cwejr posted a comment on Friday 11th January 2008 6:40am for The Darkness

I could, very easily, develop a real hatred for you. You have such engrossing stories that really grab me, and then just stop. The frustration factor is extreme. I'm going to have to stop reading your stories for a while to allow the heartburn to die back a little before I have a stroke. I am reading your stories in reverse chronological order and seem to be hitting a lot of abandoned, hiatus, drabbles and it's driving me nuts. I don't understand: the stories you abandon or decide aren't good enough to continue are better than the final output of most other authors, yet you don't feel they are good enough! Your standards must be set extremely high, but the stories you complete are generally superior to canon and (in my opinion) absolutely superior to every book after #3.

When / if / as soon as you start writing professionally, you can be assured of at least one dedicated fan. I love your work, even if it does frustrate me occasionally.

Regards,

cwejr

Emma Sue Baldwin posted a comment on Sunday 30th December 2007 12:13pm for The Darkness

I have no idea why you would abandon such a spectacular story!!!! Please think about finishing it!! PLEASE

Aelita posted a comment on Thursday 1st November 2007 1:16pm for The Darkness

I really do like this story and I think that you should contine it even if it is in the abandoned section! I Just Love it!

texasranger_10 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 11:49am for The Darkness

i just wished you had continued it for a little bit longer. i so wanted to see hermione go off about what all they did during the summer.

i love it when she gets into a good rant at harry.

11dan88 posted a comment on Sunday 12th August 2007 8:56pm for The Darkness

theres only one problem with this story .... its under the abandoned section ... great story hope you change your mind about it

wolfey posted a comment on Monday 30th July 2007 11:41pm for The Darkness

hey I love this story but why is it abandoned? I think this could be one of your best stories if you continued with it. But if you dont want to, can you give it to someone else to adopt? Because I really want to see whats goin to happen.

Menelvagor posted a comment on Sunday 22nd July 2007 3:25pm for The Darkness

I'm bummed that this was never finished and agree on all points with James Barber, And I to am wondering what WK,GQ is.

Exarikun posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 3:11pm for The Darkness

damn, too bad this is filed under abandoned... i could see a great story coming from this. ah well, it's your story to do with as you will... perhaps you'll change your mind on it some day

Tyler_A posted a comment on Tuesday 17th July 2007 3:03pm for The Darkness

I really like this and I believe that it would end up as a great story. I'd really like to see Mrs. Weasley's reaction to all this is, though.

Chris Steadman posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2007 8:34pm for The Darkness

Honestly, I hope at some point you do change your mind about this one and decide to pick it up again, even if it's in an entirely new direction than it originally entailed.

It *more* than succeeds in the goal of any literary work: it has most assuredly entertained this reader. Someday I'd love to see where this could go if you put fingers to keys on this once more. If not, such is life.

Abandoned or not, it's *very* good.

Jiapa posted a comment on Friday 11th May 2007 5:35pm for The Darkness

I know that this is abandoned, but I just wanted to let you know that I read what there was of it today, and you were right -- the connection between Harry and Ginny was a bit abrupt, but the concept that darkness isn't necessarily evil, although done before, always has room to be done well, as it was done in this story.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading what there was of it. I understand that you aren't planning to write further on it, but I did want to say that I consider it an entertaining half a story and look forward to whatever you write next.

JPLBMX posted a comment on Monday 30th April 2007 9:25pm for The Darkness

i thought this is a very good story so far and would love to see it unabandoned

wolfey posted a comment on Tuesday 24th April 2007 7:53pm for The Darkness

why do you not want to finish this story? i think this would have been a great story
If you are not goin to finish it can you show it to some other author who might be interested? cuz it looks like it will be good

Prince Charon posted a comment on Tuesday 24th April 2007 4:36am for The Darkness

Cute. I like it.

ahyanah posted a comment on Tuesday 24th April 2007 1:36am for The Darkness

v.nice

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 1:52pm for The Darkness

Intrigued by the way Harry absorbed the darkness and saw it in Ginny too. Finally, a properly explained reason why Lily's sacrifice couldn't have been enough alone and no wishy washy "er, ancient love charm?" stuff. Loved it. Also loved Harry's nightmare that seemed almost like long lost memories. The confrontation with Draco was great fun. Wish this was finished as I think it's brilliant and you made the marriage thing really work. More please if you ever get the urge. Excellent story.

Dellaran posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 10:44am for The Darkness

I guess I understand why you'd be reluctant to write "yet another H/G fic", and I'm certainly glad you gave us WKGQ. I disagree, though, that this would have had "few redeeming features".

First of all, I like the Ginny in this story for her independence and her humor; she's more Harry's equal than she often is made out to be.

Also, the concept of the "darkness" as power could go in some interesting places too. Is it *really* completely free of intrinsic evil? Or is it going to present some sort of moral challenge to Harry and Ginny that they don't yet see? They may be nearly omnipotent, but they're not omniscient.

And what's up with the goblins? They clearly see Harry as an opportunity for something. What do they want? And what will the rest of wizarding society do if Harry helps them get it?

Anyway, thanks for sharing this fragment; even if you never pick it up again, it was a fun read.

James Barber posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 10:10pm for The Darkness

I don't know this was pretty damn good, it such a shame you have abandoned it. To me this was as good as "This Means War" and to me that means alot! In my opionion TMW is the best hp fanfiction on the internet!

john17 posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 4:02pm for The Darkness

Good story, Not sure what WK,GQ is though?