gtgrouch posted a comment on Tuesday 7th May 2013 11:58pm for Chapter 2

My wife is going to complain tonight: I will be prone to giggling on-and-off as I think about the dragon!

gara5289 posted a comment on Saturday 28th July 2012 7:20am for Chapter 2

I feel awkward calling a story adorable. But parts of your story are adorable. I also really liked some lines, "i wish i had someone to save me." despite this being a borderline crack fic, it's still pretty well written.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2012 1:59am for Chapter 2

Keeps getting better. The first task was fun to read and Harry is really triving on learning and being a showman. Thanks for sharing!

jules3677 posted a comment on Tuesday 6th March 2012 4:31am for Chapter 2

Brilliant chapter. Loved it all; dragon slayer etc. The descriptions were exemplary of the first task. The party afterwards was marvellous to read. Introducing Gabrielle so early in the story was smart, it makes thing much more interesting with Fleur. I was nicely surprised to read that Harry planned to do his schooling elsewhere next year (that means a sequel! Yes!). All in all a fun time was had by me reading the chapter.

jilumasam posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 10:46pm for Chapter 2

"And, erm, wow, what a response to the first chapter. For something that was supposed to be just a bit of fun, it grabbed a life of it's own. And I didn't think it was that good. I suspect some people will be disappointed with this chapter -"

And that is exactly why I continue to read this story and enjoy it. Because it comes across as someone writing to have fun. Really enjoyed chapter 6 and currently reading all chapters again. Thanks for writing such a silly and fun story!

Celebrithil posted a comment on Sunday 19th February 2012 8:25pm for Chapter 2

No political power from the Lord Potter thing - a welcome change. His taking charge without really realizing what he's doing - fun also. Bagman repeating himself redundantly! To be precise, he's even saying the same thing twice! ;-) Great job with the First Task! For once, he manages to do something that's both safe and completely over the top. Poor Dumbledore... sometimes, seeing through it all isn't good for you. (And he's probably right about not mixing alcohol and children, too!) Hermione's great and fun. I feel a bit bad about Ron, but... yeah, I can see him do something like that. Oh, and I think I love Gabrielle. Fleur as a spoilt brat is rather fun, though. On a completely unrelated note, would you like some help with the French? (Just asking because of Fleur saying "Un petite" instead of "Un petit peu", and French is my first language.)

Andrius posted a comment on Saturday 30th July 2011 5:01am for Chapter 2

The only thing that bothers me about this story is how Harry treats Gabrielle. It's hard to believe any 14-year-old would act around kids like that.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2011 2:17pm for Chapter 2

Another fine chapter and interesting to see Harry teaching Gabbi. Thanks for sharing!

iTz_RAVEN posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2011 3:47am for Chapter 2

The thing with Gabrielle is cute.

Addlcove posted a comment on Friday 8th July 2011 6:40pm for Chapter 2

You should clone yourself so you could get more writing done :p your stories are awesome.

potterfanchuck posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 7:33pm for Chapter 2

Excellent chapter! I must say I like the way you are handling the characters. If I don't see Ron and Ginny other than being bashed I'll be a happy campter.

David Thacker posted a comment on Sunday 27th March 2011 9:40am for Chapter 2

Can nor wait to see who you have Harry end up with at the end of this but it should be fun.

thekev posted a comment on Thursday 30th December 2010 5:06pm for Chapter 2

Great chapter

LordSia posted a comment on Wednesday 8th December 2010 9:43pm for Chapter 2

Awesome. Crazy, but not over the top. Reminds me of the "Make A Wish" series - it all depends on how far you'll take it in the end.
Oh, and may I request an Animagus form? I'm partial toward Dragons, but if you want to be original, Gryphon or Hippogryph seems to be a good choice. Unicorns are a bit... Pacifistic, Pegasi don't have the right symbolism (well, maybe... But no), Phoenix is overdone, as are most mundane animals. Although this Harry would certainly fit as a lion...

Alrissa posted a comment on Tuesday 30th November 2010 2:03pm for Chapter 2

Nice. That's all I can say. Amusing but not over the top.

Tiberianfest posted a comment on Thursday 25th November 2010 4:20pm for Chapter 2

PLs update this this is one of the best story's i have read.

Silo posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 12:14am for Chapter 2

hey i was wondering if u plan to update man it has been a long time

socratio posted a comment on Friday 19th November 2010 12:37pm for Chapter 2

I love this, you've got to continue on it!!

azrael3 posted a comment on Friday 19th November 2010 11:42am for Chapter 2

this is very good i look forward to the next chapter keep up the good work

Brady Dixon posted a comment on Thursday 18th November 2010 5:14am for Chapter 2

This is a very good story! I am really surprised and I am enjoying it much more than the description led me to believe I would. Please continue to write more!!!