Matryoshka Vignettes
By Jeconais
Masterful use of Kipling's If, I must say. and I hope that Snape does those two potions. For the Longbottoms' sakes.
Nice!
Just a little bit that looked weird to me, Neville didn't really go and greet Harry... I mean, at least shake his hand if anything?
Very good.
gunny
Did Snape cure Nev's parents?
That'd be soooo cool if he did!
this chapter was a bit confusing with the scene changes. I had a hard time focusing when Neville went from being with snape, to harry, to snape again and had to reread them to realize what was going on. still liking the story though
I continue to be amazed by your sheer brillance. That last line was powerful.
Wee-heee! I got to reading out of order, so I'd missed this - it's wonderful. Like the rest has been this far, I know I keep repeating myself, but it is such fun to read something that the authors
obvioulsy had a lot of fun writing.
How great for Neville to be the one to imprison Snape. Poetic justice.
Cheers!
Once again brilliant
I loved the ending quote and your description of Nevilles emotions. You managed to capture him perfectly.
This, along with the other Neville Vignette, are probably my second favorite of the whole lot. What absolutely makes it, for me, is the quote at the end. Without the quote it's still good, but the
quote really drives home the "evolution" of Neville. I just love it!
Thanks,
Meg
Very good chapter.
gunny