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harryp123 posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 3:49pm for Second Time Around

Good chapter. I wish you would continue with the story.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 9:37am for Second Time Around

Ginny taking the twins down was so funny. I like it but I suspect the work necessary to make Ginny and Harry's new lives realistic is probably not worth it considering how many other redo fics there are. I agree re: Viridian. Good beginning though.

Fishburne posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 9:25am for Second Time Around

WAHAHAHAHA!

Come on!!!! somebody's gotta do this!

awesome work!

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 7:15am for Second Time Around

Loved it, I didn't think that 'redo' stories could get any better - however I was wrong. Although this is a little taster it is better than some full length 'Novels' that I have read.. Although you say that you are not going to continue on this, it would be nice to see a completed version of this story......

mrrlyn posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 12:31am for Second Time Around

It would be a pretty good story if you finshed it

spritestar posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 10:04pm for Second Time Around

despite what you think, i feel this story could have made a wonderfull full storie. Maybe when you finish some of your others that your working on, you'll re-read this and see the potentail that i'm sure other readers see as well, and may be wish to expound on it. This is truly a great start to a wonderfull story, and i wait with bated hope that you will eventualy upgraid it into a story, even if its a short-3-4 chapter one.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 8:49pm for Second Time Around

Going through the torrent of new drabble postings, this is the first with material I haven't seen before one time or another.

Even if you don't feel like continuing it, this is impressive. Your rejects are as good as most people's best works. :-)

I won't beg you to continue it--I completely agree that you should work on what interests on. But I will say that I really appreciate you sharing these and collecting them all in one place. Thanks.

James Barber posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 7:25pm for Second Time Around

Hey its to bad about not being out there so to speak as in your a/n cause in my opionion you have one hell of a start for a redo fic.

uberwald posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 6:50pm for Second Time Around

this is about the best story for just before travelling back in time that I've read, though i can see why it tapered off :)

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 5:41pm for Second Time Around

I've already adopted one bunny of yours....if by the time I finish making stew out of it, nobody's taken this one off your hands, I'll give it the same treatment.

Convexbaka posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 5:09pm for Second Time Around

I <3! Please do a redo/alternate story like this!

texasranger_10 posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 4:54pm for Second Time Around

oh god this would be great as a kind of parody. i almost couldn't stop laughing at what they did to malfoy and then the twins. damn your good.

Sideline posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 3:38pm for Second Time Around

I always have mixed feelings reading your drabbles because no matter how great I think they are you've got a million other plots to chase already.

Needless to say if you ever pick this up I'll be a faithful reader and reviewer.

KenF posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 3:33pm for Second Time Around

I have to disagree... this would make an extremely good opening to a Redo!Harry story. There is only so much you can tweak with the concept, and you are having Harry be much more obvious than other versions. You could have great fun driving Dumbles bonkers while he ties to figure out what's going on. Bringing Ginny along with is a good add-on.

john17 posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 3:08pm for Second Time Around

Seems like a good start, simlier to others like it but seems better written overall. seems a shame you won't finish it.

wolfey posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 2:15pm for Second Time Around

hey i like this story? y arent you goin to do it? I would def read this story if you make it in to an actual story.

Treck posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 12:26pm for Second Time Around

I have only one problem with this, and thats the fact you didn't get to Potions class.

I'd have loved to see Harry & Ginny deal with Snape.

ED PLATT posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 12:23pm for Second Time Around

AWESOME STORY!!! it has so much promise it would make a great full length story.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 11:33am for Second Time Around

I really like this story I hope maybe you will get the earge to cont. with it. I have read a lot of Harry goes back in time but not both him and Ginny.

MPF

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 11:31am for Second Time Around

I really think this is excellent. It is a shame that you are not going to carry this forward. I've read part of this before. I think you posted part of it on your group or forum, just up to where Harry was still at the Dursley's. I like it.

Thank you for sharing.

Mike (MoA)