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power214063 posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 4:58am for Second Time Around

please make this reglalarly updated story

Aelita posted a comment on Thursday 1st November 2007 4:07pm for Second Time Around

Please do that other story or at least finish this one! It could be very interesting!

hotaruchan posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2007 2:52pm for Second Time Around

Actually, this has one of the best set-ups I've ever seen for the two-man(one man one woman) reset, and if you're not going to use it yourself, I think you should let it on the market as a continue on your own prologue/ challenge.

On a secondary note, I have an open idea that I've been passing on to various authors that I have yet to see happen for a reset. We've seen the 'everyone's dead and I killed Voldemort, but have nothing else to live for reset, the OOPS reset both Voldemort wins and there's nothing left for me reset, the we won and did well, but can do it better next time reset (the worst idea I've seen done yet), but I've never seen the "We've got the happy ending already!" reset. Which has several possible causes. My favorite one though, is the, I've lived my life, and can now go on to meet my parents and loved ones from old man Harry, only to wake up screaming from the killing curse rebounding off of his forehead. The story would be a very confused start, leading to several problems. 1. he knows how to deal with Voldemort but doing so will just mean ending up back as a fifteen month infant in the (he thinks) 2. Why his life reset to when it did on his death, and why at that point? 3.Will dying do it again? And if so what's the point to his life? This story would have it that death could only occur to a souls once, and that Harry's DID in fact die then, but his mother's sacrifice spell anchored it to his body. Every time his body dies, his mother's sacrifice latches on and drags it back to the point in time just before her sacrifice was made so he can move on, only for the sacrifice to happen again, it would ultimately end with Harry having to find a way to remove the spell that is entwined with his very soul to allow his to die and move on, at the end of his natural lifespan and not on the spot, as time was literally forced to rewind and an the other passed on souls would have none of the shared memories. I'm not a writer, and there would need to be a lot of work done, but there is a workable plot in it. If you use, merely quote Mikaerusan as the idea origin. Thanks. And if you would like a beta-reader, email me at mikaerusan@gmail.com, as I would love to help along a writer who'se stories have been a pleasure to read for so long.

Atom posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 7:22pm for Second Time Around

This is definitely a cool story! I'll admit I'm usually a fan of the redo storyline but this is one of the better ones out there. Though I will admit I have yet to read one of your stories I didn't like. It would be really cool if you were to continue this but I do know where you're coming from with the idea that this genre has become cliche.

riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 6th October 2007 2:01pm for Second Time Around

I think this is really good. I like that Harry & Ginny could go back in time and try to fix things, it is nice that Harry came up with a plan to get Ginny to come to Hogswart a year before her time. It funny that Ginny work just right and sad that Harry does not, it make me wonder if Harry has less power the second time around. But that can't be right because he the only one who can kill Voldemort. I like that Ginny get revenge on Fred and George for scaring her, the twins learned not to mess with Ginny. I did find it odd that Arthur would run to Dumbledore over really nothing, I am sure that an lot of kids has done magic by mistake. The wandless magic's is a shock, but then again kids don't have wand's and that means that all accident magic is wandless. The best part is when Ginny and Harry reunion and start their relationship again and from the start. This was fun to read, but then again I have like all your story's

pfeil posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 1:34pm for Second Time Around

I can understand your reluctance at doing "yet another time-travel redo fic", but I haven't actually found any where 2 people go back together, and I think you could use that to have all kinds of fun.

That said, it's unlikely that an 11-year-old Harry and 10-year-old Ginny are going to manage to kill Voldemort all the way, so it's probably a big undertaking to get it to a finish, so I can understand going for other things first.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 20th September 2007 7:29pm for Second Time Around

It was nice to re-read this - I am reminded again that a jeconais reject is better than most fanfic writer's very best efforts

thanks for letting me share in your imagination

hptrump posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2007 5:32pm for Second Time Around

Interesting start. Just think about continuing this story. A lot of people like seeing redo/time stories just to see what kind of creativity the author has. So maybe you will take this as a challenge to change the story line and make it funnier or what strikes your fancy. Looking forward to what you can come up with.

ohnuu posted a comment on Wednesday 5th September 2007 8:38am for Second Time Around

Whoa, nice bit of work here. This "story" is great, just like most of your other fics. But, like you said in your AN, to pull this off properly would take tons of work, going through the whole HP cycle again with quite major changes. Good job in terms of literal value though.

ShellyBelly posted a comment on Tuesday 21st August 2007 3:20pm for Second Time Around

You HAVE to continue this story, please!!

millie johanson posted a comment on Thursday 16th August 2007 8:35pm for Second Time Around

Sorry you don't want to write more I have read so much stress in the HP stories that this was such a delight to read.....

I think This Means War and All Night Long - Alone -& These Dream

Ginny Rose Weasley - HP & the Mists of Avalon
Farfumsan The Secret Sancluary
Musings of Apathy Family Inseparable Are some of the lighter side stories I have read and reread ..........Please Please find someone who would like to add more to your story even if you do not wish too. It is too good to stop It could go into real trainning for the younger students and as much as some say you shouldn't change things in one BITime story Harry gave dug up Toms Dads bones and trans fer an animal bone too look like a persons and gave Diggory a port key out befor they could kill him...I think they snuck out of school and went after the DE too...in 4th year after trainning people.

good luck I know you might be getting tired of HP but go to another writter befor you start writting H&Snap stories I am a real H&G fan...SO I'll read all those you write... This Drabbles and Ideas was my 500th story I have copyied......Keep up the good works
Please write more pleaseeeeeeeeseeeee
Miss Millie

Yamikeckley posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 9:01am for Second Time Around

if you are not going to use this can i use this kind of idea. but not the same? give you final approval over it?

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 6:12pm for Second Time Around

I LOVE this one! I know you seem to have 'abandoned' it, but I would dearly love to have a shot at developing it a bit. May I? If you have no objections, my email address is: minervagranger@hotmail.com. Let me know. I promise to credit you for everything, and I swear I just want to play around with the sandbox which is your story.

ernichol posted a comment on Wednesday 8th August 2007 6:48pm for Second Time Around

Wow, this is a lot of fun to read. You should really consider writing more.

11dan88 posted a comment on Saturday 4th August 2007 6:48pm for Second Time Around

wow I have never read a "redo" type story before so this blew my mind. I really hope that you find the time to go ahead and give it a shot at finishing this :)

Charles Goodroe posted a comment on Thursday 2nd August 2007 10:46am for Second Time Around

IS there anything that could be done to convince you to continue this? *g*

Samie9328 posted a comment on Sunday 22nd July 2007 4:36pm for Second Time Around

oh I really wish you would continue this! it has a great potential for a novel lenght story. I haven't ever read a harry/Ginny go back together redo, so it would be soo interseting. anyways, good show! I love your writing.

Illusia posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 2:50pm for Second Time Around

Can't help but admire the thought and effort you've put into this -- whole thing. I mean seriously, I agree with the reason you left this story lie. But even you must know that not many others would've done so. The plot is good, readable, and in time, you could do some interesting things with it. In time.
It's fun to see how you've taken the norm and twisted it around to the max. And yes, this wasn't it.

squiddy posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 12:36pm for Second Time Around

It's an interesting premise and seeing as I've read a substantial amount of your fics here, I can honestly say I'd like to see this continued. But as you said there are some moments where there isn't enough spice but with your usual flair for writing I'm sure you can get around those easily enough.

I'd love to see the explanation and resolution to Harry's wandless problem and how the friendships with the other members of the future 'phoenix resistance' eventually develop. That's would be a nice starting point to everthing once in Hogwarts. Also more clarification on the 'traitor' mentioned near the beginning since Draco was branded a traitor but we all know he's a slimy git anyway so it might be another one like maybe Snape or even a Gryff. Sirius' release, the introduction of Nymphadora, the take on the different adventures (ie: books 1-7 since 7 is coming out later today...if it will follow canon but with a twist that is), all of these are grate launch points for a good story.

I like the premise of the 'redo', while not necesarrily being strictly a future HP in a younger body. I've seen the 'voice in his head' fics where he was guided subtly, the HP in the shadows guiding a younger version and others.

Anyway, just my $0.02 here... Thanks for writing. It distracts me at work ;)

Exarikun posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 8:20am for Second Time Around

well, i'm hoping you get some ideas about the 'really getting out there', cause this, as just about any of your fics, has a great potential. hope you make a redo-fic sometime