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Justin3 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 9:19pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Wow...kind of hard to believe it's over, but I couldn't think of a more fitting end to one hell of a well written piece of fanfiction!

You did a fine job of tying up the important loose ends of this story, so really, no sequel is really necessary; it would be just like every other happily ever after, post final battle fanfic currently out there!

Loved the last little bit of humor to end this story and over all enjoyed the flat out ROFL moments mixed in with equal parts angstiness action and whatever else I failed to mention...

Once again, fantastic job on this story beginning to end; I look forward to more of your masterpieces in the future!

Arlene posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 9:17pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

How I am supposed to translate all of this? (I know, I know, nobody asked me to) Still, great ending for a great story. I particularly liked the last part... very clever to have the "smutt" without actually having to read it. ;-)

darkgoddess03 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 9:10pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

OMG! that was such a good story. I'm glad I picked it up on Fanfiction.net and finished it through your website. Congratulations on finishing the story. I really loved it and thought it hilarious at times as well.

Tanaxanth posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 9:08pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Thank you.
I have enjoyed this story greatly every time I read it and am just thrilled to see its conclusion.

Tiffls posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 9:05pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I appreciate all the hard work you have put into this story; as it has been great to read.

Thank you for writing!

Wolfric posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 9:00pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Wonderful! Wonderful! I like it a lot. I admit I am a sucker for happy endings. I like the dragons as well as many other parts. I have enjoyed all of this story and I thank you very much for writing it. I look forward to any future stories you may write. W.

Viridian posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:56pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Tim, you have *nothing* to be embarassed about. At all. The writing style changes? Characters evolve, and they evolved a *lot* during this story, so it fits.

What matter is that I sat here for an amazingly long time, chortling to myself and laughing out loud multiple times. This was marvellously entertaining! I'm on a fanfic high that's even more obnoxious than Bellatrix's attack of 'I just got de-Marked'. (Which was damn funny by the way. And getting me to laugh at Bellatrix doing anything but dying messily - without going major OOC - should be considered a major accomplishment as well!)

Percy as Minister was a surprise - I thought Harry was going to go for Amelia Bones, but now that I look back, I can see the hints I missed. That means you did it *perfectly*.

Sirius giving Shacklebolt a sack of 'Scooby Snacks' for his undercover role was priceless, as well as the Warden's unknowing pun regarding "pesky kids". (Pop Culture Reference for the win!)

It just figures that Hermione would be closet Monty Python fan. And she finally got one up on the Twins, too!

"The final taunt to Voldemort: Your mother was a hamster and your father smelt of elderberries..." BWAHAHAHA!

Oh, and "Delusions of adequacy"? - *dons a smug look as one of his favorite insults has infected another mind...

In other words, Tim, you have once again proven, beyond all shadow of a doubt, that "You da man!!!"

/exits gushing fanboy mode

totallyunique1 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:48pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

good god i love your story! :-D

Sean Dillon posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:37pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Tim,

Glad to see it finally finished. This is one of the first fanfics I started tracking updates for and it still has my favorite fun scene (DA luncheon).

I had looked at the dragon space flight as a bit of a take-off on the dragons of Pern so was a tad confused when the dragons had to have time to recharge their flames. Especially when comparing the short duration of the attack on the dementors and the amount of flame they'd have had to create to put the wards up around the reserve.

I'd need to re-read the from about halfway through but I don't understand the reference to the known and probable horcruxes that Dumbledore looked at in the final few paragraphs. I don't recall having read anything about them earlier in this story.

Sean

philh1985 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:23pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

First of all, Thank You for writing and completing this story. Yes the writing and the humor did evolve as it went along but that just meant that lots of different types of humor as we went along reading it!

There were so many wonderful things in this section, such as Percy getting set-up that way, the hamster/smells of elderberries speech (WITH flying cow for good measure!)and having Oliver Wood and Victor Krum on Harry's team.

All in all, I can tell you this has been a great ride, from beginning to end. And while I agree this doesn't need a sequel, I would love to read more Harry Porter stories from you soon. In fact you are the one who got me into HP fanfiction. I came in for Wild Horses and took a look at your HP stuff and the rest is hysteria. <g>

Again, thank you for doing all the work to write and post your wonderful stories (and hosting a great website too!).

Phil

Akalon posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:20pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!

Even though I think it sucks that your not gonna do a sequal I still thank you for the great ending to it, and I'm sure Ginny would thank you also ;)

Any chance at all of you doing a lemon of that part?

I'd actually read this when you first posted it on FFnet and then after you moved it I had to find it again, I must say I'm quite glad that I did in fact find it and do love this story.

If possible could you point me to some of the stories that you like both on here and if any of FFnet?

Sheena posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:16pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I liked the story the first part and the last! Over time everyone's writing style's change so that is to be expected. I truly think that if you wrote a novel of your own it would sell throught Europe and America!

freakyfinger posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:15pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I absolutely loved this battle scene. It was a total slaughter of old V's troops and strategies. Not to mention, save for Bobmin's SoB, i've never seen such an epic army and battle in any other HP fanfiction!

Love it!

Hannah3 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:11pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

I loved Ginny's last m-mail. In all honesty, I loved all of it...especially the Danny Boy remake...we're singing that song in choir this semester, and I think it is a gorgeous song. I am (im)patiently waiting for the last chapter of Hope. Actually, I'm just waiting for your next story, regardless of the pairing.

Cheers,
Hannah

Carlos posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 7:57pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

OMG, I cant believe that this is finally done...Its like is done and now im happy with it...I cant remember how many times I read the first 8 chapters waiting for chapter 9, then the wait for chapter 10...but its finally done and I absolutely loved it, best overall story that I have read, it had everything!!!!
GREAT JOB!!!!

tkzdeathclan posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 7:54pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

An incredible ending to a fabulous fanfic. It is rather unfortunate, though understandable, that there won't be a sequal, but there are plenty more of your stories to enjoy. Thank you for being such a fabulous writer.

Jeremy Desat posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 7:54pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

Well, I like it, as I've liked ALL of your work.

Now I can only hope that you have more time for.... er..... Hope.....

In any case, keep up the good work!

Meg posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 7:53pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

What can I say.

Your author's notes have summed up a lot of what I was thinking - between the first nine chapters and this, and that you have an odd mix of comedy, action, romance and just silliness.

All-in-all, I think it works. It works because no matter where you are as an author now, you've kept so many of your original plot ideas, and even working a couple new ones in, it still ties the story together. There *is* a big difference in writing styles, but I think that you've kept the original "feel" of the story, and that's really what counts.

TMW was one of my first and favorite stories. I'm glad to see it finished. That being said, I'm glad to see you grow as an author since you've started this, and stories like the "These Dreams" trilogy prove that you can still write and H/G, after a fashion.

You are, above all other authors, the one who made me realize that it's not the ship that matters - it's the quality of the writing that counts. And these final chapters with "better" Bellatrix and Narcissa prove that.

Anyway, awesome chapter, awesome ending. What you wrote (final battle wise) isn't what I'd expect from you now, however, I can't imagine what it took to blend now!Tim with old!Tim and come up with something that's both entertaining, gripping and well-flowing as this was. It absolutely worked for the context of the story, and for me, that's what's most important.

Thanks Tim (and garden girl for visiting him and getting the juices flowing and the betas for working with such a huge "chapter"). I'm personally both happy and sad to see it finished.

Meg

Fishburne posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 7:42pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

As a rabid hater of good fiction ending, I just have to say.

Dang it. Why oh why does it have to end?

Love your work, cant wait to see whats next.

Fish

AK posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 7:33pm for 10c - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 3 of 3)

A very enjoyable read I am also glad that it's finished, we can start annoying you about Hope now :)