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LynnTerald posted a comment on Monday 26th April 2010 9:52am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

..........................................................................................................................................................wow, just wow. That was good. I have mixed feelings about Bella, but I'm satisfied with the ending. The fight was a little anti-climatic, but excellent. I especially liked the way that you explained it a little later, and just goes to show what a wonderful peice of work this is and that you did plan ahead for these sort of things. Some of the parts didn't fit quite right, but I liked the overall feel.

I like dragons, I really do,and I am glad that you included them, but the whole "dragon rider" thing felt rather like you were trying ti imitate Eragon or the Pern books. Didn't like that part, but I was able to mostly ignore those references and thought the dragons had an overall good effect on the story.

I like that there are no deaths in this story except for the Fart Munchers and Co., but...that last part was also a little forced. I think I would have been happier if you would have just casually mentioned it in passing, but, hey, it's your story.

The cow was freaking AWESOME!!! I had to read that a few times to be sure I had read it right.

As to the "Space Flight" on the dragon: Plausible since it WAS the queen dragon, but felt a tad bit forced. Nice touch though. Gave me a case of the chills.

And as this is the single longest post I have ever written, good or bad, I think I will sign off and go to sleep like a normal person.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Wednesday 21st April 2010 9:58pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I have been reading on this story for a couple of days now...and i LOVED IT!!!! thanks for all the hard effort and for finishing it...great great job!!!

Forever&3moreSeconds posted a comment on Friday 19th February 2010 1:32am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Have I ever mentioned that I LOVE YOU!
Okay, sorry, I am aware that I am very enthusiastic and probably too overwhelming. (and there's no need to worry, i don't swing that way)
Seriously, I loved this fic. I didn't read it for a while at first, because from your summary it sounded a bit like Ginny was going on the rebound or something, but my low expectations were raised about three paragraphs in. This story had everything in it! It's all too often that I look at a fic and think that if only it had more action/relationships/allies/complications... and then I find everything in here. You even managed to add a couple of pairings to my list I'd never encountered before - although I doubt intentionally - Harry/Narcissa and Bellatrix/Severus. *I shamelessly ship anything that has the potential to be hot* And, looking at Bella in the fifth movie, tell me she's not hot. So, thankyou for writing an amazing story.
Even though it did make me stay up 'til one thirty in the morning.
*excessive hugs*
Ruth =)

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 7th February 2010 8:53am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I have just finished revisiting your fine story again and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was casting about for something on the lighter side and this fit the bill quite well. I think it must be harder to write comedy than action or drama. Thanks for writing. W.

QueenRakal posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd February 2010 4:22am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I love this story.
I first found it on Fanfiction.net and then when I found your personal website link, I followed it over here and finished the story.
Ever since, I come back and re-read it just to experience the excellent story once again. (I think I have re-read it 3 or 4 times now)
Yes, there are parts that don't make sense. Yes there are parts that could be better. But, overall the story is an amazing piece of writing and I am glad that you wrote and finished it.
Thank you very much!

Rachel

ghostchicken posted a comment on Saturday 30th January 2010 11:13am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

This story truly had it all--humour, romance, angst, violence, intrigue, suspense--the works, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I loved your final battle with all the booby traps and stuff. The only thing missing was a 9mm pistol to blow Voldemort's head off with...but the team Cruciatus was good too.

I was a bit worried about Neville, but you gave that closure. Also, by putting Bellatrix's magic in Snape's control, you neutralised her anyway. As for Narcissa...cool!

I never had any use for Pansy Parkinson--she's a simpering idiot.

I must confess that I did work out the puzzle in Hermione's M-mail concerning "outing" Draco, even though I had no doubt that you'd reveal it later. I love Cryptograms and even play them on my iPhone. The first words I solved were easy: Draco, Ginny. After that, it was a lark.

Bravo!

James Benfield posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 9:02am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Regardless of how you feel about certain parts of this story, I can honestly say that of my rather extensive hp fanfiction addiction (surfing stories since early 2002), this is undoubtedly one of the absolute best! Yes, your writing style did change as you went along, but so did JKR's between her books, even if only slightly. I hadn't really noticed the difference until you mentioned it in your notes. Anyways, it;s incredible and I sincerely hope you keep up the great work.

James

MistressSayu posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 5:02am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Loved the story!

Mistress Sayu posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 8:29am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I loved this story!

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Sunday 8th November 2009 3:54pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

You should write an offshoot of this story, where Harry, Fred, Geroge, Lavender, Parvati, and Blaise have a Dragons Den type thing. It would be funny...

aka.thenewguy posted a comment on Wednesday 28th October 2009 7:43am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Once again something you have written, which you are then complaining about, inspires and delights. I began reading fan fiction almost 3 years ago now and it was reading things like this that made me feel like I should give something back and write something myself. This is, I believe, the fourth time I have read this fic and honestly it is still as good as the first time I read it. I look forward to any future updates on any of your fics and wish you good luck and happy writing (especially with NaNo WriMo in a few days).

kuailongkit posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd September 2009 1:22am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Great story. But now I can't get the image of Neville and a bunch of kids running towards messed up ladies (how I see banshees) with a bunch of screaming babies in picnic baskets out of my head. Thank you. Could be because its 5.30 am and I have classes early tomorrow...

LeprechaunJV posted a comment on Sunday 20th September 2009 9:54am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Excellent story......
Specially loved the Mmails....
Thanks & Cheers!!!

juice14 posted a comment on Thursday 10th September 2009 11:45am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Fully agree with your note about the very different styles and tones that your writing took on from chapter to chapter. That said, each facet in turn was used well. I'm quite partial to the scenes wih dragons as they remind me a lot of Anne McCaffrey's Dragonriders of Pern. Great piece and I hope you don't mind me comparing you to some of the best fantasy fiction I've ever read! Its sad that you won't be doing more H/G (sorry heavily biased) but I can see where you're coming from.

I'd also like to say you got some hilarious art for this story and I hope you don't mind if I borrow those for Facebook or somesuch. Are they yours? Would like to give proper credit. Great work and I really enjoyed your story!

delrusant posted a comment on Wednesday 19th August 2009 7:49am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Loads of fun on the firsts chapters, a bit less humoristic at the end and still an overpowerfull Harry, but really pleasant to read.

switchhammerhit posted a comment on Friday 14th August 2009 4:37am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I've read again, a well done story!

Harriverse posted a comment on Saturday 1st August 2009 2:08pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

To know that you and your assistants spent years writing a story that I read non-stop in two days is incredible. Tight plot, no loose ends, well developed characters, very delightful ending, and few typo's makes for a classic. Thank you!!!

ggilon posted a comment on Sunday 26th July 2009 4:24am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

it was WONDERFUL

I didn't enjoy a fic so much in years, this is the best fic I ever read, and I think never will!

This was adventurist, interesting and wonderful...
And as a quote of Ginny:
Thank you! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!

Thank you.

Silo posted a comment on Monday 20th July 2009 10:32am for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

nice i hope to see an update to the other fics u have

Paul Blay posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 2:14pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Overall I liked it (or I wouldn't have read to the end ;-). Of the bits that I wasn't quite so keen on 'Harry the Dragon Rider' bit was the most annoying. *cough*McCaffrey*cough*.