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delta16669 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th December 2007 4:50pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

I am going to say one thing. And one thing only that bugs me about this. Ginny was unconcious for the possession. She lived through nothing except for the knowledge that she fed her deepest thoughts to a living memory, petrified a few people and almost got her crush killed.

But I still like it.

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2007 9:38pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

Haha, the names they addressed each other as in the Mmails were priceless. My favorite would have to be "I howl at the moon; You howl at passing cars."

Interesting start, I look forward to reading the rest!

Gil posted a comment on Saturday 24th November 2007 5:38pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

A Great start (: Really makes u want to keep reading !
I LOVE your writing style (:
You're grate ;)

calvertvl posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 9:48am for 1 - Surprise Snog

Updated NQM location: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3689325/1/The_Original_Naked_Quidditch_Match

(the daisygrrl.com site is defunct)

And oh, wow, this is a great start.

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 30th August 2007 8:56am for 1 - Surprise Snog

I love this fic, it's one of my favourite comfort reads. As is The Naked Quidditch Match, but daisygrrl is gone. Could you invite her to share it here?

Lady_Hope posted a comment on Tuesday 29th May 2007 5:35am for 1 - Surprise Snog

um... i went to that link you posted but i don;t see any story thing. was it moved or something?

i still love this stroy though i've read it SOOOO many times.

Karahly posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 10:44pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

This makes me smile.
*GRINS*

Atom posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 3:12pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

i might be nit-picking and do correct me if i'm wrong but isn't it correct grammar to use were instead of was in a statement contrary to fact? I was just thinking about a piece of Hermione's diaolog and I was thinking that if she is indead as smart as she is billed to be she would know that and use it properly. anyway specific line is when ginny and hermione are talking about the kiss after the invisibility cloak excursion about 2/3 of the way down

Great story so far!!!!!!!! definitely one of the best!

Jabe Washburn1 posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 8:39am for 1 - Surprise Snog

I started reading this story forever ago, on fanfiction.net. I think I reviewed it back then, which has been my excuse for not reviewing it on this site, but I guess if I'm hoping to be included as an author here, I ought to do some of that. I've actually re-read this story a few times, and it stands up to multiple readings as well as any of the best fanfics I've read.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Wednesday 24th January 2007 3:52pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

Okay, so I've only read the first chapter, no wonder I felt like I was missing things. I shall read it now.

DaZZa posted a comment on Thursday 4th January 2007 5:52pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

The link to the naked Quidditch match story is dead - anyone know where it's gone?

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:41pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

Outstanding start. I loved the MMails. Really good stuff.

gunny

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Friday 1st December 2006 12:55am for 1 - Surprise Snog

I don't do review so this is a bit strang. I have read and reread your story This Means War. It is beyond your quality of writting, that is to say i often reread your work because of your high quality of story telling but this story has past beyond even that. I have counted the number of time i have read this story even being incomplete as it is and it is over 10 times. i am not sure if it is thirteen, fourteen, or fifteen. I just started to reread it again and find your expresion of the story on Fanficauthors is by far better then when i first read it on fanfiction's site. i find it halerious and cand wait to read the next chapter and review it as well. this is a new thing for me so forgive me if i am long winded.

Magnificent the Destroyer Lord posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 12:50pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

*re-reads mail* ... ... ... ... *falls out of chair laughing at mental imagery* ... ... ... ... ... (several minutes later) ... ... ... Great - by the way, is "Anya's Naked Quidditch Match" a story, or a series of pics? I only ask, because I got redirected to a strange site when cliking on the link.

THanks

M*T*D*L*

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 3:38am for 1 - Surprise Snog

Loved how detailed you made the warning at the end of Arthur’s e-mail. Snuffles’s reply to Harry’s Mmail nearly had me off my seat laughing. In fact the Mmails in general made me nearly cry with laughter. “Padfoot the Serious” set me off again. “You howl at passing cars” had me rocking my chair – and it doesn’t have rockers! Dangerously funny story.

Fiddy posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 3:35am for 1 - Surprise Snog

The MMail format of the Naked Quidditch match was extremely funny. A friend of mine suggested that I read "This means war" for the same sort of hilarity. She was right. Thanks for the actual Laughing Out Loud. I have been particularily enjoying the sender/receiver/cc names or tags and the signatures at the end. The official bit for the MoM is just genius. Devious and clever Ginny is a hoot. I just howled at the image of composed!Hermione retreating to her bed to give in to the giggles.

star22 posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 7:21pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

Hi. I know you probably don't want to hear the opinion of a Harry/Hermione shipper, but I have to say that your story is amazing. I keep hearing it reccomended, so I decided to investigate. You created a Harry/Ginny that I could believe in. Your characters are believable. Your plot is brilliant. I am completely in love with your story.

Sean Melton posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2006 10:17pm for 1 - Surprise Snog

I decided to re-read, since it's been quite a while since the last time... lo and behold this has been edited from the old ff.net version!

A new chapter of "Hope" yesterday, and now this; I'm giddy. :)

-Sean

p.s. The artwork is a nice touch.

Sally posted a comment on Saturday 28th January 2006 10:40am for 1 - Surprise Snog

i am in love with ur story its great!!
please keep on writing
sally x

asmodeus0 posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2005 10:41am for 1 - Surprise Snog

It seems as though the quality of writing is much higher towards the end than it is in the beginning. Perhapse after you've finished the story you might want to go back and reqrite statements such as "...the sinister laugh sent chills down his back".