joncooper posted a comment on Friday 18th July 2008 4:39am for Chapter 8

HEA was a lot of fun to read as well, thank you!

I'm looking forward to "Castles in the Sky" - with added interest having now seen Camelot.

Karenelaine posted a comment on Tuesday 15th July 2008 4:16pm for Chapter 8

Loved the ending. Really a very good story.

ginnysohma posted a comment on Tuesday 15th July 2008 3:28pm for Chapter 8

YAAY!!
=]
*claps enthusiastically* bring on the next!!!

Heather_Sinclair posted a comment on Tuesday 15th July 2008 12:13pm for Chapter 8

Nice little fairy tale. Over-the-top, and a little cliched, but what the heck, it was fun and that's what a good fic entails. Points for Gabrielle usuage.

Tlcatlady posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 7:02pm for Chapter 8

absolutely WONDERFUL!!!! I've always loved fairy tales and this was no exception. Granny crone aka Minerva was quite a nice touch, as was bringing in the Artherian legend too. Thank you so much for another entrancing story!
Tara

marchsnowchic posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 2:58pm for Chapter 8

I'm so excited to hear of a sequel. I loved this story. I'm not usually a Harry/Gabrielle fan, but this one was just fun! I can't wait for part 2!

GuardianOfLight posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 11:00am for Chapter 8

Truly brilliant, I was a bit skeptical when I first saw the name Camelot mentioned but you pulled it off very well.

Kudos

Can't wait for the sequel.

GuardianOfLight

tashriia posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 8:22am for Chapter 8

Brilliant! Love your writing style. Big thanks for this "hug yourself silly" story.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 3:00am for Chapter 8

Loved the line "Damn it's good to be me". The logical thinking into the personalities of Harry and Gabrielle were brilliant. I liked Harry yelling about the sociopath diagnosis. Fleur is so fun. The Red Riding Hood section, especially the bogey man's bogey man, was absolutely fantastic.

The McGonagall twist was brilliant. I love the idea of the others all perceiving Harry to be a true and legendary Hero (fully warranting capitalisation). The mirror rhyme was superb. Constant vigilance? LOL! Nice to see even the mirror knows about Moody. Loved the dragon section. Can't wait to see this continued. I somehow doubt that Harry is going to be the next King of England - our Queen has only ceremonial power these days and the paparazzi are, frankly, horrendous when it comes to chasing our princes. Imagine if they could chase Gabrielle! Great story. More please.

Rexnos posted a comment on Sunday 13th July 2008 8:28pm for Chapter 8

That was freakin' epic. I have read a LOT of Harry Potter fan fiction, but NEVER have I seen Harry single handedly take down a dragon with a sword. That was quite possibly the coolest thing I have ever read.

I can't wait for Castles in the Sky. This story was an excellent opener, but there was a distinct lack of Harry/Gabrielle fluff after the first six or so chapters.

Anyway, extremely awesome feel-good fan fiction there. As much as conflict and strife add to a story, a good happily-ever-after fairy tale is always fun now and again.

Later,
Rex

darthloki posted a comment on Sunday 13th July 2008 4:03am for Chapter 8

"Indeed," Minerva agreed. "And he is growing up as well. He could have taken any Gryffindor with him to invade France today, but he turned them down gently."
"Excuse me," Neville interrupted. "Exactly why is Harry invading France?"
"What he said," Bill agreed.

"I do love you," Ron said. "But Mum’s pie…"
"Did I ever mention that I kept my old school uniform?" Hermione asked him in a sultry voice.
"…is secondary to how much I love you," Ron finished.

"All right!" Zach cheered. "You know what this means?"
"What?" one of the seventh year prefects demanded.
"That Harry and Gabrielle are in there — Harry rescued his Princess, and they even found themselves a castle!"

*laughs and laughs and laughs*
A brilliant conclusion. I especially love the way none of the students in the least doubt that Harry is a Prince.

Jiapa posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 8:52pm for Chapter 8

Yay! Lovely story, a delightful read. Not serious, of course, but lots of fun to wallow in.

I'm looking forward eagerly to Castles in the Sky.

in-kinsfire posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 4:33pm for Chapter 8

Great story! I thought the whole red-riding-hood and convenient broom not flying was bizarre at first, but it all came together in the end.

Petunia Uphill posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 11:53am for Chapter 8

*big grin* I very much liked this whole story and absolutely loved this last chapter. I can't wait to see what you have concocted for the sequel!

frankocsic posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 3:40am for Chapter 8

wow, very well done with this story! the highlights for this chapter for me are: the twins (hilarious), minerva and excalibur (you've taken it to the next level with first the sword, and then the castle), harry rescuing gabrielle (from little red to camelot, everything was an adventure worthy of a prince). gabrielle wondering how best to 'position' herself was also a riot.

loved this story. a grand, enjoyable read. again, great job. thanks for sharing this with us. i can't wait for 'castles in the sky,' or really, any other story you happen to dream up.

Mordre posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 1:30am for Chapter 8

This is another story that I have truly liked. The whole prince/princess thing fits incredibly well with Harry and Gabrielle. The fairytale part more-so.

waywardson9577 posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 1:09am for Chapter 8

Oh man I really do have to say that out of all the fanfic authors I have had the pleasure of reading, you and one of your other authors on this site are by FAR my favorites. Between you and that crazy duo known as bobmin I don't have to worry about being entertained by well writtne stories set in the wonderful world that JKR created for our enjoyment. And with the crazy ideas and fantastical twist that you all can come up with I know that Castles will be another truly enjoyable story. Keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to your next story.

LDA posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 12:29am for Chapter 8

well done with the fic, I was laughing out loud in loads of places I can't wait to see what you will come up with in your sequel.

msgupy posted a comment on Friday 11th July 2008 9:34pm for Chapter 8

As to be expected with your writing - Wonderful, Marvellous, excellent editing and with this one FUN.
Thank you for your efforts. I don't review each chapter, because I don't believe I have anything constructive to say, but I check daily to see if there are updates.
I now look forward to CITS.
Regards
Yvonne Gupwell

twinheart posted a comment on Friday 11th July 2008 5:09pm for Chapter 8

Bravo! Terrific ending. Enjoyed this so much...well done!