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Dave Harris posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 3:14am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Thank you. That was excellent. I particularly enjoyed the references to certain other authors (Messrs Chessman and Shocke), and the sweet way of finishing off this part of the chapter.

Looking forward to seeing what Percy and Shacklebolt find up at Azkaban.

Hope you've had an enjoyable Christmas.

M. Scott Eiland posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:43pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

A masterful chapter--and a nice twist on the "Harry has no limits that he doesn't place on himself" plot point: it was a rather nasty surprise to Ginny and the others to realize that it could backfire on them in that particular way.

A lot of people are bringing up the poker hand comment by Minnie--given the way she phrased it, I'm assuming that she was saying that Albus mistakenly *thought* that she had a full house that would lose to his four jacks, when in fact she actually had a better hand (higher four of a kind or a straight flush). That's certainly possible in any number of poker variations where exposed cards may lead one to come to erroneous conclusions about what the other player is betting on (Texas Hold 'Em and Seven Card Stud can both allow both exposed and hidden cards to paint a misleading picture of a player's hand).

duke_bonez posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:12pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

AH! IT'S ALIVE! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!
...sorry...I had almost given up hope, but praise be! Thanks to all the lightnings and the lucky lighning rod =]. Can't wait for Parts 2&3.

Claire1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:07pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

YAY! NEW CHAPTER!!!! Excellent, as always. I loved what you did with the scene between Harry and Dean's little sister. So, Harry knows he can now, at least unconsciously, defy all the laws of magic. The question is, can he do it now that he knows? And, can he do it consciously? Interesting twist with the Mrs. Robinson plot. I notice you conveniently left off the list of Harry's preferred Quidditch teammates, sneaky. Dursleys at Hogwarts with all the Weasleys there as well as the entire DA, this should be interesting. So, Voldemort has no idea his primary source of income has now been stopped? I'm guessing this is going to be one of the motivating factors for the Dark Tosser's final attack (well, that and the fact that he will be under the mistaken impression that Harry is at his weakest and certainly not capable of fighting back). I will be interested to see the conversation between Harry and Ginny about a certain secret. You have done such an amazing job on this fic that I still have no clue exactly how Harry will rid the world of the Dark Tosser, as I'm sure is the general idea. In so many fics you know a few chapters in (at the very least a few chapters from the actual battle) how it will be done, but you have us so distracted with other things that we don't even think about that and when we do we have no clue how you are going to make it happen. Anyway, this is still one of my favorite fics and I am so excited you are posting it again. I was going to wait for the beta'd version since I wanted to reread the entire story to refresh my mind anyway, but I finished rereading quicker than I thought I would and couldn't resist. I normally wouldn't have jumped the gun since I am such a big fan of beta'd work (I'm somewhat of a grammar nazi and when something doesn't make sense or doesn't flow I ponder over it for quite some time) but for TMW I have absolutely no patience it turns out. So, now that I've rambled enough, excellent work!
Claire
encyclopediabrit@gmail.com

rachhess99 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 7:20pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Another great chapter, as expected! Thanks for posting it early! It made a great Christmas gift!

ahyanah posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 3:46pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

It's been such a long time I've forgotten what this story is about. Jeconais, do you sometime have to reread your works before continuing them?

cvilla1974 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 3:16pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Another brilliant chapter!!!

twinheart posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 2:02pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Brilliant fic : I love the Mmail device! Funny with a great plot! Looking forward to more! Cheers!

Lourens posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:27pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

It's bloody fantastic to see you've updated this story again after all this time. It's my favorite fanfiction that I've ever read and even better than the original books.

Thank you for updating and I can't wait to read the next part.

Your devoted fan.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:23pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Outstanding story and very touching in parts. I love how you are doing this story and can't wait to read more. You ARE doing several sequels...Right?

gunny

finally_sso posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:00pm for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

This chapter was great. I like this story.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:55am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Excellent beginning with a fight scene, Draco being gay, Harry's quoting the Graduate, Minnie's perfected the art of winning against Dumbledore at poker. Wonderful. What was even better was Harry's plan. Best of all was Wolf-Harry's fight against Fenrir Greyback. Superb idea. I also loved the business with the Teddy. Massive mistake on Harry's part but it will be fun watching the consequences.

kainboa posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:23am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

brilliant chapter, i really loved the scene with the teddybear.

keep up the absolutely amasing work :)

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 8:12am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

A most wonderful part of a chapter. Thanks for sharing

'Mione

Lee Steele posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:25am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Wonderful, I am so glad you are finishing your story, it is one of my favorites. lee steele

RMM posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:12am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

So Happy So Happy!!!! I thought you gave up on this one. I have reread this story without Chapter 10 at least twice. I love the story and this chapter was great a few errors, but nothing that stumps you. I hope that you will update a little faster that this one please ;-)
Good work Thanks!!!

Uwe H. Kloss posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 5:20am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Jippiayeeehhh!
I nearly gave up on this one!

I usually am a bit of a stickler for correct grammar
an spellchecking, but for this one I'll always make
an exception.
So just post and redo it later if necessary.
It's better than some others WITH beta anyway.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 4:58am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

A wonderful section here, loved the way that things are going, as well as that moment of horro Harry has, which does show that he feels emotions, as well as he's still a young man, that's been forced into a horrible situation, but is doing the best that he can.

Chris1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 3:21am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

Woo!!!

*parties*

Now, I can't wait to see the rest of this *grins*

Very good work :)

Chris

paul2 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 2:10am for 10a - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 1 of 3)

hey great story as always cant wait till its finished
just a note you said in the story "he was under the impression that his four jacks was going to top my full house" unfortunately four jacks does beat a full house mite want to fix that for the final betad version
cheers peace