the work on it is progressing steadily and up to your satisfaction.