Quizer posted a comment on Saturday 14th January 2006 5:17am for Red And Yellow

This fic has potential beyond the one-shot it is now. When you've got nothing to do (yeah, as if that'll ever happen! *rolls eyes*), consider writing a continuation of this :)

I noticed a rather severe mistake in the part where Harry told his friends about the prophecy. "...as neither can live with the other dies..." I don't think this line is even close to what it is supposed to mean... Better correct it.

so long
Quizer

DJ posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 9:38pm for Red And Yellow

I think this needs a part 2

the-ravenhaired-one posted a comment on Thursday 22nd December 2005 1:16pm for Red And Yellow

totally loved this story. it was like, brilliant dude!

Vicki posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 2:49pm for Red And Yellow

Oh yay that was great! I don't think I've ever read any Harry/Hufflepuff fics before but I was in the mood for it, and found this story. Hannah was a lot bolder than I imagined but I loved that. Brilliant story.

OngKhan posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 11:45am for Red And Yellow

I really liked this story, its not very often that you get to see a lesser known character focused upon. Particularly not the Hufflepuffs.

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 10:57am for Red And Yellow

I really do hope you decide to write a sequal to this, and also one you suggested as possible, to White Knight, Grey Queen.

Both are stories where Harry gets treated pretty well, for a change, and I have to admit I have a bias for those kinds of tales, even when the romance, or anything more intese, is muted.

BTW, if you should decide to write some stories where things get a little more adult, I can tell you that your work is well respected over on The Restricted Section dot Org, and they would be happy to have you posting anything NC-17 you write over there.

That's based on reactions when I recc'ed WKGQ on one of the threads there, cause, smut or no smut, everyone there is addicted to GOOD writing.

Jamey posted a comment on Friday 25th November 2005 8:24pm for Red And Yellow

There's not many stories out there that treat Hufflepuff with the respect it deserves. It's easy to see the brains, the glory hounds, and the ambitious assholes, but we all too often forget the people in the background who keep everything running. Ravenclaws might be the researchers who discover the cures for the deadly diseases, but it's the Hufflepuffs who listen to your problems and let you get it all out.

This, and http://www.fanfiction.net/s/555107/1/ are the best Hufflepuff stories I've ever seen.

Madelyn posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 8:28pm for Red And Yellow

Write in different directions... So does that mean that you have a few sheets of paper covered in randomly flipped boxes of text? :D *ducks whap*

Anyway, wonderful story as per usual. I love your stories that have pairings that aren't usually seem normally. Harry/Hermione and Harry/Ginny are nice, but seem occasionally slightly generic (not in your stories as much as just in the rest of fandom). And I love it when you write the twins. *orders officially* Write more of them! ;)

MPZahn posted a comment on Tuesday 15th November 2005 10:00am for Red And Yellow

:-D Awesome fic. Not a pairing i have seen much of. Well written and believable. I like this one alot. ASi do the rest of your fics.

Adam posted a comment on Tuesday 20th September 2005 1:58am for Red And Yellow

A wonderful little story, its always the quiet ones isnt it lol.

Ken posted a comment on Friday 2nd September 2005 9:16am for Red And Yellow

Such a nice Christmas present - thank you
well written, realistic (recovery a little rapid, but hey - it is fiction after all) and the hope of a seriously pranked Malfoy
Great job - thanks

James posted a comment on Thursday 25th August 2005 10:13am for Red And Yellow

A damn good day indeed when I decided to actually read an ff.net profile because I wanted to know what sort of guy could write TMW. I don't have a clue, but I'm glad there's a link to this site there. Yet another cool fic; I don't really have anything more to say other than wondering why so few people do odd ships. There's nothing new under the sun for HHr, HG is getting old fast and don't get me started on Ron and Hermione.

graup_hagrid posted a comment on Sunday 21st August 2005 7:30pm for Red And Yellow

Although it is different from other fics, I found it a breath of fresh air. I am not sure whether you read old reviews like this, but I did enjoy this fic.

Cycla posted a comment on Friday 5th August 2005 4:17am for Red And Yellow

All I have to say is that I really enjoyed reading this one shot, and I'm kind of disappointed that it will only be a one shot.

WOould love to see how the prank on The Boy That Would A Ferret turned out. Plas I would like to see how Harry and Hannah turn out in this one shot. Also some more Hannah/Narry would be most appreciated. As I have read hardly any of that pairing.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Monday 11th July 2005 1:09pm for Red And Yellow

Loved it!

Reminded me of a scene from Men In black 2 tho'!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 12th June 2005 8:50pm for Red And Yellow

One note about a little mistake, Harry tells her about his will, and then she mentions it, and Harry gets all confused, and she says she guessed. Just a small inconsistency I noticed. But anyways... It was so awesome!! I know it's completed, but I think that would be interesting to expand on. Just my thought. Um... I thought it was fantastic, and other than that, I don't know what else to say. Um... I don't know how your site works, but I figure you get emails about your reviews, so you've noticed I've been reading your stuff a lot (only your stuff for the last three days). Hope you don't mind the flood of reviews. If I were you I would love it, but one never knows... to each his own, you know. So... since I am a HUGE Harry/Ginny shipper, I decided I'm going to read all your other stories before I continue to read all your H/G stuff. Just so you know. Anyways, I loved it!

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2005 2:39pm for Red And Yellow

I woulda thought the Munchers would have learned by now that messing with Harry or Harry's friends is hazardous to your health. But then it's one thing to hear about it, and quite another to see a fellow Muncher being *executed* right in front of you. (Remember, he broke the *neck* of one Muncher in Muggle fashion: pin, grab head, and *twist*.)

Kordolin posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2005 12:49pm for Red And Yellow

Great story! I like that it is a harry/hufflepuff fic...i have been looking for one for a long time(almost a full year)and I finally found one! Anyways, keep up the good work!
-kordolin

Patches posted a comment on Friday 3rd June 2005 12:02pm for Red And Yellow

Wow! I really like Hannah! Cool way to bring a new girl into Harry's life!
These little stories are great. Gives new perspectives.

Keep up the good work.

Harry posted a comment on Tuesday 31st May 2005 1:42pm for Red And Yellow

I really like this story. Hell there is not one story that you wrote that I don't like. I like all you storys. My five favorites is 1)Red and Yellow, (2)Hope (3)This means war (4)white knight, grey queen (5) Object lessions Trilogy. This you for your time. I look forward to reading the rest of the stories