My wife is going to complain tonight: I will be prone to giggling on-and-off as I think about the dragon!
I feel awkward calling a story adorable. But parts of your story are adorable. I also really liked some lines, "i wish i had someone to save me." despite this being a borderline crack fic, it's still pretty well written.
Keeps getting better. The first task was fun to read and Harry is really triving on learning and being a showman. Thanks for sharing!
Brilliant chapter. Loved it all; dragon slayer etc. The descriptions were exemplary of the first task. The party afterwards was marvellous to read. Introducing Gabrielle so early in the story was smart, it makes thing much more interesting with Fleur. I was nicely surprised to read that Harry planned to do his schooling elsewhere next year (that means a sequel! Yes!). All in all a fun time was had by me reading the chapter.
"And, erm, wow, what a response to the first chapter. For something that was supposed to be just a bit of fun, it grabbed a life of it's own. And I didn't think it was that good. I suspect some people will be disappointed with this chapter -"
And that is exactly why I continue to read this story and enjoy it. Because it comes across as someone writing to have fun. Really enjoyed chapter 6 and currently reading all chapters again. Thanks for writing such a silly and fun story!
No political power from the Lord Potter thing - a welcome change. His taking charge without really realizing what he's doing - fun also. Bagman repeating himself redundantly! To be precise, he's even saying the same thing twice! ;-) Great job with the First Task! For once, he manages to do something that's both safe and completely over the top. Poor Dumbledore... sometimes, seeing through it all isn't good for you. (And he's probably right about not mixing alcohol and children, too!) Hermione's great and fun. I feel a bit bad about Ron, but... yeah, I can see him do something like that. Oh, and I think I love Gabrielle. Fleur as a spoilt brat is rather fun, though. On a completely unrelated note, would you like some help with the French? (Just asking because of Fleur saying "Un petite" instead of "Un petit peu", and French is my first language.)
The only thing that bothers me about this story is how Harry treats Gabrielle. It's hard to believe any 14-year-old would act around kids like that.
Another fine chapter and interesting to see Harry teaching Gabbi. Thanks for sharing!
The thing with Gabrielle is cute.
You should clone yourself so you could get more writing done :p your stories are awesome.
Excellent chapter! I must say I like the way you are handling the characters. If I don't see Ron and Ginny other than being bashed I'll be a happy campter.
Can nor wait to see who you have Harry end up with at the end of this but it should be fun.
Awesome. Crazy, but not over the top. Reminds me of the "Make A Wish" series - it all depends on how far you'll take it in the end.
Oh, and may I request an Animagus form? I'm partial toward Dragons, but if you want to be original, Gryphon or Hippogryph seems to be a good choice. Unicorns are a bit... Pacifistic, Pegasi don't have the right symbolism (well, maybe... But no), Phoenix is overdone, as are most mundane animals. Although this Harry would certainly fit as a lion...
Nice. That's all I can say. Amusing but not over the top.
PLs update this this is one of the best story's i have read.
hey i was wondering if u plan to update man it has been a long time
I love this, you've got to continue on it!!
this is very good i look forward to the next chapter keep up the good work
This is a very good story! I am really surprised and I am enjoying it much more than the description led me to believe I would. Please continue to write more!!!