Nice story - the explicit part was fun, too... and I liked the two perspectives. Reading it straight through once for each POV might have been too much, though - interleaving the POVs might have been easier for the reader...
Thanks for posting.
I love this story. Thank you! It was funny while Harry messed up Voldemort and it was also tender when they were making love for the first time. Well done!
please finish writing more on this one wat happens when they classes again
You're a guy. I can tell that much just by reading this. Your writing is good, but you've a little homework to do on female anatomy before you get a gold star. The hymen is closer to the netherlips than what you wrote in the story for Ginny. When reading this fic, that little fact confused me and made me question whether or not she really was a virgin or if she had broken her own hymen or if Harry was even her first. Other than that, good job, I was blushing the entire time.
I award thee the award for best love scene between Harry and Ginny! I really felt the emotions coupled with the intense eroticism between the 2 leads. I like how you made the act so much more than just sex. Each one giving up themselves to the other. To me these are the things that define the act of makin love between 2 souls. Fantastic work and I hope others will share my opinion. :)
Part of this chapter repeats itself over again. Just an FYI.
Great first time, it could be used to educate all the young male teenagers around of how not to rush things when they are on the verge of looosing their virginity.
Ahhh... so you can write lemons. Write them very well even. Was wonderin' earlier about that in fact and this has cleared up a lot.
Sensational story. This chapter took me three sitting....but was lovely to look forward to.
Wonderful! Simply a wonderful story. Thank you for writing and please, write more, think about a sequel of this story with the marriage of Harry and Ginny and a confrontation with Dumbledore. I love Harry angry with him and I share your point of view about a lot of mistakes Dumbledore made.
That was really great. Your descriptions and the way you put both perspectives was absolutely wonderful.. It would be great to know what happened for the rest of the time they wewre "locked away".
Another sequel would be good.
Also, to guage what the reactions to their little escapade would be from Ginny's family and the rest of the school.
Overall, your writting and imagination are great..
You know you could probably do a sequel to this! I really liked it, Great Job!
Damn! This is one of the most brilliant stories I've heard! The first chapter was absolutely hilarious, and the second one really turned me on! I hope to remember all the things Harry does to Ginny: I wanna put them in practice with my girlfriend!
Please, write more Harry/Ginny stories, they are fabulous!
I am a MALE. How could I NOT enjoy this one. Thinking bout it, I believe my Lady Companion would like it too.
'Madness' really had me laughing.
And it was about time Moldy Shorts was hurt to the extream!
Even more, about time for Harry was able to find something enjoyable.Thanks for the fun read.
May the MUSE be with you
Wow, mind blown that was incredible. Such powerful tactile writing, your consistent use of concrete language made that so very powerful.
i would like to know what happens the other 6 days
Very good story I like the battle between Ton and Harry. I is very smart to do some recret before having sex.